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Authors Notes: I know I’ve been gone, here’s Part 12. I’m sorry if you wanted more of a cliff hanger from where I left off in Revan’s Shadow. Here’s my story. For the first time in 5 weeks everyone, here is Revan’s Shadow: Part 12, Dantooine.
In this part A LOT of things happen. I’m not going to summarize them in the notes, it’ll take too long. You also get a vision of something that happens in Knights of the Old Republic II. (Atris vs. Exile). And another vision that is sort of in Knights of the Old Republic I (like the thing on YouTube, Realization of Revan). Anyway, you go on your first date with Zii (it’s well, kind of, well, awkward). Darth Talion, Bastila Shan, Darth Shiin, Revan, and Heart of Dantooine all come in. Darth Talion, Bastila Shan, Revan, oh, and I forgot to mention Darth Nihilus, all have a talking part in this part, and so does Atris and Exile. (Exile=Male Lightside). Oh, I forgot, Zii, umm… there’s a part where, umm… he’s kind of, well, half, umm… well, umm… yeah, you’ll, get what I’m saying AFTER you read the part. I’ll tell you this, the scene happens when you wake up after you wake up from the waking up vision thingy, it’s REALLY hard to explain, it’s a dream inside of a dream. Oh, and you and Zii kiss, again…. This is the first time I’ve written down what song I’m listening to while I write, but I just listened to Just for You by William Tell. Now I’m listening to Unwritten. Now I’m listening to Simple. Now I’m listening to nothing…. Now I’m shutting up.

You wake up at 8:00 am. Standard Republic Time. You and the crew had gotten to Dantooine the night before at 7:00 pm. Standard Republic Time. But, you and Zii just wanted to go out so Zii took to the only restaurant in Khoonda. Sydra’s Ocean Food (they imported food from Mannan). This is how it went:

“Do you like your food?” Zii asked. “Its great.” you responded, trying to hold down the crappy food. “Good.” Zii said, smiling. “Here’s your bill sir.” the waiter said, handing Zii a piece of paper. Zii’s eyes widened. “Do you need some credits?” you asked. “No it’s fine, it’s just… wow.” Zii said, getting out a huge amount of credits. “Um… ya, you need some.” you said, using the Force to pull the credits out of his hands. You took out half of the credits, replacing them with your own. “You really don’t have to.” Zii said. “No, I do.” The waiter came back. Zii handed him the credits. “Thank you sir.” the waiter said, walking away. “Ahem.” you coughed. The waiter turned around. “You paid??” he asked. “Half.” you responded. “Well, thank you too.” the waiter said with a “The-woman-paid-on-the-first-date?” kind of look. “Thanks Zii.” you said. “No problem, thanks for… paying.” he said. You and Zii walked out of the restaurant. “So, worst first date ever?” you asked, laying your head on his shoulder while walking. “Agreed.” he responded. “But, best boyfriend I ever had.” you said. “I thought I was your first boyfriend.” Zii said. “Well, I danced at the cantina on Tattoine for the credits for the engine fuse that we so desperately needed for our ship.” you said. Zii’s eyes widened. “YOU WHAT?” Zii said, with a shocked expression on his face. “Do you feel like kissing?” you ask. “Very much so.” You and Zii start kissing. The kiss lasted for two whole minutes.
Zii thought that Jessica’s lips tasted like cherries, but then again there was that hint of blue-berries. Never the less, she was an AWESOME kisser. He rubbed and massaged the back of her head.
You and Zii broke apart, smiling at each other. “Well, should we go back to the Ebown Hawk???” Zii asked. “Hold on.” you responded, kissing him again. This one only lasted for 15 seconds. “Now, we go back.” you said. When you got back, Deisa was meditating. “Heard anything from Bastila?” Zii asked. “No.” Deisa responded, still meditating. “Oh, well, we’re going to bed now.” you said. Deisa smiled, still meditating. “What???” Zii asked. “Oh, well, nothing, it’s just you said, ‘We’re going to bed now.’” Deisa said, still meditating, and still smiling. “Whoa, we’re still in the ‘Making Out Stage’.” you said, smiling at Zii. “Oh, well, you’ll probably get to the ‘Sleeping’ stage sooner or later.” Deisa said, stopping his meditation and getting into his bed. “It’s really hard to believe that you’re a Jedi Knight.” Zii said, walking away. “Night.” he said. “Night.” you and Zii said simultaneously.

