1,001

(4,277 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)

Awww... you're no fun. tongue

To put names instead of links is really easy. I can't tell it to you straight however cause the forums always register the codes so when I put [ url=link ] just remove both spaces on either of the text for the correct code form, k? big_smile

Now normally to put a link down you'd do [ url ]link[ /url ] right? Yup. ^_^ To put a name with it you've got to change up a bit. It's [ url = link]NAME[ /url ] Simple see? wink I've taken the liberty of editing your post so that your links are names instead so you can really see what I'm talking about.

Also your father link doesn't work. Thought I'd let ya know.
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1,002

(235 replies, posted in The Old Republic Cantina)

Ooh... looky looky what I got you as a b-day giftie. XD
I advise you guys don't look... you won't like what you find... unless you're into that kinda thing. ~_^

Even better... now there's two! ^_^ Forbidden fruit is all the sweeter...

And this one... well this one is just so we can have a laugh and make fun of Nnoitra. Because it doesn't matter how bad ass he will ever be... he still looks like a spoon... wink Mah spoon

Also I'll have something else for ya sometime. I'm putting effort into it to show I care! big_smile

1,003

(235 replies, posted in The Old Republic Cantina)

lol It's a Bleach thing, George. You wouldn't get it. wink

And well I might have to do something for your b-day... *runs away to photoshop*

1,004

(200 replies, posted in The Old Republic Cantina)

Defeat shall not be accepted! wink

1,005

(3,173 replies, posted in The Old Republic Cantina)

Wouldn't be the first. The first thing to leave me speechless was a man and a dog... and well... we just won't go there.

Plus I'm technically not speechless. I did say 'OMG wow...' ^_^

1,006

(4,277 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)

Okay... before I post do you want to come up with names for your family (father, mother, and sister) or would you allow me to do it? And do you want to find pictures or can I have at finding anime characters? lol
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1,007

(235 replies, posted in The Old Republic Cantina)

Thursday as in this Thursday or Thursday as in the 30th?

lol I've got a friends b-day coming up on the 29th (strangely mine, hers, and another friend of ours b-days are all on a Wednesday... creepy... tongue ). So I'm like a huge Byakuya fan and she used to always pick on him and call him girlie which made me so mad.

Finally I made her watch the episode where he almost kills Renji with his bankai and now she's like IN LOVE with him. Seriously... she's got posters and everything. I give people obsessions. YAY!!! big_smile lol But anyway for her b-day I went online and bought her some I <3 Byakuya thongs. She will love me forever. ^_^

1,008

(235 replies, posted in The Old Republic Cantina)

The newer ones are so awesome. There are all kinds of things you can do. Btw, Konah, loving the logo! big_smile I love that swirly little thingie. I have a friend who when he first got photoshop used it on all his pics. I finally had to tell him to tone it down and had to show him how to use all the other stuff.

Kick ass new sig too.  wink  big_smile  Assassins FTW!

1,009

(200 replies, posted in The Old Republic Cantina)

lol Well I'd never let my fans down. ^_^

1,010

(3,173 replies, posted in The Old Republic Cantina)

OMG wow...

1,011

(4,277 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)

Hmmm... wonder where LSM is hiding out? tongue

Be back to post a bit later (if not later today then tomorrow sometime). It's gonna be a LONG one. o_O
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1,012

(4,277 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)

Not cartoons. Anime. There is a difference. And I don't watch too much. I just LOVE it. ^_^

The smoke is a tool of Razvan's. It actually plays a much larger role later which is why it possess a mind of its own. It's basically a pure darkside entity, seeking to corrupt or consume any light it finds.

It reveals the truth about the slaughter of George's childhood, believing George will seek revenge on Razvan and in the process fall to the darkside. It grants him a vision of the future in order to show him that turning to the darkside as a last resort during his duel with Razvan will not save his life.

In fact, doing so will only lead to death by Razvan's hand or worse: becoming the vampire's puppet. In order to stand any chance against Razvan George must succumb to the darkside. But even then... will he be strong enough?

