Revan’s Shadow: Part 14, Leaving Dantooine
Authors Notes: GUESS WHO’S BACK!!! This is when you leave Dantooine. Sorry if you wanted more, but remember, this is a ROUGH DRAFT of my series. So none of it is supposed to be that good. Listening to Hey there Delilah. Oh, and look up on youtube, CRAZED NUMA FAN. Sorry about how long it’s been….
…CONTINUED
“Deisa, I’m not a Sith, I am a Jedi Consular… and I intend to keep it that way.” you tell Deisa. “I believe you, but there is only one way to keep you on that path.” Deisa responds. “What is it?”
“Become either a Jedi Watchmen, Jedi Master, or a Jedi Weapon Master. Your choice.” Deisa responds.
OKAY, I’M GOING TO WRITE IT 3 WAYS, WHEN YOU BECOME A WEAPON MASTER, JEDI MASTER, OR JEDI WATCHMAN…
1. “Jedi Watchman.” you respond.
2. “Jedi Master.” you respond.
3. “Jedi Weapon Master.” you respond.
“Very well.” Deisa responds.
YOU LEVEL UP TO WATCHMAN OR MASTER OR WEAPON
“Let’s find the heart.” you say, walking deeper into the building. Minati and Deisa follow. You suddenly feel like you’re being dragged toward something. “What’s going on???” Minati shouts. “The Heart of Dantooine.” Deisa replies quietly. The thing drags you into a room where you see a white thing where it’s floating in mid–air. “Deisa,” you shout. “Start meditating in the lightside.”
Deisa nods and starts meditating. You meditate also. The Heart then goes an erie blue. “One down, five to go.” you say, walking out of the room. Minati and Deisa follow.
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You walk out of the grass–covered building and start looking around for any sign of Revan’s Robes. Not over here, not over there. Where? Finally, you see a small thing that’s black. You go over and pick it up.
Revan’s Robes.
March 23rd, 2008 at 11:17 pm
nice rough-draft
lol, Shiin, you have weird taste in music, sorry if that offends you, honestly.
goodbye, everyone! i leave for Washington in 4 am sharp in the morning
won’t be back until a week later
so somebody keep me updated, will they, please?
March 23rd, 2008 at 11:25 pm
hehehehehe, look up over the rainbow hawiin style on youtube.
March 23rd, 2008 at 11:27 pm
god, your leaving for a week.
man.
this sucks.
March 23rd, 2008 at 11:34 pm
this isn’t a rough draft.
it’s a rough rough rough rough rough rough draft!!!!!!!
tree hugger is a REALLY good song. here’s a link:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NpNbFG1vMTI
March 24th, 2008 at 3:37 pm
MaggOnasi, tell me how to make a Kotor Music video with like, moving stuff, not pictures.
March 24th, 2008 at 9:00 pm
Well, you need music, obviously. You get clips at one of the Kotor websites…. I don’t remember where I got clips. Or, you could copy someone eles video and use their clips
Simple?
March 24th, 2008 at 10:47 pm
NOt really
March 24th, 2008 at 11:46 pm
http://www.dimfuture.net/starwars/random/generate.php
GO TO THIS LINK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
March 25th, 2008 at 8:51 pm
maggonasi, is this you???
http://maggonasi.deviantart.com/art/I-ll-scare-you-with-my-smile-80155077
March 25th, 2008 at 8:55 pm
and artwork on yourself?
http://maggonasi.deviantart.com/art/Darth-Sam-80290522
March 26th, 2008 at 8:35 pm
maggonasi?
response???
March 26th, 2008 at 10:48 pm
Oh sorry
Maybe it is… maybe it isn’t
But god, I don’t want RevanBodygaurd to see
March 26th, 2008 at 11:36 pm
it is, isn’t it?
March 26th, 2008 at 11:38 pm
RevanBodygaurd is not going to care.
Don’t judge a person by there looks!!!
(Cheesy lol!!)
Not but seriously RevanBodygaurd is going to only think nice thoughts about the picture.
If you didn’t want her to see maybe you shouldn’t have put it on the internet…
it’s fine
March 26th, 2008 at 11:39 pm
seriously
March 27th, 2008 at 9:33 am
Yeah, but then she might not believe my real age =( I just look old for my age…
But then again, your right Shiin, lol… hope she got over the fact I broke the vow
March 27th, 2008 at 5:30 pm
I look old for my age too…
which will NOT be said.
what vow???
March 27th, 2008 at 5:45 pm
I think you look 14 or 13ish.
But it’s fine to look older than you actually are.
March 27th, 2008 at 9:22 pm
13ish… well, its atleast close to my age…
A couple months ago, my and RevanBodyguard said we wouldn’t have a boyfriend until we finished collage… but I just had to say yes and now I have a boyfriend
March 27th, 2008 at 11:30 pm
good job!!!
i guess…
iCarly.com!!!
http://icarly.com/iVideo/Default.asp
March 28th, 2008 at 9:13 am
lol
I have an account there, and Freddy says “MaggOnasi Rocks!”
lol
March 28th, 2008 at 9:13 am
lol
I have an account there, and Freddy says “MaggOnasi Rocks!”
lol
March 28th, 2008 at 1:07 pm
lol
Soran and I were doing some funny video’s the other day and one of the episodes was Soran cooking eggs.
It was hilarious. Soran was doing a funny voice like fred.
March 28th, 2008 at 1:38 pm
Lol
I would like to see that… then again don’t…
March 28th, 2008 at 1:48 pm
Have you seen this one?
http://icarly.com/iVideo/Default.asp?clipId=1000002&channelId=2&autoStart=true&playMode=playOne
March 28th, 2008 at 2:50 pm
if that is you you have an AMAZING voice.
But from the picture http://maggonasi.deviantart.com/art/I-ll-scare-you-with-my-smile-80155077 I don’t think it is.
March 28th, 2008 at 5:35 pm
Lol, I just thought that Sarah did an awesome job with that song, lol =D
March 28th, 2008 at 8:10 pm
you know her???
March 28th, 2008 at 8:23 pm
Um… no… at the beginning she says her name is Sarah… and I just think she did a good job
March 30th, 2008 at 9:13 pm
oh, k
April 4th, 2008 at 7:33 pm
To all that know my YouTube: I have closed my VirtuousxOne account. If you know any of my other accounts, contact me on there.