fan fiction scrollThe Secret

 Atton RandBastila ShanCarth Onasi

Author’s Notes: Here we are: Story four of the untitled series. Expect a surprise character in this story! More about the evil Stryker will be revealed in this story. Carry on!

On Malachor, Stryker was searching for clues to what he was looking for. He found little about it in the Trayus Academy’s library archives. He wasn’t expecting there to be such little information. No matter. He had enough information, anyways. He thought back to the day he fell to the Dark Side…

It all began on a quiet morning. His father, Atton, was still asleep. Norris was in the central room. She was viewing a news hologram that told of new complications arising between the Onderonians and the Republic. He cared nothing for this, though. He wanted to learn more about the Force. He went outside for a few minutes. He was outside only a minute when he heard arguing. His mother and father were arguing once again for the third day in a row. He sighed as he listened to what they were arguing about. They were arguing about him and Annette. Atton wanted the two ten-year-olds to learn about the Force, and Norris thought it would be better to keep them away from such things. Stryker listened as Atton yelled, “WELL, YOU’RE NOT A VERY GOOD MOTHER! SHIELDING THEM WON’T TEACH THEM A DAMN THING! LEARN THAT BEFORE YOU ARGUE ABOUT IT!” Norris didn’t respond. Annette came running outside. She was crying a bit. Stryker embraced his sister. “It’s ok, Annette. It’s ok.” he told her gently. “I don’t understand why they fight. It hurts my feelings when they do!” she whispered to him.

He let go of her. She went back into the house, feeling a bit better. Atton walked outside and glared at Stryker. Stryker returned the glare, but it was ten times worse. This made Atton stop in his tracks. Stryker secretly grabbed his lightsaber. Atton grabbed his as a precaution. Without missing a beat, Stryker ignited his and thrusted it through his father’s chest. Atton’s eyes widened, he gasped, and then died. Stryker had embraced the Dark Side. He knew that there was nothing left for him here. He left in a personal fighter. He knew that he had to search for what he had always desired: The Secret Star Forge. He ignited the fighter’s time travel device and went through the portal. He landed exactly ten years in the past, on one of the pieces of Malachor V. It was true: The Stryker now on Malachor V was only ten years old.

The Ebon Hawk landed on Telos. Atton got a warm welcome when he got off the ship. He, along with T3, were practically smothered with “Welcome home!” and “Glad you’re back!” He and Norris gave each other a big hug. HK had been fully repaired by now. “Welcoming Statement: Welcome home, meatbag Atton!” he said with a chipper voice. Bao-Dur chuckled. “He’s had a couple of new upgrades. He can repair other droids if need be. And the other…well, you have to wait till you see him in combat.” A bang came from the Ebon Hawk. “What the hell was that?” Mandalore asked, supiscious that it may be an enemy. A figure came down the loading ramp. As it got closer, they could see it was an elderly man. “Well, kiddos, I didn’t think I’d see any of you again!” came a voice so familiar to Carth, Mandalore, Mission, and Bastila. “Jolee Bindo. Where’ve ya been, old man?” Mandalore asked the old Jedi. “Well, since leaving you tykes behind, I’ve been on the High Jedi Council, cooking up stories to keep the youngsters in line. Tell you what, though: It’s MUCH easier than trying to keep Arden in line.” Everyone gave Jolee a saddened look. “He’s dead, I take it?” “Yeah. It’s due to a bastard named Ravenstrike! We don’t speak of Ravenstrike anymore, so let’s leave it at that.” Carth said, rather irritated. “Poor fellow…” Jolee mumbled. “Well, let’s leave sadness in the past. We should have a good time!” he continued, not wanting to spoil the mood any more.

On Malachor, Stryker was preparing the final steps. He knew where the Secret Star Forge was. He needed to head for Nar Shaddaa, as it was cloaked above the planet. He readied his personal fighter. He was ready to find the Secret Star Forge, but for what wasn’t known…yet.

TO BE CONTINUED…

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19 Responses to “The Secret”

  1. Darth Shiin says:

    Hehehehe, It sounds like your copying my idea… even though I haven’t told anyone about how the Star Forge fits into my series.

    (And my co-author, they’re writing #4).

  2. Darth Shiin says:

    But I love the Story…

    Uh, this is kinda uncomfortable, can you bring RavenStrike back?

    =(

  3. Darth Shiin says:

    But a StarForge above Nar Shadda, I TOTALLY believe that.

  4. Darth Shiin says:

    Please bring Ravenstrike back. Make him and Mission get married. Arden returns, and everyone lives happily ever after…

    For Now

  5. Nihilus says:

    Shiin, who wrote this series?

  6. Darth Shiin says:

    Yeah… but I would still appreciate the everybody lives happily ever after… for now.

  7. Nihilus says:

    You were the one who was whining about Ravenstrike and Arden before.

  8. Darth Shiin says:

    I know, wait, whats your point?

  9. Nihilus says:

    My point is that first you wanted them gone, and now you want them back. Which is it?

  10. Darth Shiin says:

    I want him back except I don’t want him to fall to the darkside.

  11. Nihilus says:

    Which one do you want back?

  12. Darth Shiin says:

    Arden more than Ravenstrike.

  13. Nihilus says:

    We’ll see how everything works out.

  14. Darth Shiin says:

    Okey Dokey

  15. MaggOnasi says:

    LADIES, QUIT FIGHTING

  16. yes, act like civilized beings for once! how about like MaggOnsai and me!

    evil son of Norris and Atton seems to strike me as the evil type
    i can’t wait for more!

    i can see where this is going…

  17. Darth Shiin says:

    Hahaha, that was a good one RevanBodygaurd, ‘Act Like MaggOnasi and Me!’

    Never in a lifetime. But don’t read the book… 7 PAGES!!! OF SHANANAGIN!!!!! IT’S SO DETAILED!!!!!

  18. Darth Shiin says:

    LADIES, QUIT FIGHTING!!!!!

    that was funny.

    hehehe…

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