fan fiction scrollThe Sound of Revenge Chapter 18

 Atton RandCarth OnasiExile (Female/Light Side)

Notes- Okay, its Tuesday… so I started writing this chapter Tuesday! School is okay… I guess. I’m not failing any classed which is good to know… but, I’m getting 2 C- and 2 C’s and in Math I’m getting an A+ (I’m in honers math) and in Band and Fax, It’s obviously an A+… see, I’m partially a gothic girl because I wear dark colors AKA black (people call me goth all the time =P), and theres this other goth girl at our school, fully goth, and she is failing ALL her classes… and people ask me if I’m failing any classes, and when I say ‘no’ they say gothic people ALWAYS fail ALL classes, so I’m not happy right now! Sheash! I’m part goth and part gamer! Thats one of the million reasons why I don’t have a boyfriend! Oh, and the drummer in band asked me out! I HAD to turn him down =( But in the end, I fiqured out I don’t like him =D Okay. Chapter 18, The Sound of Revenge (also going to be on my deviantart, MaggOnasi) Listening to Korn’s Got The Life, The Academy’s Everything We Had, Aerosmith’s Don’t Wanna Miss a Thing, 3 Doors Down’s Seventeen Days album and Colbie Caillat’s Bubbly (all on my iTunes)

The Sound of Revenge

Chapter 18

News

 

Hunter shot out of bed shaking uncontrollably. He whipped away the sweat seeping down his his face.

“I didn’t have a bad dream. Why am I so scared?”

Hunter got out of bed and got dressed.

~*

“Hey Hunter!” Jade greeted Hunter as he enterd the mess hall.

“Hey Jade.”

“You okay? It looks like you’ve just seen a ghost.”

“I’m fine.”

“Okay.” Jade said rolling her eyes. “If you ever have a problem, you can always talk to me about it.”

“I know.”

“But your not going to tell me, are you?”

“Um, no.”

“Fine. Hey, hear the news about returning Jedi?”

“No.”

“One of the Jedi returned. You know, Zoey Demaro.”

“Zoey? What kind of name is that?”

“Hunter!” Jade smirked hitting his arm playfully.

“What?!”

“That wasn’t very nice!”

“But Zoey is a weird name.”

“I couldn’t agree with you less, but you shouldn’t go out in public and say people’s names are weird.”

“Why not?”

“What if that person heard you?”

“Did Zoey hear me or something?”

“No. Do you think Romond is a weird name.”

“Weird?! It’s a stupid name!” Hunter said laughing.

“Hey!” A huge guy infront of them said turning around.

“No offence.” Hunter said holding his hands up. “I think your name is cool.”

Romond glared at Jade then turned back around.

“Jade!” Hunter sneered.

“One reason why you shouldn’t make fun of people’s names.”

“I get your point!”

“Good. So will you stop talking about people’s names?”

“Pshh, no way!”

Jade shook her head and faced foward. “Arn’t you supose to be somewhere, Hunter?”

“You’re right! Thanks Jade!” Hunter said running off.

“I was joking.” Jade said to herself.

~*

“Hunter!” Kavar said to Hunter in his not- satified voice.

“Sorry I’m late.”

“Don’t be late again.”

“Yeah, yeah.” Hunter said annoyed like he heard that a million times.

“Lets begin, shall we?”

“Okay. What are we starting with?”

“Dueling.”

“Who?”

“Zoey Demaro.”

“‘The returning Jedi?’”

“Her records are exellent! I’m sure you’ll put up a pretty good fight.”

“I’d rather not.”

“Why?”

“She’s a girl.”

“Today or tomorrow.”

“I don’t have training tomorrow.”

“Today or tomorrow?!”

“Tomorrow.”

“Okay Hunter. Your dismissed.”

~*

“Guess what corny training Master Kavar tried to put me through today?” Hunter said to Jade.

They were both sitting in the lounge.

“What?” Jade asked.

“You don’t really care do you?”

“Nope. But you could talk and I’ll pretend I’m listening.”

“Good enough. He was going to make me fight that Zoey girl.”

“Oh wow.” Jade said in sarcasm.

“And now, he’s making me fight her tomorrow!”

“Really?” Jade said not really listening.

“I wonder what other dumb things he’ll make me do.”

“Not to be rude or anything, but I find the fire more amusing than you stories about fighting Zoey.”

“So you were listening.”

“To the first part of it.”

“She’s a padawan!”

“No, she’s a jedi knight too.”

“How old is she.”

“24 and still living healthy.”

“Why is Master Kavar making me fight a girl older than me.”

“She hasn’t been here in nearly ten years!”

“And?”

“You could still probably beat her.”

“Maybe she was training all those years to kill whoever she duels.”

“Jedi don’t do that smartness!”

“Thank you Jade, I know I’m smart.”

“First off, than was an insult.”

“I know. But I take to worst and make the best of it.”

“Yeah. Take dueling a girl and change it to tomorrow is really smart.”

“Thank you again.”

“That wasn’t a complement.” Jade growled.

“It wasn’t an insult either. I’m going to bed now.”

“Its only 4.”

“It beats sitting here talking to you.”

 

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11 Responses to “The Sound of Revenge Chapter 18”

  1. Darth Shiin says:

    The “Fat Guy” part was funny =D

  2. agreed
    this more like chatter between brother and sister instead of buddies but friends do this i guess… my friends are kinda goofy in public… haha, and what me and my brother talk about all the time
    my brother= Hunter
    me = Jade

  3. Darth Shiin says:

    Do you have a crush an Hunter, your brother? That rymes!!! Just kidding XD

  4. MaggOnasi says:

    RevanBodyguard loves her brother XD *poke, poke*

  5. no MaggOnsai
    my brother loves you!

  6. MaggOnasi says:

    Ughhh
    I never get tired of hearing that *sarcastic*
    Does your brother even know me?

  7. nope just what i told him about you
    like i said before when i met you, he flirts with a lot i mean, A LOT of girls
    he gets alot of boners… and gross stuff… yeah… it’s disturbing…
    o_O
    (never works though, haha)

  8. Darth Shiin says:

    *Lughing out of the chair*
    *Snorts* Flirting *Snorts*.

  9. MaggOnasi says:

    hehe

    And Darth Shiin, lauging is spelt laughing

  10. Darth Shiin says:

    WHOLLY F**K!!!!! Lughing? is that even a word? I am going bazurk!!!

  11. MaggOnasi says:

    I have decided you are a man XD
    Okay, Darth Shiin, we all have our manly moments when were stupid and lazy, now lets be the women we know rumbling inside of us XD

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