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Time to get this story moving again, it's lain dormant thru all these arguments...........

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****Upon returning to Davik's home, Polo is immediately summoned to Davik's office****

Davik: Krim, do you plan on being my bounty hunter or a social worker?

Polo: Excuse me?

Davik: Canderous told me that you left the recovery group to go help a group of misfits find a little lost puppy. I didn't hire you so that you could fly solo. Give me one good reason for not having you shot right now!

Polo: I'll do better than that. Reason #1 -

*quick draws his blaster and shoots the cup of Tarrisian Al that Davik had on his desk. Polo keeps the gun out, leveled in Davik's direction, and continues*

Reason #2, What I did was on my own time, no charge, and if I feel like helping someone now and then it's my own business. ......it was a lost wookie, by the way.

Davik: I run a financing office and a trade guild, Krim, not a charity ward. I'll let it slide this time, but don't go getting involved in other people's affairs again. Which, by the way, brings me to my second point. You failed to tell me in our interview that until recently, you worked as a spy for the Republic. I have, in fact, discovered that it was you who was responsible for getting the Jedi stike team aboard Revan's ship some time back.

Polo: Unless I'm mistaken, it's not common practice for spies to include their work in their resumes.

Davik: Granted, but now we face a dilemma. I have a man on my payroll who is wanted by the Sith, and they are offering a steep price to have you delivered. I lost the Jedi Bastila, but Krim, you may be the bargaining chip I need to cut a deal with the Sith. hmmm.........I need to think about this. One should never rush into anything.

*over the intercom* Canderous, would you kindly escort Krim back to his quarters for the time being?

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Canderous: Okay Krim, Fallow me and don't try anything.

Polo: (Stands up and fallows Canderous)

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** Polo walks with Canderous **

Polo: Davik's a strict one, isn't he?

Canderous: Hm... He's not one to bargain with, not one to laugh about. Your mighty interesting Krim... maybe interesting enough to work with.

Polo: We already work together, Canderous.

Canderous: Oh, no - not this work... something else I'm thinking up. Through time, if I trust you enough, I'll tell you more.

Polo: *Thinking* (What are you planning...)

Canderous: Alright, here's your quarters...

Polo: Do I...?

Canderous: Enjoy. *Leaves*

Polo: Ehm...

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Polo: (Walks around in the room and sits on the bed)

Polo: I have a bad feeling about this.

(Suddenly a knock on the door and the door opens)

Slave Girl: (Enters the room and the door closes)

Polo: What are you doing here?

Slave Girl: (Walks over to the bed and sits down beside Polo)

Slave Girl: I am here to do anything that you want to do.

Polo: (Starts to think about if it is a trap and then starts to think of what he would like her to do)

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polo: hmm... can u massage me

slave girl: yes, as you wish

polo: mm,, yes oh ya, hhhaa YES! y oh ..

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um, ok..............lets see what i can do with this.....thing here..............lol, bringing us back from playboy mansion.............

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**After several hours of waiting and pacing, Polo decides he's had enough. Drawing a tunneler from his coat collar, he quickly bypasses the door security system and opens the door without tripping an alarm. Exiting the room, he bumps into Canderous**

Canderous: And just where do you think you're goin?

Polo: I'm going to find an apartment that hired a better interior decorator.

Canderous: Cute. And just how far do you think you'll get.

Polo: I plan on making it all the way back to the Republic at some point, but I'll settle for the Upper City hangar bay at the moment.

Canderous: You've got pluck I'll give you that, but you'll never be able to leave that way. The Sith have us in lock down right now, and will blast any ship that leaves the port.

Polo: I'll chance it.

Canderous: Not if you're smart. Look, the only reason I haven't sounded an alarm yet is because I want to get off this rock too, and between the two of us I think we can come up with a workable plan.

Polo: Your consideration touches my heart, you know that, it really does. Just what exactly do you have in mind.

Canderous: Well, that fellow that you helped in the undercity, the one with the lost wookie, he just won the year's biggest swoop race. Not only that, but he fought his way out of an ambush when the gangs wouldn't give him the prize he had won. I've made contact with him, and I think he will be able to help us steal Davik's lead ship, the Ebon Hawk. I've arranged to meet with him at the cantina to discuss the matter.

Polo: Sounds like you have it all planned out. What do you need me for?

