fan fiction scrollReal Smooth, Carth

 Carth OnasiRevan (Female/Light Side)Star Wars

Notes: This is only a quick writing test!!! Short, I know! This was also my favorite scene in Kotor =D

Real Smooth, Carth

“Yes, whats on your mind?”

“You’ve been watching me closely as of late. Why is that?”

“Oh. I hadn’t thought you’d noticed.”

“I’m blind, now, am I?”

“No, no.” Carth protested. “I didn’t mean it that way.”

“Oh. I get it. You think I’m stupid right.”

Carth sighed. “Damn it, woman, if you keep hounding me I’m going to put you over my knee, and teach you a lesson!”

Alora gave him a fake smile,”Is that a promise?”

“Oh, no. I’m not even going there, sister. At any rate, I wasn’t ogling you. I’ve just been admiring you. I’ve been watching you in action. Your, your skills… you just have a natural talent that is incredible. Not that, all I do is watch you or anything I don’t mean anything by it.”

“Oh?” Alora said laughing. “Any other observations?”

“Well… maybe a few. I hope you won’t mind if I keep those to myself. I will say one thing, however. We’ve come a long way with your help. Whether its the Force or fate, or even dumb luck… I’m glad your here. We probably would have never made it this far without you I… should have said this long before, instead of doubting you I, ah, hope you could forgive me.”

“You already apologized once, Carth.”

“And you accepted it… but that does not mean I’m forgiven. I’d like to be.”

“Why do you need my forgiveness anyways?”

Carth’s voice lowerd a smuge and he said, “Because your an impressive and beautiful woman. In some ways… good ways… you remind me of my wife and I’d like to make things right between us.”

Alora’s eyes widened,”You think I’m beautiful?”

“I’ll, ah, take that as a yes. I’m glad that’s settled. Shall we… shall we get back to what we were doing?”

 

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4 Responses to “Real Smooth, Carth”

  1. Darth Shiin says:

    That almost made me cry!
    I remeber that part, the, “Is that a promise?” part makes me laugh SO hard!

  2. i totally squealed when i heard that when i had a crush on Carth. why doesn’t Atton say that!? why!?

  3. Darth Shiin says:

    I HAVE NO IDEA.

  4. Darth Shiin says:

    Oh, because Attons a freaking pervert

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