I dont love you
Notes: I AM trying to get my stories more romantic because they’re basically nothing right now. My stories arn’t funny, sad, full of action, happy, or horror, they’re just nothing.
By the way, this is about the song ‘I dont love you’ by My Chemical Romance, my homies!!
I don’t love you anymore…
“Atton!”
“Yes?”
“Let go!”
“Oh, sorry, Andria.”
Atton released his grip on Andria’s arm.
“Andria?”
“Yes?”
“I love you.”
Andria didn’t say anything back. The ship took off taking her with it. Andria gave a feeble smile and waved.
When you go
Would you even turn to say
“I don’t love you
Like I did
Yesterday”
6 months later…
“I don’t think getting drunk and flirting with every guy you see is a good idea, Andria.”
“Don’t worry, Calidine.”
“Only trying to help. What if Atton fiqures out your cheating on him?”
“Who cares?”
“Who cares? Um, you do.”
“No I don’t.”
“Then why are you his girlfriend?”
“Good question… i’ll go dump him.”
Calidine pulled her back.
“Andria! You loved him the day before you left.”
“Yeah, I did then, but not now.”
“But long distant relationship is romantic.”
Andria laughed.
“Romantic? You have got to be kidding me.”
“No, I’m not.”
“Alright… I’ll go dump him.” Andria said walking away.
Calidine pulled her back.
“What?!”
“Don’t do it!”
Andria wiggled out of Calidine’s grip, and the second she knew it, she was pulled back again.
“I’m going to talk to Atton no matter what!” Andria said pushing away from Calidine’s grip and tried getting away.
Calidine pulled her back again.
“Quit pulling at my shirt! It feel’s like I’m being raped!”
“I’m not letting you dump Atton when your drunk!”
“I am not drunk!”
“You just had 9 bottles of beer.”
“And?”
“YOUR DRUNK!!”
“Honestly Cal, you can’t make me not break up with Atton.”
“I’m sorry it had to come to this, Andria.”
“Come to what?”
Calidine gave the hardest punch to Andria knocking her out cold
“I’m going to feel bad about this tomorrow, but thats going to be awhile.”
*******
Atton sat at the bar drinking down the memories of him and Andria. He still loved her, alot.
“6 months is awhile.” Atton breathed. “Maybe Andria has moved. No. It hasn’t been that long.”
Atton reached into his pocket and pulled out something he bought for Andria. A large diomond ring Atton had bought to propose to Andria.
“She’s not coming back.”
Atton tossed the ring onto the ground and it skidded across the floor.
Atton took the last sip of his drink and left to his apartment.
“Atton Rand?” Someone greeted him infront of his apartment.
“Yes?”
“This was sent to you.” The stranger said handing him a datapad.
“Thank you.” Atton said taking the datapad from him.
Atton unlocked his door and walked in. He flopped onto his bed and switch on the data pad.
Andria Hundson
May 7
Hello sweetie. I just wanted to tell you, I didn’t forget about you, yet. I really wish I could see you again. Atton, I don’t really know how to say this, so I’ll say it the only way I know how, I love you Atton Rand. I’m coming home. I’ll see you soon my love.
“She didn’t forget about me.”
*******
Atton waited in the hanger for Andria’s ship to land. As it approached, the first face Atton saw was Andrias’.
~*~
“He is H-O-T, Andria. Don’t know why your giving up someone like him.”
“It’s simple, Cal, I don’t love him anymore.”
“Alright. But if I were you, I wouln’t dump him.
“But your not me, are you?”
“Just saying! What if he pulls out one gigantic ring and gets down on one knee, what would you do?”
“Blow him off.”
“Be serious!”
“I don’t really know! If he does, I’m sure I’ll think of something.”
“Are you sure you don’t love him anymore?”
“I’m pretty positive. Just think about it. You’ll tear his heart into two!”
Andria laughed. “Atton… and a heart! You have got to be kidding me! He doesn’t even have a brain.”