So... does the ex-Jedi confront Razvan as himself and risk everything? Or does he dare to fall in order to have a better chance at exacting his revenge?

lol And yeah I did notice that. I like giving mine new names cause I like spicing things up. smile Be back tomorrow to post.
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1,013

(4,277 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)

About the smoke... it something like what you suggested. It has... many other uses as well though. wink
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As George sleeps peacefully for the moment, a cage is forged around him, a dark presence slipping in and out of his memories. A sharp and rasp voice echoes within the confines of his mind, black smoke slithering up George's neck as he sleeps.

"You have... been marked... Jedi..."

Images flash before George in rapid succession, blurring together.

"Now witness..."

His mind fades to black, a vision slowly emerging. A pale face looks down on George, black smoke wisping around a bandaged hand, a seemingly dead body suspended in his other arm. It is from earlier. Razvan.

"Foolish boy..." his dark voice seems to bite.

Suddenly the vision blurs and fades, immediately replaced by another one. An armored figure has his back to George, dark mane-like hair flowing down to the small of his back, vaguely blowing in the wind. George's sister is crushed in the figure's arms, the pain in her face evident, shocked eyes starring blankly at George over the figure's shoulder as her soul is mercilessly ripped from her body by unforgiving fangs.

She begins to wither before George's eyes and before he can react... she turns to dust which easily escapes the figure's grasp to freedom. The figure arches his back, muscles hardening, bones popping into place. A chilling laugh rings in George's ears.

Tears sting George's eyes and he rushes towards the figure in anger, pulling his sister's lightsaber into his hand. Before he can activate it the figure turns on him, eyes full of haunting black smoke contrasting pale skin. His hand crushes down around George's skull, lifting the struggling boy off the floor with little effort.

He pulls the lightsaber from the child's hand, studying it. His black eyes lift to George's, smoke clawing its way from the sockets like tentacles only to be sucked back into the storm which burns within the man's eyes.

"Foolish boy," a familiar dark voice growls.

Once more everything fades it black. The raspy voice George heard at the beginning of this vision returns to his mind. "Your future..."

Another vision emerges with a spark of light, silver clashing against black rage in a heated duel. A push of Force causes the two figures to slid away from each other, revealing George and Razvan. Razvan's black lightsaber seems to hum with life, consumed by blackened smoke it pulses with heart-like rhythm as Razvan's voice claws its way into George's mind.

"Come, Jedi... meet the fate which has awaited you for far too long."

George rushes forward, fueled by his anger. Razvan lips curl into a wicked grin as he falls to one knee, stabbing his lightsaber into the ground. A blaze of red energy erupts and flashes forward, completely consuming George and the Jedi cannot prevent the cries of pain torn from his throat.

He tries to fight against it but the energy holds him in place. Razvan stands to his feet, ripping his lightsaber from the ground as he advances towards George. The energy constricts around George, crushes the Jedi's weakened body, forcing him to his knees. Black smoke swirls around his clenched fists, boring beneath his skin.

Razvan stands before him now, the bandages around the upper part of his face torn, smoking black eyes peeking out from beneath the shredded remains.

"You cannot fight this, Jedi..." Razvan continues.

George's back arches in pain and he roars at his inability to strike out and kill the man. His revenge. It was within his grasp and yet so far away. No. NO! Tendrils of black consume his eyes and his pupils burn gold. Razvan's voice echoes in his mind.

"This... is your fate..."

...Unidentified Stealth Craft; unknown location...

Rotel strolls into the cockpit, his heavy boots clinking against the metal floor of the ship. Zorvon lets his comrade know he’s taken notice of his presence with a simple glance over his shoulder. However, he quickly returns to his task, inserting new coordinates into the navicomputer. Rotel always spoke his mind; Zorvon knew he didn’t need to pry.

“Are you sure this is wise, Zorvon?” he questions. “Taking up a bounty on a Jedi from a shade is not the best course of action if we are trying to redeem ourselves and aid the Republic...”

Zorvon pauses but doesn’t turn to look at Rotel. “I took the job, Rotel, but I never agreed we’d kill the Jedi. If the bastard wants him dead so bad he can do it himself. We’re going after whatever it is he seems so hellbent on getting his hands on. If it’s really as great a threat as he makes it out to be... we’ll be doing them all a favor.”

Rotel shakes his head. “But at what cost? We take it from the Republic only to throw it into the hands of a shade?” he scoffs slightly. “From the frying pan into the flames.”

