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Revan was on the edge of the Discovered Galaxy. He stared at the galaxy map and noticed he was only a few kilometers away.
“The Unknown Regions is close”. Suddenly, everything turned black. “What?!!” Revan said. He couldn’t move. A moment later, Revan saw a planet. “What just happened?!”. He had control of his body back and steered the ship into the planet. As he was pressing buttons on the ship control, he started to feel extremely dizzy. The Dark Side was extremely strong in this planet! He had never felt dizzy when he sensed the dark side. Anyway, he steered the ship in the direction of the planet. As he touched the planet’s atmosphere, it seemed to be really hot. The heat shields are down! It was starting to get as hot as lava. Revan used force heal to heal his burns. “What….is….happening..?”. The ship crashed. Revan got out, coughing. He fell down, closed his eyes, and fainted.

Sometime Later….
“Huh? Where am I?”, Revan wondered.
“Shelek o ne! Reeeeeeega!!!”, a voice yelled out.

Revan noticed he was in some sort of dark, metallic cave. There were two flexible magnet bars that trapped his arms and legs. But where was his lightsaber?

“De haaaa no besh! Hujaa HUJAAA!”, the same voice screamed.

A weird rakghoul-like figure appeared crawling towards Revan. It was grey, and it had sharp tooth about a foot long. The creature was shorter than Revan, though. A moment later, another one came in. It was the same as the other creature except it had a broken eye and an arm cut off. It also had a weapon…some sort of blade with no handle.

The creatures came closer.

“Belek! Belek! Ehscree!”
“What are you saying?”, Revan asked.
The two creatures stared each other. They raised both of their heads and attacked each other. More seemed to appear. They were above Revan and the two creatures fighting. It was an arena!

“I have to escape this place before I get killed….maybe eaten.” Revan thought. The creatures were fighting rapidly. Revan was amazed at the speed and accuracy they had. Blood was flying all over the place.They hit each other with their claws. The sharp-tooth scarred the other creature’s face The creature with the weapon stabbed the sharp-toothed creature. Then, the battle was over…… Revan could hear all the creatures screeching over and over again. The creature approached Revan. It was going to attack him! It lifted up it’s head.
“Oh no!”. The creature stabbed Revan’s leg. “AAAAAUGH!!” Revan screamed. As it released it’s sharp tooth from Revan’s leg, Revan couldn’t help but scream. He was angry… The creatures around them were dancing. As the creature was about to attack again, Revan focused really hard to break the magnets. “Come on….”, he thought. He felt a huge amount of energy and blasted the magnets. One of the magnet bars flew and hit one of the creatures.
“Sheedree! Sheedree! Sheedree!”, one of the creatures began to chant. Pretty soon, all of the creatures were chanting it. “Sheedree! Sheedree! Sheedree!”.

“What’s happening?” Revan wondered. The ground was shaking…Revan felt really dizzy again. “No…I sense the Dark Side here…it’s…..it’s out of control!”.

Something came out of the ground. Boom! It was a big, beast that was ten times bigger than a rancor. It had one yellow eye. Revan tried to run away, but it grabbed him and threw him up. Revan flew out of the cave and examined the “outside”. It was a barren desert. Almost like Tatooine, but no settlement. The Beast flew up from the underground cave. It roared at Revan. He could smell the stink of its breathe. Revan used force push on the beast. It seemed to affect him a little. He used it a couple of times more. The beast puked up something. It was Revan’s lightsaber! “Well you’re a big guy aren’t you? I guess you can EAT lightsabers easily, but I think you’re too dumb to DODGE one. Revan hit it with the lightsaber. It didn’t seem to get hurt. Instead, it just smacked Revan up in the air. Revan crashed on the sand. He felt anger inside of him and tried to fight it because of his Jedi Training, but he just hated the beast. “How can I beat this guy?”. A bunch of sand came and hit the beast’s eye. It spurt out blood from a hole on its back. “That’s it! The eye!”. Revan force jumped on top of the beast and hit its eye with his lightsaber. The beast smacked its own head as Revan jumped off. Revan did this process a few more times.

As Revan force jumped, the beast caught him and smacked him down the ground. Revan lost his lightsaber. The beast roared and grabbed Revan again. It opened its mouth.

“What am I supposed to do now?” “I’m going to be eaten in a few seconds…” Revan thought of the creature smacking its eye. As the beast put Revan in it’s mouth, Revan force pulled himself up…

To Be continued….

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