“That was the worst first date food, but the kiss, well, Zii’s an awesome kisser.” you think to yourself.
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“That was the worst first date food, but the kiss, well, she’s an awesome kisser.” Zii thinks to himself, waking up at the exact same time as you.
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“Ebown Hawk??? Ebown Hawk, do you read me???” came Bastila Shan’s voice, sending in a transmition. Bastila sighed. Her stomach seemed a little bit bigger…. The hologram flashed away.
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“Ebown Hawk??? Ebown Hawk, do you read me???” came Revan’s voice. Revan sighed. She needed to talk to Jessica; she needed to tell Jessica about who’s hunting her. (Darth Shiin).
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But, sadly, no one in the Ebown Hawk was awake when these transmitions came. Except T3-M4, as soon as he heard Revan’s voice, he zoomed to the cockpit. Revan was about to turn around, but she heard T3 coming, so she looked back. “T3!!!! I need you to tell Jessi-” T3 cut her off. “Bee, boo, tee, grr…” “Deisa, Zii, HK-47?? They’re there?” Revan says. “Listen, I need you to tell Jessica, Shiin is my s-” Suddenly, the figure of Darth Nihilus came up, slashing Revan with his red lightsaber. Revan activated her double-bladed yellow saber and clashed it on Nihiluses saber. Finally, Revan stabbed Nihilus in the chest, he fell. But Revan kept him alive, sending him against a wall, and Force Shielding him there. “Just tell Jessica that Shiin is close, closer than she thinks. And, tell Carth Onasi that I love him and that I’m coming home soon, tell the rest of the crew also.” Revan says. “Bee-boo.” T3-M4 says. “They went to Corascaunt??” Revan says. “Bee!” T3 responds. “Oh, well, still tell them what I just did.” Revan says. “Bee!!!!!!!” T3 says proudly. “I’m on the council??? I find that hard to believe, seeing as to how I’m in love.” Revan responds. “Boo!!!!” T3 says, even more proud. “THEY POSTPONED IT!?!?!?!?!?! THAT’S IMPOSSIBLE!!!!!!!!!” Revan says, with a bright shine on her face. “BEE! BOO! TWEE GRR!!!!” T3 says. “BASTILA, JOLEE, KAVAR, VROOK?!!!! What’s ‘The Exile?’” Revan asks. “Bee-boo-twee-grr-swee.” T3 explains. “Oh, he served me in the Mandalorian wars.” Revan says. “Bee!!!” T3 beeps. “Bye T3!” Revan kisses her palm and blows it at T3.
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Revan walked up to Nihilus after she talked to T3. “Who are you? What are you doing here?” Revan asks. Nihilus groaned his voice. “What did you say? Oh, hold on.” Revan says, forcing her hand out. Nothing came out for 30 seconds, but Revan was now soaked in sweat. Finally, whiteness came out of her hand, going into his throat, and finally into his vocal chords. Darth Nihilus says, “I, I can, I can talk, I can talk again.” Revan suddenly feels the darkside coming off of him. “You, you’re a Sith Lord!” Revan says, activating her double-bladed yellow lightsaber. “I, I was, but now I’m not.” Revan felt neutral coming off him, slowly turning into lightside. Revan decided to speed up the process. She stuck her hand out and started sweating. Once again, a blue light came out of her hand. It went into Nihiluses chest this time. Suddenly, whiteness beamed out of him, he started screaming. “Don’t resist, it’ll be over in a second.” Revan says, keeping her hand out. “I can’t take it!!!” Nihilus screams. The light stopped beaming, and Nihilus fell down. Revan walked up to him. She gasped. Nihilus was really —————————–

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“BEEEE!!! BOO-TWEEE-GRR!!!!!” T3 screams zooming into your room. “What?” you say tiredly, rolling around in your bed. “BEE!!!” T3-M4 shouts again. “REVAN!” you shout. “Tweet!!” T3 responds. “What did she say?” you ask. “Bee-twee-grr-bee-frrr-ghh.” T3 says excitedly. “She said to tell Carth Onasi that she loved him, she’s coming home soon, and she’s on the council and that she’s surprised that the council postponed ‘The Love Rule?’” you confirm. “Bee-twee-grr.” T3-M4 responds. “Okay, so after we get the heart of Dattoine we’ll go to Corascaunt to tell everyone what Revan said, and Deisa can see Bastila again.” Zii says, rubbing his eyes and yawning. “Zii! I didn’t know you were up.” you say, surprised. “Did you know that I’m awake?” Deisa asks, coming into the room. “Okay, let’s not start laughing like we just had twenty bottles of Juma Juice.” you warn everyone. “I agree with Jessica, let’s NOT act like we’re on… spice or something….” Zii says. Deisa snorts.
“Spice.”
He snorts again. “Well, I heard that Revan sent a transmition.” Deisa says, sitting down on one of the beds. “Bee.” T3 replies to Deisa. “What did she say???” Deisa asks. “She said that she’s coming home soon and that she loves Carth Onasi, what a surprise. It seems like she’s obsessed with him, it’s slightly scary.” you say. Zii fake coughs, covering the words, “Our relationship.” “BEE!!!” T3 shouts. “She said that Shiin is close?” you ask. “Twee.” T3 says. “Closer than we think?? How would she know?” Zii says. “I don’t know, she must have some connection to Shiin.” Deisa says. “Should we get to sleep?” you say. “Yeah, we really have to stop waking up in the middle of the night.” Zii says, lying back down. “Night.” Deisa says, walking away. “Night.” you say, lying your head down.

OKAY, I’M HAVING SOME TROUBLE POSTING PART 12, SO HERE’S WHAT I HAVE SO FAR, THE NEXT PART WILL COME SOON.

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