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 Carth OnasiRevan (Female/Light Side)Star Wars

Stare

Carth lyed in the dark, the bed across from Alora’s. The window let in a stripe of light so it was clear to see Alora fast asleep. He couldn’t get to sleep from all the things that has been happening; the crash, the mercinarys, the sith. Alora said she had strange dreams which worried Carth more.

Carth sat up and staired at Alora. He watched as her eyes bobbed open. She was at first stairing at the wall. Then her gaze fell to Carth. He grimaced embarrsed she saw him. He slid back down under his covers

“Its too dark. She can’t see me.” Carth thought to himself.

She looked outside the window that was shining on her as Carth still watched her. From Carths point of view, she was an angel. She looked back at him.

Just to be sure she didn’t see him, Carth slid down lower and pulled his blanket up highier. “Why is she looking over here?” He thought.

She staired for a little while longer then her I eyes flickerd shut.

The facts were clear. Of course she didn’t see him at all, but she was thinking of him.

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21 Responses to “Stare”

  1. Darth Shiin says:

    romantic!!!!!!!!!!

    LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  2. MaggOnasi says:

    Thanks Shiin =)

  3. Darth Shiin says:

    It is just so romantic.

    was this happening when searching for the Star Forge?

  4. MaggOnasi says:

    No, when they were on Taris

  5. Darth Shiin says:

    Okay,

    U watchin the new iCarly tonight?

  6. Darth Shiin says:

    And why don’t you rate your stories and say what genre and if it’s a fanfic or fanart????????????????

  7. MaggOnasi says:

    New iCarly? Sweet!!!

    Because I don’t know

  8. Darth Shiin says:

    ooh.

  9. Darth Shiin says:

    Hey, it’s starting, I think.

  10. Darth Shiin says:

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=awdHxu-Cvcw&feature=related

    RevanBodygaurd, even YOU can think that this is funny

  11. MaggOnasi says:

    I watched that!!!

    That’s how I got the name MaggLynch
    Stephen Lynch is so talented

  12. Darth Shiin says:

    oh, I thought you got the name, “MaggLynch” from people who–

    uh, I can’t say.

    It’s disgusting

  13. MaggOnasi says:

    Lol, you’re weird, Shiin

  14. Darth Shiin says:

    *silent*

    that was an insult.

    that REALLY hurt my feelings.

    =’(

  15. Darth Shiin says:

    not very nice

  16. Darth Shiin says:

    response?

  17. okay, first thing first. this story is so romantic! lots of details too!
    yes, the If Atton was Gay video was funny, but i feel like crying! so cruel if it didn’t mean anything!
    hmm, i think Carth wouldn’t sleep at all until Alora falls asleep, he’s angsty that way =)

  18. Darth Shiin says:

    true

  19. MaggOnasi says:

    Carth isn’t angst (even though I have no idea what the hecky that it). Who cares who falls asleep first? Carth probably says “As long as I wake up on time to watch the ‘Carth stares at Alora’ show, I’m good!”

  20. Darth Shiin says:

    lol your funny

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