Topic: The history for those unaware.

The history of Spartan039.

I had lived with others all my life. In the depths of the second malachor, My comrades and I sparred together to become what our leaders told us. "warriors".during my young age i was thought to never give in. To strengthen my will. To ignore pain. To ensure survival. I am not a clone, as some may think. My father, "Jaden Ordo" was truly a popular name, though it was soon ended when his death came of a jedi. I never knew my father that much but from the other mandalorian elders I knew he was strong. Not physically, but mentally as well. I had difficulty sparring as if something was bothering me. I vowed to kill that jedi with all my might, and to one day take my fathers place as the leaders of a separated clan. years later i encountered this jedi knight on the planet of nar shaadda where refugees live. The jedi facial features matched what I had heard from the other mandalorians. This jedi immediately sought my approach and consulted me. he said, "what brings you here young one?" Anger flowed through my veins with intensity. i could not speak any words as i tried. I worn light garments and had a small blade equipped. The jedi gave me an estranged look of defiance. "is something troubling you?" he said. With no reply, my scarred face of battles screamed as the hidden blade plunged into the jedi's centre heart. He grunted. As i was about to finish him, he muttered a soft reply until his last breath, "They did not tell you?... heh.. guess those damn barbarians never kept their word. You've grown so much, as i may tell you... (coughs) drops down) Jaden Ordo was not your father, just another mandalorian." I stood in shock. "I tried to tell you but they brainwashed you, I guess this is fate's will. good... bye... son." As I heard those words pierce my ears, i yelled in agony. Many things went thorugh my mind. HOW COULD HE BE MY FATHER? HOW COULD THEY LIE TO ME? WHY ME? WHO AM I? At my final thought, i had to find my comrades and straighten every thing out. maybe the jedi was lying.
As soon as i arrived back in malachor, i asked the tribe elder all i had to ask. What he answered was exactly what the jedi said. The tribe leader surprisingly said, "now that you know this, i must kill you." Within my instict i evaded the swing of the elders rod with blade. he then yelled, "fellow warriors, this one is a traitor to our entire CLAN! he is a disgrace to the name mandalore and ORDO itself!" I reeled back as I was immediately surrounded. In combat form I flurried many mandos and incapacitaed them until my allies, now enemies pounded me till i blacked out. Waking up later i recuperated and awoke in a chamber.
A dark figure appeared out of the shadows and spoke aloud, "Relax, your body is being rebuilt as it crumbled form the mandalorians who destroyed you. I flew in my ship the ebon hawk, to rescue you... though my path is different than others. I know you seek revenge to those who hurt you. But you need power, might. I can give you all these things... it is called the force. The darker side of things.... I will train you to one day wipe your enemies for THE FACE OF THE GALAXY!!!"
I could not speak as the medical robots operated on me on top of a table rebuilding all bones to exoskeletal parts.
"Here, i have given you a suit of the first mandalore. Wear for it is made of meatal steel polly alloy fibers. Cannot be destroyed by blaster shots. "
As i equipped the armor i felt renewed.
"I will teach you the ways of the force but once you are in, you cannot get out."
I thought of all my hatred and fear and anger i had towards my enemies. One day Iwould find them and kill them. For now, I shall regain my might.
So without hesitation I replied, "So be it."

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Cool Spartan. Interesting story. cool

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Thanks, just al little background story... cool

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Nice book Spartan.  tongue  cool

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I am entertained.  big_smile

But you're writing about a Mandalorian and such to THE BIGGEST MANDALORIAN FAN EVER! I have the right to criticize...

(1) Mandalorians of honor don't kill unarmed opponents. Even if the opponent had done something horrible to the warrior, Mandalorians seek honor and glory. It's the very backbone of the society. Thus he would make his opponent fight for his life. Only the strong shall survive. The victor obviously the better man and worthy to live on. Only lesser Mandalorians would commit such a... distasteful act which brings no glory from the kill.

