fan fiction scrollRevan’s Shadow: Part 14, Leaving Dantooine

 Revan (Female/Light Side)Star Wars

Authors Notes: GUESS WHO’S BACK!!! This is when you leave Dantooine. Sorry if you wanted more, but remember, this is a ROUGH DRAFT of my series. So none of it is supposed to be that good. Listening to Hey there Delilah. Oh, and look up on youtube, CRAZED NUMA FAN. Sorry about how long it’s been….

…CONTINUED

“Deisa, I’m not a Sith, I am a Jedi Consular… and I intend to keep it that way.” you tell Deisa. “I believe you, but there is only one way to keep you on that path.” Deisa responds. “What is it?”
“Become either a Jedi Watchmen, Jedi Master, or a Jedi Weapon Master. Your choice.” Deisa responds.

OKAY, I’M GOING TO WRITE IT 3 WAYS, WHEN YOU BECOME A WEAPON MASTER, JEDI MASTER, OR JEDI WATCHMAN…

1. “Jedi Watchman.” you respond.
2. “Jedi Master.” you respond.
3. “Jedi Weapon Master.” you respond.

“Very well.” Deisa responds.

YOU LEVEL UP TO WATCHMAN OR MASTER OR WEAPON

“Let’s find the heart.” you say, walking deeper into the building. Minati and Deisa follow. You suddenly feel like you’re being dragged toward something. “What’s going on???” Minati shouts. “The Heart of Dantooine.” Deisa replies quietly. The thing drags you into a room where you see a white thing where it’s floating in mid–air. “Deisa,” you shout. “Start meditating in the lightside.”
Deisa nods and starts meditating. You meditate also. The Heart then goes an erie blue. “One down, five to go.” you say, walking out of the room. Minati and Deisa follow.

********

You walk out of the grass–covered building and start looking around for any sign of Revan’s Robes. Not over here, not over there. Where? Finally, you see a small thing that’s black. You go over and pick it up.

Revan’s Robes.

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31 Responses to “Revan’s Shadow: Part 14, Leaving Dantooine”

  1. nice rough-draft
    lol, Shiin, you have weird taste in music, sorry if that offends you, honestly.
    goodbye, everyone! i leave for Washington in 4 am sharp in the morning
    won’t be back until a week later
    so somebody keep me updated, will they, please?

  2. Shiin says:

    hehehehehe, look up over the rainbow hawiin style on youtube.

  3. Shiin says:

    god, your leaving for a week.

    man.

    this sucks.

  4. Shiin says:

    this isn’t a rough draft.

    it’s a rough rough rough rough rough rough draft!!!!!!!

    tree hugger is a REALLY good song. here’s a link:

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NpNbFG1vMTI

  5. Shiin says:

    MaggOnasi, tell me how to make a Kotor Music video with like, moving stuff, not pictures.

  6. MaggOnasi says:

    Well, you need music, obviously. You get clips at one of the Kotor websites…. I don’t remember where I got clips. Or, you could copy someone eles video and use their clips
    Simple?

  7. Shiin says:

    http://www.dimfuture.net/starwars/random/generate.php

    GO TO THIS LINK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  8. Shiin says:

    maggonasi?

    response???

  9. MaggOnasi says:

    Oh sorry
    Maybe it is… maybe it isn’t
    But god, I don’t want RevanBodygaurd to see

  10. Shiin says:

    it is, isn’t it?

  11. Shiin says:

    RevanBodygaurd is not going to care.

    Don’t judge a person by there looks!!!

    (Cheesy lol!!)

    Not but seriously RevanBodygaurd is going to only think nice thoughts about the picture.

    If you didn’t want her to see maybe you shouldn’t have put it on the internet…

    it’s fine

  12. MaggOnasi says:

    Yeah, but then she might not believe my real age =( I just look old for my age…
    But then again, your right Shiin, lol… hope she got over the fact I broke the vow

  13. Shiin says:

    I look old for my age too…

    which will NOT be said.

    what vow???

  14. Shiin says:

    I think you look 14 or 13ish.

    But it’s fine to look older than you actually are.

  15. MaggOnasi says:

    13ish… well, its atleast close to my age…

    A couple months ago, my and RevanBodyguard said we wouldn’t have a boyfriend until we finished collage… but I just had to say yes and now I have a boyfriend

  16. Shiin says:

    good job!!!

    i guess…

    iCarly.com!!!

    http://icarly.com/iVideo/Default.asp

  17. MaggOnasi says:

    lol
    I have an account there, and Freddy says “MaggOnasi Rocks!”
    lol

  18. MaggOnasi says:

    lol
    I have an account there, and Freddy says “MaggOnasi Rocks!”
    lol

  19. Shiin says:

    lol

    Soran and I were doing some funny video’s the other day and one of the episodes was Soran cooking eggs.

    It was hilarious. Soran was doing a funny voice like fred.

  20. MaggOnasi says:

    Lol
    I would like to see that… then again don’t…

  21. Shiin says:

    if that is you you have an AMAZING voice.

    But from the picture http://maggonasi.deviantart.com/art/I-ll-scare-you-with-my-smile-80155077 I don’t think it is.

  22. MaggOnasi says:

    Lol, I just thought that Sarah did an awesome job with that song, lol =D

  23. Shiin says:

    you know her???

  24. MaggOnasi says:

    Um… no… at the beginning she says her name is Sarah… and I just think she did a good job

  25. Nihilus says:

    To all that know my YouTube: I have closed my VirtuousxOne account. If you know any of my other accounts, contact me on there.

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