Revan’s Shadow: Memories of the Past
Authors Notes: Okay, I decided to make you wait even longer on Revan’s Shadow, so I’m writing this instead. Enjoy!!
Deisa was in one of the rooms on the Jedi Temple on Coruscaunt. He was training with his master, Master Hefre-Yui.
“Good Deisa, you are doing excellent.”
“Thank you master.”
Mical was training with Master Jugor.
“No, you’re doing it wrong, you’re doing it with to much agression.”
“I am sorry master, I was distracted.”
“I’m aware.”
Revan was training with Kreia.
“Why do you keep looking over there?”
“I’m not.” Revan responded, she was lying. The ghost of the man in the orange jacket was standing in the room. Revan occasionally stopped and glared at him, trying to make him go away. He didn’t though, just stood there and smiled. Finally Revan lost her temper and started shouting at him.
“LEAVE!!! YOU’RE ANNOYING ME!!!!! JUST LEAVE!!!!!!”
Kreia watched as Revan screamed at nothing. She had thought that Revan was going insane until Revan said,
“YOU’RE ATTRACTIVE BUT JUST LEAVE!!!!”
The Exile was training with Master Lonna Vash.
“Good, you are stronger than most of the pupils I have ever had.”
“Thank you master, but can I get I drink of water?”
“You’ve earned it.”
Master Vash flashed a beautiful smile at the Exile. He blushed and got the water he wanted, even though that wasn’t really what was on his mind.
Deisa stopped training and was walking to his room.
Suddenly, a Jedi Knight passed Deisa and right behind the Jedi Knight was a woman. She had pale skin, hazel eyes, and a face that any man could want. She noticed him. She stopped and smiled at him. It took all his Jedi Training no to shout with happiness.
“Hi Deisa.”
“H-hi-hi umm… Basila.” Deisa responded nervously.
“I was wondering if you and I could train together sometime.” Bastila asked, smiling.
She wants to train with me!!!!
“Umm… are you still breathing?” Bastila asked, waving a hand in Deisa’s face.
“What? Oh, I’m fine… just distracted…. Uh, yeah, I would love to train with you!”
“Great, how bout Saturday?”
“Saturday’s are day off from Jedi Training.”
“Exactly.”
Authors Other Notes: Just a temporary filler until I get part 12 out.
I thought you left *whew*
Cool story
Can’t wait for others
Thank you.
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Any comments?
yeah! you’re back! i was beginning to miss you!
Revan’s Training was weird =D she was beginning to see Carth and it was driving her crazy! if you watch her from a outside point of view – it seems she was on drugs or something.
i think Bastila has gray eyes. Mical doesn’t strike me as the agressive type…
Yeah, he doesn’t let it show.
And I’m sorry about what I said about Atton, I just played Kotor 2 AGAIN and he’s cooler than I thought, still creepy…
but cool…
Haha, Revan on drugs.
Kreia is more likely to feed Revan drugs than Revan taking them on her own.
*Whsiper* Kreia’s CRAZY!!!
Now that I think about it, Bastila DOES have gray eyes, I remeber her looking like she’s blind.
*Whisper* Less than Kreia though.
yep, Mical’s a goodie goodie two shoes for show
thanks for apologizing. everyone will see Atton in a different point of view
Kreia may have put some crack in Revan’s food so she would be under her master’s control. At night, Kreia probably ties up Revan so she wouldn’t run away. ooo, how about keeping her in Kreia’s closet?
we get the hint already – Kreia is crazy but not as crazy as Bane, Zannah, or Sion
Kreia has white eyeballs – looks like someone replace her real ones with cotton balls
I LIKE CHARIE
Sorry had to get that out!
I’m jsut gonna go and read your other stories…
Wonder what’s in Kreia’s closet…
severed heads… skeletons, bones, attractive male actors tied up for later
since she can’t get a date for herself
man, she really needs a boyfriend!
No boy would like her =P