Missing, Part 2
Missing, Part 2
Miracles Happen……. Somtimes
“You did it Revan! You killed Malak!” Mission screamed jumping up and down.
“Statement: Well done, Master.”
“And, you killed the sulking princess!” Candrous added.
Mission punched his arm
“Your mean!”
“Just saying.”
“Where’s Carth?” Revan asked.
“Statement: The sulking meatbag is in the cock pit, again.”
“Thanks Hk…… I think”
Revan dashed off to the cock pit. Candrous whistled after she was out of sight.
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Now…
Wow! The pilots chair is really uncomfortable. “Telos. That’s where we are at, Telos” Alora thought shifting herself in a more comfortable position. “Carth’s home planet. But why did Atton want to land here? We’ll the crew knows me by Alora Bail, not the formal sith lord Revan. Carth will recognize Alora Bail anywhere. From now on ill be known of Ally Leer! Good enough. Shitty, but useful. But, why do I intend to hide from Carth. Maybe because im not finished with everything out there, and when he see’s me back……”
Alora slid out of pilots chair. She headed towards the exit of the cock pit.
Alora enterd the common room, nothing new. Atton and Mandalore were sitting at the table. Mandalore was drinking coffee (yum!), and Atton was drinking beer, as usual.
“Mornin Alora.”
“Can you two keep a secret?” Alora asked sitting down next to Atton.
“Yea….. somtimes….” Atton said taking a sip of his drink.
“Oh dont worry. Its not big like the “Me Being Revan” secret.”
“YOUR REVAN?!?!” Atton screamed.
“Get your ass out of your ears Atton! We’ve been knowing this for like, a couple months now?”
“Listen buster! Its not ‘ass out of your ears’, its ‘ears out of your ass!’” Atton said thrusting a finger in Mandalore’s face.
“Ow, battle of the sexes.”
Alora, Atton, and Mandalore looked up to the doorway to see……. Mira (scary music).
“What brings you here Mira.” Mandalore asked.
“My stomach.”
“We’ll anyways.” Alora broke in. “Don’t mention anything Revan or Alora anywhere on Telos, got it!?”
“Why?” Madalore asked.
Mandalore looked as if he knew the answer, but wanted to hear it from Alora.
“Ally Leer, got it?!”
“Yes ma’am!”
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“ALLY!! YOU HAVE GOT TO HEAR THIS!!”
Alora shot up from her bed. Jessica was banging and screaming the first thing that popped into her head. Alora got up and unlocked her door. That very second, Jessica lunged into her room.
“Okay, you have got to hear this!” Jessica took a deep breath. “There was this admiral, right, RIGHT? Well he was like BLAH BLAH BLAH so I was like BLAH BLAH BLAH then he was like BLAH BLA….”
“Jessie, mind going alot slower?”
“Okies! The admiral of Telos asked me to send a message to Revan, I know! Revan! The traitor!”
“Curse it all!” Alora thought. “Jessica doesn’t know im Revan because Mandalore told Atton and Mira but not Jessica because they hate eachothers guts! Thats why she doesn’t know!”
“Well the admiral was like ‘you’ve explored the outer rim? I ask you did you find any trace of Revan?’” Jessoca said in a low voice then switched to high when she talked. “So Revan told the Admiral to keep the republic strong. So I said ‘perhaps she died. Then he got pissed off and told me to tell Revan ‘Carth Onasi is waiting for her’. Oh ya, another funny thing was that he said was ‘there’s just this emptyness where she used to be. Hilarious right?” Jessica said laughing.
“Yea, just funny.”
This is very interesting. I like how Revan’s come back and is traveling with the Jedi Exile and the Exile doesn’t know it. But then there’s that small problem. The Exile was one of the closest people to Revan before and during the Mandalorian Wars.
Then again, the Jedi wiped Revan’s memory, gave her a new idenity and so they probable changed some of her features (I don’t know how, but it’s probably possible).
Anyway I look forward to the next chapter(s). I love your start with this! :D
Starr