(2) Malachor V (there's no planet named just Malachor) was not a Mandalorian planet despite what a lot of people think. It was actually a True Sith world where the Sith built an academy and was thus avoided by Mandalorians all together.

(3) Mandalore's "suit" was actually hand-crafted by Canderous Ordo himself. He merely incorportated the Mandalore mask (passed down from Mandalore to Mandalore to mark the new leader) into the helmet. There was no specific "armor of Mandalore" or "suit of the first Mandalore".

(4) I do like how your Mandalorian is Force-sensitive, however. Very few Mandalorians possess the neccessary qualities so have fun.  wink

- Just a few pointers from your CRAZY MANDALORIAN FANGIRL  big_smile

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lol  I love mandalorians, too. Umm yeah thanks for the corrections, "I have yet to learn more of the mando' ad. ( I think) lol .
gar kar'taylir kote meg mando'a?

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Your translation is very rough but I think I know what you're trying to say. If you're trying to ask me a question then you've kinda lost me with your words.

gar = your (can be used as "you")
kar'taylir = know
kote =glory
meg= that
Mando'a = Mandalorian language

Translated very roughly it may read "Do you know the glory of Mando'a?"

When you do Mando'a though you may merge certain words like you would with a language such as French. Such as dar'jetti which literally means "no longer a Jedi" but is used to mean "Sith". Depedning on sentence structure and stuff you usually also remove or change the ending of auxiliaries like in a number of other languages. Like this:

Gar lisa jorhaa'ir Mando'a?

gar = you
liser = able to, can
jorhaa'ir = speak, talk
Mando'a = Mandalorian language

So translated it would read "You can speak Mando'a?"

It's just like any other normal language. It has all kinds of rules and you got to learn it from the ground up. Trying to take words from a sheet and merge them into a sentence is not going to work because people who actually know it can tell.

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oh, I get it. And yeah that was exactly was I was asking!  smile

i know parts of mando'a.

vor'e. Meh gar hukaat'kama, kar'tayli ad meg hukaat' kama.

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if only I could put this pic of myself in my signature thatd be great

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You need to work on your Mando'a a bit. You're getting words confused. Ad means son or daughter. Not whatever you wanted it too.

A'lek, gedeteyar. A'gar ne lis'hora'ni, di'kut. Ni'duraa. Gar pehi'ba Mando'ade de'jorhaa Mando'a ti'ani'ur mirshe. Aruetti. Kote lo'shabs'ul narit. Ne shab'rudu'ni.

And yes that actually does say something everybody. lol That's how much a freaky fan I am. I learned the entire language.  tongue  wink

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Wow, you are a freaky fan...Lol

Nice pic there Spartan.  cool

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Next thing you know, she'll become a Mandalorian big_smile

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Probably already thinks she is...or maybe was in a past life.... wink  tongue

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Starr wrote:

Gar lisa jorhaa'ir Mando'a?

gar = you
liser = able to, can
jorhaa'ir = speak, talk
Mando'a = Mandalorian language

So translated it would read "You can speak Mando'a?"

I forgot to add here that tion is an interrogative clitic, used to mark a sentence as a question (usually placed after the subject) and is never merged with other words. The correct version would be:

Gar tion lisa jorhaa'ir Mando'a?

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Starr is already a Mando because she talks Mando and she is a soldier.

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i remember when spartan first joined and tried to challenge me, after he lost, he tried to create a mando sith academy. good times.

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George wrote:

Next thing you know, she'll become a Mandalorian

LSM wrote:

Probably already thinks she is...or maybe was in a past life....

Ni Mando'ade verde!  wink

Jest wrote:

Starr is already a Mando because she talks Mando and she is a soldier.

Lek.

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Whatever you say, Starr..... cool

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Hey It's not fair to write in language which nobody understands. How would you feel if I started posting in Serbian? smile

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Konah does that in, what, Swedish?

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