fan fiction scrollMissing, Part 1

 Atton RandCarth OnasiExile (Female/Dark Side)

Missing, Part 1
Atton Style

1 year prior…

“So you did it, you turned agaist Revan once and for, I knew she wasn’t part of you anymore, I knew it!”

Quit breathing my air! ” Yea, I guess I did.”

“I knew you would you would have to make a choice someday, I think that I was it, I…. I can feel it! And you did exactly what I hoped you would!”

You think studdering fool? Now take a couple steps back, im claustrophobic!

“It couldnt have been easy, im very proud of you!”

Will this ever end?!?

“I love you, and I cant wait untill all of this is over.”

Rewind! Carth loves me?! Well do I love him back? What am I saying who wouldnt? “I love you too!”

He somewhat looked relieved I said that. He gave me a broad smile then leaned in to kiss me. But I dont know how to kiss. Dang, I should have gotten lessons from Bastila!

His lips met mine.

The word I thought of that second was YUCK! He tasted like cottage cheese. Rotten, now unwanted cheese. Thats what you get for not brushing your teeth. Who cares? I kissed back. With my hand on his chest, his heart was racing. But mine is out-running his.

This could last forever!!

“Hey sheash, get a room will ya?”

Carth pulled away from me.

“Mission!” I growled at her.

*******

The Ebon Hawk shook violently with yells throughout the ship.

“ATTON!!!!”

I really didn’t want to get out of bed. I rolled over and faced the wall. I shut my eyes and almost fell asleep ti’ll the Ebon Hawk shook again.

“ATTON, WHAT THE HELL DID YOU DRINK!?!?!”

I rolled out of bed and threw the covers aside. I looked over to Mira’s bed who was fast asleep like nothing bad was going on. I was too tired to walk so I crawled out of my room and down the hall to the cock pit.

Jessica was already in there navigating Atton on where to go.

“TURN LEFT! NO THAT’S RIGHT!”

Jessica looked at me.

“Alora, you told me you knew how to fly right?”

“Yea. Fly like a bird.”

“I dont care how you fly but could you fly this plane till we get a real driver?”

Before I could give an answer, Jessica pulled me up to my feet and threw Atton out of the pilot’s chair. I sat down lazily.

1 year prior…

“Okay, just pull up a bit, you dont want to loose a part of the ship, or anyone on it. Better yet, don’t pull up.”

“Carth, I don’t think this would come in handy anytime soon.”

“Well, if you’re handsome pilot isnt there and theres a drunk driver, you get my point.”

I eased up on the wheel

“Your a pretty good pilot, the ‘Hawk’ is pretty hard to fly.”

“Yea, but I have such a good teacher.”

Now…

I could tell Atton was trying to find a place to land on the ruined planet. The bottom of the Ebon Hawk was brushing against some pretty sharp hills. I pulled up on the wheel and bairly arose from the seat to find a clear spot to land. Theres one! I pulled up then dived down. The Hawk hoverd over the cleared spot before I put the ‘legs’ of the ‘Hawk’ down.

I looked behind me to see Atton wearing a odd expression. Jessica wore a surprised expression.

“I got lessons awhile back.” I shrugged.

“Wow Lora. In my 28 years of life, I have never seen anyone fly as well as you just did.”

I stood up from the pilots chair when Atton started crying.

“You a……. good pilot too.” Jessica said trying to cheer him up.

“No, its not that.” He wipped his eyes. “You flew that beautifully Alora.”

“Uh, thanks Atton, I guess.”

I moved away from the chair before Atton slumped down in it. Mical walked in to cock pit.

“Nice flying Atton.”

Jessica looked at Mical and smiled. Atton looked at him and put up the bad form on is finger and then turned around before Jessica saw him. Mical and Atton both seemed to like Jessica. Jessica, I think would make the cutest couple with Atton. They both dont really take things seriously. They make jokes that arnt even funny. They snore, drool, and talk in their sleep. And just imagine their children! If Mical and Jessica had children…… lets not think about that.

“Co’mon Lora, lets get some coffe.”

I nodded and followed her out of the cock pit.

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2 Responses to “Missing, Part 1”

  1. Starr says:

    Nice! I really enoyed this. You described eveything wonderfully. I’m going to read the next part now. :D

    Starr

  2. RevanBodyguard says:

    hi loved reading this. you made atton kinda wimpy. that’s okay, loved the story anyway

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