Zorvon leans forward, resting an elbow on the ship’s navigational console. Steady fingers slides past his hairline, digging into the roots of silvered hair as he lets out a heavy sigh. “Life’s not so simple, Rotel. It’s not all black and white. Sometimes there’s no way out. You have to understand,” he adds slowly. “Sometimes the best course of action... is to choose the lesser of two evils.”

...Unknown location...

White robes -complimented by black seams -dance in the wind as the figure glances down at the corpse. He retains an air of disinterest.

"Well, well... what do we have here?" a calm voice ponders, darkness and evil hidden deep beneath a polite charade which could fool even the most trained Jedi.

"I am... sorry... Master," a raspy voice answers, obviously struggling with the words. "There was... no other way... to clean up his... mess..."

"I see," the figure says, looking up at his subordinate. "His heart, Razvan."

"Yes, Master..." Razvan nods, reaching into the sack resting on his hip to remove the blackened heart. He kneels on one knee and holds the heart above his head as if offering a sacrifice to a god.

The figure pulls the heart to him with a flick of his wrist. A haunting purple glow surrounds the beating heart.

"They say a bad student... means a bad master. I will not tolerate failure, Saro," the voice adds with eerie calmness, his fingers constricting around the heart, the organ straining beneath the excess pressure. "Be assured... the next time you disappoint me... I'll devour everything of you."

The purple glow around the beating heart fades faintly and the figure smile slightly. "You understand. Good."

With those word the figure's grip loosens on the heart which falls to the ground next to the corpse. Oily slick tentacles shoot out from the heart and attach themselves to the body, pulling the heart towards it. When the heart settles itself into the hole in the body's chest it begins to glow brightly, strips of flesh stretching to pull the hole closed.

Saro's eyes open, emitting a a deep purple light as his back arches. His mouth opens in a silent cry of pain, purple light shining from within. Finally he collapses and the light seems to shatter and disperse, his entire body steaming as if cooling from flames. Despite the pain he immediately pulls himself to his knees.

"I am sorry, Master..."

The figure pays no attention to the apology. "Apologies are meaningless, Saro. It does not erase failure."

"Yes, Master," Saro replies humbly.

The figure is slightly annoyed by Saro but does not show it, his face remaining emotionless and his voice steadily calm and polite. Perhaps that was the most frightening aspect of the situation.

The figure's gaze moves away from Saro to rest on the distant stars in the night sky. "But all is not lost."

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Weren't expecting me to switch your childhood up on you were you eh? Yeah... cause I'm bad like that. ^_^ So Razvan is actually the one who slaughtered your family. When he throws you against the wall (you don't see it in this vision but he does) you kinda banged your head up and mistook him for the Second. Tada. Plot twist! big_smile

Also, the rasp voice in George's mind is not Razvan or any of the other vampire's. It's actually the smoke itself. OMG it's alive! lol A portion of the Red Sith's soul is trapped within the 'smoke' which Razvan has now become the Master of. Thus why it has so many capabilities and powers.

Razvan's laugh (ignore the voice, that's not how I want Razvan to sound; got another vid for it)

The figure's (Mortis's) voice and new appearance (hint: the brown haired guy is the one I'm using as Mortis)

Razvan's voice (black haired guy is Razvan's voice; how he sounds when he possesses the ability to speak orally or when he does so telepathically)

1,014

(4,277 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)

Well you don't think up anything unexpected while you're sleeping either. tongue But I'll be back to post later. So no worries. ^_^ I got ideas.  wink
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1,015

(74 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)

Maioribus turns to George, a sudden dark look hidden in his too human eyes. "I am sorry, human..." he states with little concern, "but you are of little use to us. We came here for Regina and the Ęsivz S’äín; not to save your kind."

Mikaela struggles in Validus grasp, earning her a sharp growl from the black robotic creature. "What?!"

Keir shakes his head, holding the amulet closer to his chest. "You can't just leave us here!"

"Can't we? You're nothing but caşhan," he adds, the earlier respect he seemed to have for the humans obviously having been a charade. "If you die before your time it is of no concern to us."

