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Author’s Notes: I thank MaggOnasi and RevanBodygaurd for letting em use the name “Andria.” I only made one minor spelling change to Andria’s name. This is my first story about Exile/Female/Lightside. New series!!! Enjoy!!! Listening to Over the Rainbow by that fat hawiin guy who died when he was like 40 from being too fat. And I’m listening to Tree Hugger; NO I’m NOT a hippie. Uh, yeah. Read on. Copy Paste this site into your browser bar thingy. This story starts out funny but gets serious as you keep reading.

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Hidden Enemies.

Chapter One.

Discussion.

Andreia Tyrnith woke up with Atton laying next to her. “Hey flyboy,” she whispered, bending in to kiss him. He was still asleep so there was no possible way he could’ve felt her kiss him. Her lips were about to touch his when he unexpectedly rolled over onto his side; his back now facing Andreia’s mad face. Andreia gave a loud, “Hmph!”

Andreia heard Atton yawn and roll back over so his face was close to hers. “Hey,” he whispered; bending in to kiss her also. Andreia gave a fake yawn and stretched her arms out so her hand would gently slap Atton’s face.

“What was that for.”

“That my friend, was a double deny.”

Atton laughed softly, bending in to kiss her. Andreia didn’t deny this time.

*****

Atton stretched before opening the door to the living room of his Tolesian apartment. While he shut the door he found Mission Vao sitting on the couch; staring at him with angry eyes. “Uh, hi Mission.” Atton said nervously. “You promised.” Mission whipered through gritted teeth. Atton searched her eyes for something other than anger. Digging, he found amusement in her eyes. “OH!!!” Atton exclaimed after thinking for a while. “I was supposed to take you for flying lesson’s–wasn’t I?”
“Duh.”
“Why can’t Carth take you? He’s known you longer. You two are like best friends.”
To answer his question; Mission threw her head back, started sweating, and cried out in pleasure, “YES CARTH!!!! YES KEEP GOING!! DON’T STOP!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!” Mission was about to further when Atton cut her off; saying, “Okay, don’t go into any details.”
Mission then said, “I couldn’t get to sleep last night! Obviously Carth is busy parking his car in Revan’s garage!!!”
“K Mission, lets go.”
“You are AWESOME Atton!!”

****

At the time when Mission started the engine for the speeder Darth Vale was responding to his masters words in the Temple of Damar. “Master; we have hidden long enough, our enemies are wide open for attack. Why we aren’t killing them this very second I do not know.” Vale said impatiently.
“I agree with Lord Vale; we can’t be hiding out in this fuckish temple for the rest of our damn lives!!” Darth Urioye shouted; igniting her double–bladed–red–lightsaber. The Sith Master remained calm and smiled at his apprentices eager lust for blood. “Patience,” he started. “NO!!!” Urioye shouted. “I’M DONE WITH YOUR WHOLE, ‘PATIENCE’ TALK!!!!” she said; running at her master while twrling her lightsaber in the air. She brought down her lightsaber in Dem–So form; the most aggresive. The Sith Mater easily deflected it and used the Force to choke Urioye until she went unconcious. Vale stared at Urioye with amusement in his black eyes.
“To continue with my plan,” the Sith Lord said smiling. “We shall attack in 3 standard days.”

******

Andreia knocked on Carth and Revan’s apartment. She heard some rustling of covers and then footsteps. Carth opened the door. Blue pants were the only thing that were covering his body. Andreia smiled, “It’s been a year since she came back; aren’t you guys done with the whole, ‘Making up for lost times?’ ”
Carth smiled.
“Not yet.”
“I’m surprised that she’s not pregnant.”
“OH!!” Carth exclaimed. “No, we haven’t gone THAT far. Well, I haven’t gone that far.”
“So you just get naked and squeeze her breasts?”
Carth avoided Andreia’s eyes. His eyes wandered. He clicked his tongue angainst the top of his mouth. “Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh… Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm…” Carth paused. “You know Andreia; I don’t really feel that comfortable talking about this.”
Andreia smiled.
“Well, I was just wondering if you know were Atton went.” Andreia asked. “Last time I heard; he was going with Mission for flying lessons.” Carth responded. “Thank’s Carth!” Andreia said. Andreia put her index finger into the center of Carth’s chest, pushed into the room, and said, “Go back to your dirtiness.”

******

“Slow down!!!” Atton shouted over the roar of the speeder. “LOOK WHO’S TALKING!!!!!” Mission shouted at him. “YOU’RE ALWAYS DRUNK WHEN YOU DRIVE THE SPEEDER!!!!” “Okay, Mission,” Atton said calmly when they were at a red light. “I’m not drunk right now; so please don’t follow my crappy example and kill us both.”
“Fine.”

******

“Darth Vale, you have been loyal to me and have always spoken up when you thought my idea’s were bad, you never let my idea’s pass you without you thinking about them. Now most Sith Masters would kill there apprentices for not following orders; but you were a special case. Your collegue on the other hand,” he gestured towards Urioye’s unconcious body. “is a lusting for blood kath hound rebel. But not a rebel like you. Because of your actions I award you with this robe.”
With saying that, he pulled out a black robe and gave it to Vale. “It is an exact replica of what Freedon Nadd wore.” Vale’s eyes were practically dnacing with joy; a rare sight with Sith Lords. “The robe has special properties, but you must uncover them… yourself.”

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Okay, I know that my writing SUCKS. So give me your opinion on my story and if it’s good I’ll keep writing but if you think it’s bad I won’t write anymore. BE CRITICAL!!!!

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