fan fiction scrollPreview of ‘Star Wars: Knights of the Old Republic: Redemption’

 Star WarsThe Disciple

Darth Gesine passed a shattered mirror and stopped in mid-step. She turned and looked at the hooded face staring back at her. Scowling, she stripped off her hood, allowing the pale, cold light to fall on her face. She traced a long scar that ran from the left side of her forehead, down across her eye, onto her cheek and ended under her chin. Another shorter scar started near the bridge of her nose and went diagonally across the same eye and ended just at her ear.
To the fools who had faced her in combat, no face, human or alien, was more disfigured and terrifying as hers. After studying the healed lacerations, the Sith Lord bowed her head as a hot tear coursed down her cheek. The tear hit the stone floor with a surprisingly loud noise. Jolted out of her brief sorrow and shame, bitterness took root.
Infuriated anew at her appearance, she pulled the hood back over her head, once more casting shadows over the wounds. Her anger strengthened by her ire, she left the Sith Academy and boarded her ship, the Phantom Rancor.
Easing herself into the pilot’s seat, she took off her cloak and ran her hands through her long, raven hair. Suddenly, the beeps and whirrs of a droid were audible from the communications console.
“T3-K4, report to the cockpit immediately.”
The astromech droid appeared in the doorway of the cockpit and beeped its greetings enthusiastically.
“Just get us off this rock, T3.” Her deep voice reverberated through the cockpit. T3-K4 made a sound that suggested slight fear; his Master wasn’t usually one of few words.
Once the small freighter was in hyperspace, Gesine wandered aimlessly throughout the ship, making sure that the cloaking device was activated. She came to the starboard dormitories and wearily sat down on the bed that occupied most of the room. She looked up at the hologram that was mounted on the wall. A beautiful girl in her early twenties stood in the arms of a tall, handsome man, about the same age. Both had lightsaber hilts dangling from there belts. There was a caption under the touching scene that read, “Ayin Khaan and Tash Sunaen”.
Darth Gesine stood and walked over to the hologram, captivated by the tenderness of it. Suddenly, her breathing quickened and she lashed out, striking the hologram projector with the back of her hand, hurling it into the adjacent wall.
“Why, Tash? Why did you betray me and leave me to die? Why?” she screamed at the smoking device. “Why did you say you loved me?” she whispered as she fell down on her bed. “Why?” she asked again, as the tears began to flow.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Please let me know what you think! (Just no swearing, please.) This is an exerpt from Chapter I. I was inspired to write this while playing KotOR II. Haha. And this Michal is not the same Mical in the video game. He’s more like a suspiciously similar twin of sorts. :D

Email: kavi.vevina.devas07@gmail.com .

Thanks again y’all!

Be Sociable, Share!

9 Responses to “Preview of ‘Star Wars: Knights of the Old Republic: Redemption’”

  1. MaggOnasi says:

    I love it!!

  2. Pheeramae says:

    Really? Thanks!

  3. RevanBodyguard says:

    I love this! so exciting! i can’t wait until you write the rest of this!

  4. Pheeramae says:

    Thank you! I have a lot more written than what is given here. This was taken from the end of Chapter I; now I’m up to about fifteen chapters.

  5. Pheeramae says:

    Thanks! I was wondering if I should publish this chapter by chapter. What do y’all think?

  6. Darth_Cyvan says:

    chapter by chapter is my opinion

  7. RevanBodyguard says:

    I agree too.
    Things run better in chapters.

  8. Pheeramae says:

    Alrighty then! I’ll post the first chapter today.

Leave a Reply

You must be logged in to post a comment.

copyright notice