fan fiction scrollThe Sound of Revenge Chapter 34

 Atton RandCarth OnasiStar Wars

Notes:  My sister helped me a little bit…  Listening to the Fray’s Over My Head and How to Save a Life (and watching American Idol).  My sister also wants me to bring Revan back to life featuring she doesn’t even know how Revan died!!!

(Sam’s sister) Tell me on a review if you want Revan to come back to life and we’ll figure something out. PLEASE SAY YES!!! So my sister will do this. It’s all up to you. Now make me proud.

Now this is Sammy…. PLEASE SAY NO!!!  I will love you more… wait… that will make you want to say yes… erm…  Please read chapter 34

 
The Sound of Revenge

Chapter 34

A little while longer

 
“Dad!”  Hunter yelled jumping onto Carth and shaking him to wake him from his deep slumber.

 
“Hunter, Hunter.  Get off your old man and tell me what happened.”  Carth said sitting up and rubbing his eyes wishing he wasn’t his father dismissing the thought after a few seconds and started to stare absently.

 
“Atton said yes!”  Hunter cried happily.

 
“Atton said yes? Wow you sure know how to wake an old man up.”

 
Hunter sat down at the end of the bed.  “Yes, I can marry Aiedail.”

Carth looked shocked.  “Marry Aiedail?”  Hunter nodded looking eagerly across the bed at his father.  “I don’t know how I should tell you this, but I don’t think you should marry her.  I mean, ten years?  It’s unbelievable she’s even back!  I’m not telling you that you can’t marry her, but you should take it slower.  Ask her out or something.  Take her to that new restaurant that opened not too long ago.”

 
“Why do the good things have to wait?” Hunter groaned.

 
“Well Hunt, the good things in life are worth waiting for.”  Carth said clasping Hunter on the shoulder.

 
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“Dad, you’re doing it again.”  Aiedail looked up to see her dad standing at the doorway staring blankly at her.  She threw the covers off and sat up motioning for her dad to sit next to her.

 
Atton walked in and sat next to her.

 
Aiedail sat there waiting for Atton to say something.  “Is there something you want?”  Aiedail finally said.

 
He looked at her.  “Hunter asked me something and I couldn’t refuse after what he said.”

 
“What did he ask you?”

 
“He wanted to marry you.  I said no at first, but how much he loves you, I couldn’t say no.”

 
Aiedail’s expression didn’t change.  “Where is he now?”

 
“He went home.  If he told Carth, I guarantee you, Carth probably got Hunter to change his mind about asking you.”

 
“Dad, that’s rude!”  Aiedail said half smiling.  Atton started laughing.  “What’s so funny?”

 
“Just happy to be with my daughter again. I know I’ve been a little over protective…”

 
“A little?” she said in an amused tone.

 
“…but its just that I can’t stand to lose you again.” He pulled her in a tight squeeze.

 
“I know dad. I know.” Giving an even tighter squeeze as they both hugged each other.

 
He quickly pulled away from the hug and said, “Good night, Sweetheart.  I’ll see you in the morning.”  Atton said planting a kiss on her cheek and stood up to leave the room.

 
“Good night, dad.” She softly said as she pulled back the covers to fold over her body.

 
He walked toward the door but before he could totally walk out of the room he stopped and looked at his peacefully sleeping daughter. He stared at her for a few minutes and soon pulled away toward the door but now before saying, “I love you.” And quietly walking out the hall.

 By MaggOnasi and BrokenSky

Short isn’t it?

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14 Responses to “The Sound of Revenge Chapter 34”

  1. Darth_Cyvan says:

    I was really touched by this chapter. I’m a little unsure if you should bring Revan back.

  2. Darth Shiin says:

    hole e f**k!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    now I am SERIOUSLY crying.

    Soran cry, oh, wait, you don’t cry.

    but when I sent you that story about when *whisper* you–know–who dies, you said that it was sad, which is a compliment from you, since your awll EMO.

    lol.

    jk =D

  3. aww, this story is sooo heart-warming and super short! it touches me too.
    hehe, i love this chapter to bits – you and your sister did an excellent job in this! so many details…
    and Atton is sooo huggable! i didn’t know he could be this sweet… and understanding (can’t explain how much i love it, hope you two understand what i’m trying to say) *pats Shiin’s back* okay, it’s alright to cry this one out – very emotional that it almost made me cry!

    as for bringing Revan back, i’m kinda unsure but if you must – bring her back as a Force ghost. in other thoughts, don’t bring her back – she died a herione and a protective mother from an evil step-son – she’s respected as that. sorry, Sam

  4. MaggOnasi says:

    So that’s a no?
    (if it is, TANK YOU)

  5. you’re welcome
    well, i’m saying yes and no
    ghost or leave her dead, totally up to you

  6. Darth Shiin says:

    uh, I’m searching my back right now for a fourteen year old girl patting me on the back.

    lol

  7. MaggOnasi says:

    I think the puppy wants a backrub…

    jk

  8. Darth Shiin says:

    I love puppies!!!!

  9. MaggOnasi says:

    Hey RevanBodyguard, this girl on youtube sent me a messege saying this:

    “Can I borrow your face? My @$$ is going on vaction.”

    So rude!!!! I don’t even know her

  10. Shiin says:

    that is EXTREMELY rude!!!

    trust me, I know what the @$$ is.

    her ass is probably going to hell because what she said!!!

    HAPPY EASTER!!!! BUNNIES!!!

  11. Shiin, lol
    puppies live for back rubs, i know because i love them
    “Can I borrow your face? My @$$ is going on vaction.” whoa, terribly extremely rude!!! idotic thing to say. ignore those people, don’t respond back.
    Happy Easter, everyone!

  12. Shiin says:

    the christ has risen……

    ya!!

  13. Shiin says:

    http://www.dimfuture.net/starwars/random/generate.php

    okay, no more. I’M JUST HELPIN’ YOU OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  14. MaggOnasi says:

    Thank you Shiin

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