Canderous: Well, in the first place, it's not likely that Davik will hand over the Ebon Hawk to us as a favor. You're pretty good in a fight, and I could use your help. And we may have to deal with more than just Davik's thugs if we plan on making it past that Sith blockade.

Polo: Interesting. Well, it sounds like it might be worth a shot. I'm game.

Canderous: Good. Let's head to the cantina, that racer should be there soon.

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canderous: polo, never betray me or die in hell.

polo:y-yes sssir..

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** Polo and Canderous make it down to the Cantina **

Canderous: Okay, I'll deal with the swoop biker...

Polo: Good... I have some things I want to do.

Canderous: Suit yourself... I'll contact you Via-Datapad.

Polo: Alright... *Leaves Cantina*

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**Exiting the Cantina, Polo sees a group of children shouting and throwing things at an Ithorian.**

Polo: "hey, what's goin on here?!"

Kids: *to Ithorian* "get outta here, goggle eyes! We don't need you're kind here!"

**one kid picks up a metal scrap to throw at the Ithorian, but before he can throw it, Polo draws his blaster and with a single shot incinerates the would-be-missile**

Polo: "Alright, you brats, party's over."

Kid #1: "Who are you to tell me what to do? You're not my Dad, you're not even a Sith soldier. So stay outta this!"

**Polo fires several rounds at the ground at Kid #1's feet, making him jump like a scared Gizka.**

Polo: "I said, party's over. Now you all scram!"

**Kids run away screaming**

Ithorian: "Thank you human. Why one of your kind would chose to intervene, I don't know, but I am grateful."

Polo: "Ya well.......... it wasn't any big deal. You look hurt there; why don't you take this medpak?"

Ithorian: "Again, i thank you. Whoever you are, may your path be blest for your kindness!"

**Polo continues on**

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lol

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** Polo continues and hears the steps of a person behind hin **

Polo: (Draws weapon, and aims behing him)

** But, Polo sees noone **

Polo: Hmm... (Puts weapon in holster)

** Polo turns, and see a dark figure in the walkway. The figure walks out of the shadow, and it's revealed to be Saddok **

Saddok: There you are prey.

Polo: Look - What is your problem?! Why are you following me?!

Saddok: Because... I just have to! Don't worry... (Draws saber) I'll make it painless...

Polo: Don't think I'm letting you kill me!

** Saddok jumps in the air, with the lightsaber ignited and behind his back. As he is about to swing - Polo rolls across the floor and draws his blaster. Saddok pulls his saber out of the Ore plated floor Square, then dash over to Polo. Polo does a backflip and lands on the side of the wall - then lunges himself off the wall and over Saddok, landing on the other side of the hallway **

Saddok: Your skill is amazing...

Polo: Thanks... I've been trained.

Saddok: Your moves are astounding... familiar almost... like I've seen them somewhere... But no matter! (Draws Saber and charges after Polo)

Polo: *Thinking: Does he have any force powers??*

Saddok: RAAHH!!! (Charges)

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**Polo sees his shoe is open so he bends down to lacen his shoes, Saddok swings his saber and misses as Polo went down with his head.Polo finishes lacing his shoes and as he goes up he hits with his head the bottom of the saber and hits his head against the hilt the sword ok Saddok cuts right into Saddoks head. and Saddok falls to the ground dead**

Polo:Ok i'm ready.Were is he? That coward.

**Polo looks down and sees Saddok dead.**

Polo:He must have seen that he had no chance and killed himself.

**Polo smiles abit and leaves the place**

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Slik, that was great! big_smile

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haha, nice

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anyone gonna continue the story?

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Well, he killed one of my key characters of the story so... I don't think I can continue... -_-

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but polo krim is the best story ever! big_smile

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who is polo krim?

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Hovoth came up with the idea to have a story about a guy on Tarris during the beginning of KOTOR I, and we can all just kinda contribute to the story. it's not really an RPG, we all just kinda add stuff. Ya, Slik, you kinda did kill off Saddok too fast. hmmm............we need to reshape it a little bit. maybe we just think that Saddok died in that fight.............. :unsure:

also, Tarris is goin to be blown up shortly in the story if something doesn't change. should we take him to another planet with the crew on the Ebon Hawk?

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Yeah, that's what I was leaning towards...

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Polo: Well... that was easy... wait.

** Polo turns Saddok around, and takes Coth off head **

Polo: This isn't Saddok...

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There we go... -_-

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