fan fiction scrollThe Sound of Revenge Chapter 17

 Atton RandCarth OnasiExile (Female/Light Side)

Notes: Listening to Mouth Shut and Heavily Broken by The Veronicas, Scars by Papa Roach,

The Sound of Revenge

Chapter 17

Visions

Hunter tossed and turned in his sleep, and was breathing heavily.

“Hunter, what are you doing?”“He told me to.”“Who?”

“Dustil.”

“Dang boy! Snap out of it Hunter!”

Hunter grabed the sides of his heads like someone was telling him something. Revan didn’t know if it was safe to go near him.

“Hunter?” She asked casually.

Hunter looked up and smiled, “Hunter isn’t here, Revan. Maybe you should think twice before replacing my mother!”

“Dustil!” Revan pleaded. “I didn’t replace your mother.”

“No? Your married to MY dad! Doesn’t that tell you something?”

Hunter had no control over what he was doing or what he was saying.

“If your going to use my son to fight me, I’m not going to fight back.”

“That’s exactly the point. Have you ever had someone you loved taken away from you?”

“Does it matter? I…” Revan began.

“Does it matter?! Your little Miss perfect! You don’t know how it feels to loose someone.”

“I probably don’t know how you feel right now, but doesn’t mean…”

“It doesn’t mean what? Doesn’t mean I should kill you? Your probably going to live through this. The mercinary I hired didn’t do his job. Your friend Andria HAD to jump in and save you during your trial. Who’s going to save you now? Andria is looking for Aiedail…”

“Aiedail is at home with Atton.”

“That’s what you think. She should be arriving at Malacore V soon…”

“Carth is coming.”

“Well he’s not going fast enough. Why did you have to come back? He just had to go out a buy you that ring and propose. I tried to stop him long enough for you to leave again.”

“I had things to do.”

“What about now? Why can’t you just leave now?”

“I have a family.”

“Don’t they need you out there?”

“I don’t know what is out there, but I know its bigger than you could ever imagine.”

“Then why don’t you go? Are you going to wait for the Jedi to handle it and if they don’t suceed your going to leave.”

“I would never put them in danger just to stay here.”

“Better take the next flight princess…”

“What if something bad happens here?”

“Then I guess everything is gone.”

“A reason why I am staying…”

“A reason why you’re dead.”

“You’re not going to trick Hunter into killing me.”

“Watch me.”

~*

“Atton! Stop the ship!.”

“Why?”

“There’s still someone here.”

“Great.” Atton said dropping the Ebon Hawk down.

Jessica ran to the airlock then out the Ebon Hawk.

“Jes, what is out here?”

“Look!” Jessica shouted pointing at a fiqure lying next to an edge near a never-ending fall.

Atton and Jessica ran over to the fiqure.

“Is she still alive?”

“I… How should I know? Help me bring her onto the Ebon Hawk.”

“Ew, I’m not tuching a zombie. Besides, she might wake up and eat us while we’re sleeping.”

“There is no such thing as zombies, now help me get her onto the ship! Mical can probably come in handy.”

“Since when…”

“JUST HELP ME!”

“Fine. But don’t blame me when she eats our brains.” Atton said as he and Jessica lifted the body to the Ebon Hawk.

Jessica rolled her eyes.

~*

“Who… whose there?”

“My name is Aiedail Rand.”

“Rand?”

“Yes Rand! You deaf or something?”

“No, no. I just reconize the name from somewhere.”

“What’s your name?”

The other girl laughed.

“Doesn’t mean YOU told me YOUR name means I’m going to tell you mine.”

~*

“Did you hear that?”

One of the girls asked pressing thier ear against the wall.

“Hear what?”

“Sounds like someone is there.”

“I doubt it.”

The girl looked at Aiedail.

“You always doubt things.”

“Do you really think a miricle is going to happen in here?”

“Good point.”

“Do you think we’re going to get out?”

“It doesn’t matter what we think. It matters what whoever put us in here wants.”

~*

“So, you finnaly got some courage into you to ask me out?”

“Well… um… yeah…”

“And your not going to run out of the resturant when the bill comes?”

“I promise.”

“Good. Then we’re going on a date.”

“Okay… see you then…”

The transmitter switched off.

“I don’t know a thing about dating!” Atton thought to himself.

“Hey there Atton! Did Andria say yes?”

Atton turned around.

“Yes Carth! She did.”

Carth jaw droped to the floor then he leaned against the wall.

“Are you sure you called the right person?”

“I saw who I was talking to.”

“How do you know you wern’t just to tempted to ask her, you saw her face instead of the freakish alien really going on a date with you?”

“Are you making fun of me?”

“No. Not at all. I just find it strange that Andria would say yes.”

“I find it strange that Alora likes you.”

Carth shifted himself uncomfortably. “Gerk.”

“Bitch.” Atton sneered.

 

 

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13 Responses to “The Sound of Revenge Chapter 17”

  1. Darth Shiin says:

    Cool… kinda confusing…

  2. awesome… at first i thought Hunter was having a argument with himself
    kinda like the book Sacrifice… read if you haven’t already!
    but it’s the last seconds before Revan’s death, if i’m correct
    a bit confusing… and funny. i love this part, don’t ask why:

    “How do you know you wern’t just to tempted to ask her, you saw her face instead of the freakish alien really going on a date with you?”

    “Are you making fun of me?”

    “No. Not at all. I just find it strange that Andria would say yes.”

    “I find it strange that Alora likes you.”

    “Gerk.”

    “Bitch.”

  3. Darth Shiin says:

    WHY?!? *Lughing*

    I read a bit of Sacrafice but it got kinda boring… NO OFFENCE!!!!

  4. imagine Carth and Atton fighting whoever gets the Ebon Hawk or whoever gets the last cookie in the jar, or fighting over something totally pointless (it’s very amusing)

    well, the Legacy Books are boring at first but they get interesting towards the end as all books do, you know. can’t believe you haven’t read the rest of it! it was good!
    i personaly hate jacen (caedus) but i love Ben and Mara (she gets killed by jacen)

  5. MaggOnasi says:

    Hehe, RevanBodyguard… Anna, Morgan, and Sarrah says Hi XD

  6. Oh yay! Tell them I say hi too.
    i just found out I’m a nerd =P a kick-boxing nerd

  7. MaggOnasi says:

    Yay! We’re eachother nerdy compainions!

    Okay, that sentance sounded wrong in many ways…

  8. Darth Shiin says:

    Sacrafice was kinda confusing.
    Han Solo and Princess Leia,
    Luke Skywalker…
    It was VERY confusing

  9. Darth Shiin says:

    *Correction* “Sentance” is spelled sentence.

    I did it AGAIN!

    SRY!!! I REALLY don’t like speeling errors, they tick me off…

  10. Darth Shiin says:

    OH MY GOD!!!!

    I SPELLED SPELLING WRONG!!!

  11. MaggOnasi says:

    Haha
    everyone makes mistakes

  12. Darth Shiin says:

    RevanBodygaurd? Don’t give away who kills who!!! I still might read them!

  13. TheCoqui says:

    Ok I still don’t know how Revan died. I know Dustil(or Hunter, whichever) killed her, but how did Hunter/Dustil get a lightsaber?

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