The Sound of Revenge Chapter 33
Notes: Grrr… I’m being emo and listening to Don’t Wanna Think About you by Simple Plan, Mr. Brightside by the Killers, and Hemorrhage (In my hands) by Fuel. I wanted to put this up before I left, so here it is.
The Sound of Revenge
Chapter 33
Permission
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Hunter pushed open the door and saw his father sitting at the table. He looked up. “Hunter?”
“Dad!” Hunter cried cheerfully hugging him.
“Wheres Aiedail? Is everything alright? Is she okay?” Carth asked quickly, but hugging his son.
“She’s fine dad. She’s with Andria and Atton.” Hunter said pulling away from Carth.
“Okay. Good to hear she’s home. The Ebon Hawk is in one piece, right?”
“Don’t worry dad, she’s fine.”
“Not a scrach?”
“Maybe just a little scrach. Too much to fix.”
“Well boy, I’ll wipe those stars from your eyes and fix the Hawk.” Carth said clamping Hunter on the shoulder. “Is there something you need to do?”
“What? No.”
“Alright… Do you even like Aiedail?”
“As a friend, yes.”
“Not as anything more?”
“She’s been gone for ten years, I don’t think I know much about her.”
“Theres always a chance to learn.” Carth said. “Maybe you should come and watch me fix the Ebon Hawk.”
“Fix the Ebon Hawk?”
“You said it had a scrach.”
“I did… I did… um… joking… lying… shame on me! I should be grounded…too bad about showing me how to fix the Hawk, huh? Oh well!”
“Good try Hunt, now let’s go.”
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“Good morning Andria. Where’s Atton?” Hunter asked when Andria opened the door.
“He’s at the cantina… again.”
“Where’s Aiedail?”
“She’s asleep. I still can’t thank you for all you’ve done.”
“It wasn’t a problem Andria. Just glad I helped.”
“So why do you need Atton anyways?” Andria asked leaning on the door cil.
“Oh you know… guy stuff.”
“Guy stuff? Why can’t you just talk to your father about it?”
“It has something to do with permission.”
“Permission? For what?”
“You’ll see.”
Andria smiled. “Well then. I’ll see you later.”
Hunter politly excused him and headed off to the canitina.
“Atton.” Hunter said he walked up to the table where Atton sat.
“Yes?”
Hunter looked at Atton’s oppenent. “Do you mind?”
“No.” He said. “You two can talk.”
“I mean’t leave.”
“Whats in this for me?”
Hunter tossed a couple credits on the table. “Leave!”
The oppenent smiled. “Atton, how can you live without him?”
“One can only dream.” Atton said.
Atton’s oppenent left. “This better be important.”
“Are you drunk?” Hunter asked sitting in the seat the oppentent sat in.
“No. Why?”
“I want you to think strait on this.”
“This? Question or something you want to show me.”
Hunter pulled out a ring.
“I would Hunt, but one you’re too young and I’m already married.”
“You said you wern’t drunk!”
“I’m not.”
“Then don’t act stupid.”
“Who’s the unlucky girl?”
“I would like your permission to marry your daughter.”
Atton’s jaw droped to the floor. “You’re joking? You don’t know anything about her!”
“I do too! You just don’t want to accept the fact I love her.”
“Whats her middle name?”
“Scarlett.”
“Eye color?”
“Hazel.”
“Oh… you shouldn’t know this one. On what planet was she born on?”
“What’s with all the questions? Just accept that I like her and make up your mind.”
“I already made up my mind, Hunt. It’s no.”
“Why not?!” Hunter yelled.
“Because I just got my daughter back from her 10 years absence.”
“Because of me! I Ieft everything behind just to save her. I was kicked from the Jedi order, so was Zoey. I can’t see Jade anymore. My brother is probably dead because I went out to save her…”
“You would’ve killed him anyways! Besides. You gave up everything for her. Why would I let someone marry my daughter when they would give up their dream so easily?”
“Because, she is my dream.”
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Atton, be nice for ONCE.
He’s all, “Aiedail just got back–let me have some time with her.”
HE’S THE ONE AT THE F***ING CANTINA!!!!!
But god this is f***ing romantic!!!!!!!!!
Those were ALL compliments.
Saying that Aiedail is Hunters dream made me cry. *sniff* so romantic. *breaks down sobbing*
lol
shiin, you always cry when you read.
lol, The Sound of Revenge are offically my favorite stories from you, MaggOnasi. i love this part best:
Hunter pulled out a ring.
“I would Hunt, but one you’re too young and I’m already married.â€
“You said you wern’t drunk!â€
“I’m not.â€
“Then don’t act stupid.â€
“Who’s the unlucky girl?â€
“I would like your permission to marry your daughter.â€
so dreamy…
i’ll miss you now you’re gone to California =(, excellent state by the way =)
Shiin, when you read stories like this, do you have to cuss? maybe that means it’s so beautiful or something… ♥ღ Åø۷ℓ ღ ♥
Uh, I didn’t cuss, the stars are there for a reason!!
Soran I do NOT cry every time I read a story.
I didn’t even cry on this one.
Lol Shiin, thanks for the comment
Hey Revanbodyguard, looks like I found out my pass =D Ooo, no one liked my stories… not to mention no one liked my *hugs Revanbodyguard*
Oh, and dont worry Shiin, its okay to cry. He he
thank you!