Mikaela struggles harder, looking over her shoulder at Validus with a heated glare. "Let me go!"

"Feisty," the robot purrs, a smile in his voice.

The comment gains a harsh growl from the larger organism but Validus ignores it his attention turning back to Mikaela as she screams "I'm not going anywhere with you."

Validus pulls her back against his body. "I'm afraid you don't have the choice, woman. You have something we need. So we're taking you... whether you want it or not."

Mikaela pulls away from his body. "Not without them," she bites back at the robot, her head motioning towards the group before them.

Validus looks up at Maioribus and speaks in his own language so as not to give away their conversation to their audience. "What say you, Maioribus?"

Maioribus seems troubled. They needed the girl. Her body... her soul. But it seems she would fight them unless they brought along the caşhan. He eyes the group before him.

It was possible one of them could be the one Óv’jutići chose as his predecessor. It was also possible one could be... he pauses. Would it really choose one of them? It seemed highly unlikely.

He sighs. "Without the Regina's soul restored we have no way of telling if one is the Guardian or even if one is our Savior. If we left them here to die and fate twisted on us..."

His gaze falls on Mikaela, his voice softening noticeably. "Everything we've done for her... it would all be in vain." His eyes lift to Validus's. "Everything... would be lost."

Validus's hostile attitude seems to calm. "I have sworn my soul to hers, Maioribus. You know this. If it is for her... I will do whatever it is you ask."
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Khenan Vocabulary Lesson:

caşhan: (plural) fleshlings

1,016

(4,277 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)

(1) Second is not dead. He's a Force vampire. It takes more than removing their heart to kill them. (2) Razvan's intentions were to save the Second. However, George's own inner darkness and strive for revenge on Saro seem to have saved his soul from being devoured by Razvan... for now.

(3) Razvan is the name he was born with so yes, it is his true name. And yes, only Mortis, Saro, and now George know it. (4) George is the second known person to survive a fight against the Second. Kavar was the first (although he did have the help of two other Jedi Masters; both of which Saro killed before escaping).
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The smoke whispers dark and faintly as George tries to use the Force to push it away. Suddenly it deepens in color and shoots out, the tentacle-like wisps boring beneath the skin atop George's right hand before he can react, piercing pain shooting up his arm.

The smoke quickly sinks into his veins, leaving behind a dark bruise on his hand were it had entered his body. George watches in horror as the smoke crawls up his arm, the blackened mass moving beneath his skin towards his upper body.

He desperately claws at his skin and his other hand clamps down around his arm in an attempt to stop the substances progress into his body. This only seems to make the poison double its efforts, speeding up the inevitable. It delves deeper into his veins until George can no longer trace its progress.

A darkness sinks in around him and George senses a sudden dark presence as if someone is watching him... something. Inside his body the dark taint locates his connection to the Force and begins to consume it, enveloping it in a cloak of darkness, snuffing out the little light which remains.

George's heart begins to thunder in his ears, his blood boiling as his inner rage is unleashed. His hands clench into fists as the muscles in his body tense, straining against one another. His back arches as pain rakes up his spine, tendrils of black slithering like poisonous snakes across the whites of his eyes.

But then... everything stops. George's body collapses, the Jedi leaning forward to rest his weight on his hands. His muscles relax and the darkness seems to slip away and fade. His chest heaves as he struggles to breathe; his pulse pounds against his temples. W-what... was that?
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It's not the darkside and it's not really a poison. It's just something... different. XD

1,017

(372 replies, posted in The Dark Side)

I'm a war gal. I always win so I enjoy it.  wink  tongue  big_smile

1,018

(42 replies, posted in Video Games)

So Sith-like! XD

He looks much better in the Deceived trailer though. With the Sith mask and everything. Here he looks too... I don't know... not evil enough maybe? I mean the white cracked skin and yellow eyes is great and all but the charred face and the mask from Deceived scream SITH!  big_smile

1,019

(4,277 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)

I'm all about the drama and adding new twists no one expects! I love it! ^_^

And he's not just any random blind guy. May I present to everyone in this amazing RPG... Razvan... the First.  wink Muahahahahaha!

