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This is not the story but the begining plot its just the basic no detail

Plz read and hope you enjoy 

if anyone has any ideas or even characters that would be great ill make a second post for characters

After the initiation of the new republic modernization program. the new republic mounted a large task force separated in to many group to seek and destroy the last of the empires remnant forces. one force led by the newly introduces nebula class star destroyer and several Bantha-class assault shuttles.there we designated to the old imperial maw instalation. the ships left coruscant with the escort of a powerful but aging Mon calamari star cruiser, as they reached the instalation the SD's comlink detected activity withing the abandoned facility. as the fleet grew closer two brutaly beaten and batterd Imperial II star destroyers emerged from the blackness of the maw cluster.  before the I II's could fire opon then the republic fleet launched several Old gallofree GR 75 transports into the hanger bays of the facility . Dozens of soldiers poured from the landing ramp of the GR 75's including 2 republic scientists. they made there way  through the facility meeting heavy resistance .of which they thought were none.one of the leading commanders and several elites stormed into the main reserche bay of the maw instalation. encountering a dozen imperial scientists gathered around a large object resembling a large arc. the republic soldiers quickly rounder up the scientists and led them onto the the transport .as that was being done the republis scientist analized the  data stored in the facilities computer. the item the imperials were tampering which turned out to be something they called a hypergate dug up and excavated from the barren planet of gree. suposidly the item was capable of interstellar travel between other hypergates, thus no other gates were ever found , the republic force engaged the  imperial fleet and decimated them with ease..they were curious how the star destroyers were so heavily damaged no ships in the galactic data base could of done such damage, as the imperial scientist were borded onto the nebula SD they were interogated on what was going on at the facility and what was the hypergate for.none answer except for one a short bith with relatively dark skin  spoke as if fear was lodged in his throat..we.. activated....gate...and ...killed ...scientists ......us...our..ships..obliterated..they ..left ..in..ships...holes...everywere..gone away..they....gost..ships.the bith collapsed .everyone was curious. another strik team was lead to the faciliy this time acompanied by a couple imperial scientists. they were  commanded to activate the "gate" and as they did the facility shook as if collided with a larg asteroid..a larg black hole began to form inside the gate..the soldiers and scientists ran for there lives to the transports.the hole began to grow devouring the facility they made it to the ship and cramed in some hyper space roots.but it was too late the black hole had cought them and begun pulling them in there ship  brought up all reserve thrusters to full but no even the might of the republics mighty stardestroyer could wisstand the strenght of the black hole as they were pulled in the hole closed behind them .sending then trough a unknown hyperspace route. But as the ship slowed back down into subspace it incountered a mass of debris and the wreckage of ships.in front of them  layed a large rust colored world barren with old factories and shipyards little that they know is that the gate had malfuntioned and not only brought them here but also the instalation.
the republic fleet pulsed forwards pushing out debris towards the planet.........                                                                on bored the nebulon star destroyer a cloaked man walked up to the bridge and rested his hand on the shoulder of the captain.and with terror in his voice he said.Captain my friend i dont know were we are  or what this is but i feel an incredible disturbance in the force..

And so the story begins from there