“Do you want me to come off the ship with you?”
“No. I think you’ll have a perfect veiw from right here.”
“Have it your way.”
~*~
Hidden in his back pocket, Atton had bought a new ring for Andria. It would have been too corny to go back to the cantina and pick up the ring right off the dusty floor.
As the ship landed, Atton kept his hand on the ring making sure it was still there, even though he knew it wouldn’t disapear in 2 seconds.
Andria was the first one off… and the only one. She swept up to Atton and he took her by the hand (one hand was still on the ring).
“Andria, I have to ask you something.”
“I need to tell you something, Atton.”
Proposing can wait. “Go ahead.”
Andria didn’t want to blurt it out there, and then. Andria’s hands dropped to her side.
“I don’t love you anymore.”
Atton let go of the ring.
“You didn’t have to guts to tell me that when you left?”
“I’m taking ALL my stuff back.”
“Not the dancer’s outfit…”
“I just want to be friends.”
“Just frineds?”
“What’s more than frineds than what we already were?”
“Are you staying?”
“No.”
Well, when you go
Don’t ever think I’ll make you try to stay
But maybe when you get back
I’ll be off to find another way
And after all this time that you still owe
You’r still a good-for-nothing I don’t know
So take your gloves and get out
Better get out
While you can
When you go
Would you even turn to say
“I don’t love you,
like I loved you,
yesterday.”
First, you got the exile DRUNK! You know, I played as the exile too SO DON’T GET ME DRUNK!! And as far as I know, the Exile is SUPPOSED TO LOVE ATTON! I mean I personally HATE Atton but at least he’s funny and smart! This was sad, not romantic! I mean it was a really good story but I didn’t like how you made the Exile not love him. And one more thing, was the Exile drunk when she said no? Answer theese questions when you reveiw MY story. Darth Shiin.
oh my god, oh my god, oh my god!
that was a very weird story, the exile is suppose to like atton not hate him!
wow, this is more hate than love, the exile broke atton’s heart
even scoundrels have feelings too
don’t worry, my story Punch-Drunk was much weirder than I don’t love you
i love the song though
if Andria doesn’t love him anymore, who does she love then? the Disciple?
No, Calidine
U two should be a happy lez cupple
Oh, and Darth Shiin, ATTON ISNT SMART!!
I think it was good . . . it only seemed liek half teh story though. What happens next? Huge arguement? Teary-eyed make-up? What? Please write more!!! XD
Fine he isn’t smart, but he’s funny!!!
“Are you sure you don’t love him anymore?â€
“I’m pretty positive. Just think about it. You’ll tear his heart into two!â€
I meant for it to go this way
“I’m pretty positive.”
“Just think about it. You’ll tears his heart into two!”
I figured that’s what you meant . . . sometimes I do that when I write by hand. My hand and my head get ahead of my story by sentences at a time!
Atton is pretty smart and funny!
noooo! please don’t let the exile be in a lez relationship
gross! please don’t!
Atton and Exile belong together! everyone knows that!
Lez relationships are hilarious!!! Atton is not smart sis, and I was just joking about the lez thing! I would NEVER write about that (even though the male exile and Atton were gay)
Exile and Mical belongs to together! aliens knows that!
jk
RevanBodygaurd knows what she’s talkinng about! The Exile and Atton Belong Together!!!!!!!
thanks for supporting my idea, Darth Shiin!
see MaggOnsai? Atton and Exile forever!
and ewww! atton’s not gay!
Ugghhh, you two need a life! No, jk… ummmmm… I need to be mean to poeple like this… I hope you don’t get any presants for christmas!
OR, Exile and HANDMAIDEN.
Well, sure, if the Exile is a GUY! Lez relationships really are gross tho. I think if the (Female) Exile is evil, she should like Atton. If she’s good, she should like Mical. That’s why Atton is a scoundrel.