He's only about ten thousand or so years younger than Mortis so he is VERY powerful. And only the Second and Mortis really know his true name. Whenever he introduces himself he always refers to himself simply as the First (unless he finds a truly worthy opponent... which he has never thus far), saying that dead men need not know the name of him whom they will not longer be able to curse.
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Razvan head turns, as if starring down at the exhausted Jedi on his knees before him. How amusing. Driven by the power he consumed from the six Jedi Masters, Saro should have been able to crush the life from this Jedi's pathetic body in a instant. So what more did this boy have to offer?

"He was mine," the Jedi gasps, drawing Razvan's attention from his own thoughts. "I could have beaten him. I was stronger."

The Jedi's body was struggling, his mind slipping away. In his last moments of consciousness, a deep, dark and smooth voice slithers into his mind.

"Foolish, boy," it begins with distain, the voice dripping with superiority as if George were nothing more than a piece of trash. "As if you could ever even hope to kill one of us."

The Jedi collapses on the ground. Razvan cocks his head slightly to the side as his senses rush towards the dried blood along George's chest. So Saro had been playing with his food again... how amateurish. It seems the Second still has so much to learn.

Razvan turns to leave, throwing Saro's body over his shoulder to better carry the dead weight. The Jedi was not his to kill. Besides... the boy seemed hellbent on killing Saro; Razvan would not take his revenge from him. It was a pain he understood all too well.

If the Jedi were to die, he would die by Saro's hand and Saro's hand alone.

...Sometime later...

George wakes up, blinking a few times to make sure he's really alive. That... man... another vampire? He had left him? Alive? Things were more confusing by the minute. He sits up, his head throbbing violently. He groans, looking over beside him to find his lightsaber barrel.

Eerie black smoke wisps like tentacles as it twists and wraps around the barrel like the smoke itself is alive.... Should he touch it?

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So now we also know the Second's true name... Saro. smile Of course only Razvan and Mortis will know this because of again how old they all are.

In addition to that... in his true form (which is the form he takes here), Razvan does have the ability to speak. However, like all beings who use the darkside to extents beyond what their body is capable of enduring, his voice has begun to show the strain (much like Mortis).

The black smoke Razvan possesses is an ability he gained after consuming a Red Sith. It houses many powerful abilities which Razvan has improved and added to over the thousands of years he's had access to its power. One ability allows Razvan to transmit his thoughts into words by means of whispers and such... much like he did to speak to Saro.

He does possess the ability to communicate telepathically. Because it takes no part of his body to do this other than his mind, his voice retains its natural tone. When he shape shifts he regains his voice, able to speak without use of his dark power.

1,020

(4,277 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)

George's eyes widen in shock. Black smoke swirls around the pale hand gripping the blazing blade of George's lightsaber. I-Impossible! He raises his gaze but it is not the Second he finds.

A tall, pale, muscular figure stands between him and his target, one bare hand gripping George's blade, the other suspending the Second a good two feet off the ground by his throat. Bandages cover the entire upper portion of the new arrival's face, two vertical scars making their way from beneath the rags down his cheeks.

Both scars come from the direction of the man's eyes. He was... blind?!

The Second struggles in the man's grasp. "You..." he manages to hiss out.

The man turns his head towards the Second, his back turned slightly to George reveals long, black mane-like hair which travels down to the middle of his back. The smoke around the pale figure's hand suddenly wisps in an unmoving wind and George hears faint, unintelligible whispers. The Second bares his fangs.

"No!" the Second roars through a ragged breath. "Don't interfere!"

Before the Second can react, however, the pale man loosens his grip. As the Second falls the man impales him on his arm.

The Second's eyes widen in pain and disbelief, blood spewing from his mouth as he speaks. "Ngh... Razvan..."

The pale man appears unconcerned, ripping the Second's blackened heart from his chest. He places the still beating heart into a sack connected to his hip. The heart... it is still beating! Is the Second really dead? Or still alive?

The man looks down at the Second's body and uses the Force to pull the lifeless body into his free arm. He turns to face George, his grip tightening on the blade of the lightsaber so the entire weapon strains from the pressure.

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Weren't expecting that now were ya? ^_^ This gives your character initiative to stick around and join the hunt for Darth Mortis (since the Second is one of his "apprentices").

And a picture for better visualization! big_smile Razvan