Kotor 3: The Begining Of A New Age For The Galaxy

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Knights of the Old Republic III:
The Beginning of a New Age for the Galaxy

Prelude:

    Space in the Unknown Regions was not like the pitch-blackness of the known galaxy. It was very, in praticle terms, foggy. The void of the mists were very lifeless and usually very dull...except for now. Now there was a war going on. A war, which, if brought to the known galaxy, would slaughter millions of countless innocents, and the Republic and what remained of the Jedi Order.
    The sound and heat waves of a passing Republic Warship stormed through the emptyness of the darkest-gray mists. The ship was, of course, outdated; as was most of the FFP-L's ships were outdated and very old. Although, recently, a Sith Weapons Planet had been liberated, and the weapons planet had become a Republic Shipyard World. They had recently added new and better weapons and shields to this ship, plus a few others; but it very recent, and not even half the of the FFP-L's fleet altogether had these upgrades yet.
    The FFP-L, the Fight for Peace Legion, was basically ex-Republic and Sith soldiers, ex-Sith and Jedi, bounty hunters, mercenaries, military volunteers from the Republic's Army, and other motely groups and soldiers to numerous to mention. But this so-called "legion" was not a legion any more. For the eight years since the Destruction of the Star Forge there had been many battles with the True Sith, and the earliest battles had nearly left all of the "legion's" fleet dead in space.
    The True Sith belived in the Dark Side of the Force, but the similarity to other SIth the legion had fought eight years ago, ended right there. The True Sith fought like demons, thought like demons, and had souls, so corrupted, that it was nearly impossible to turn one who had fallen, back to the Light Side of the Force. They were worse than demons...they were devils.
    The upgraded Republic Warship, the Light of Dawn screamed across the void; it was safe for now. On board the giant juggernaut, the greatest man, and probably the only one who could destroy this threat and end this war, the Grand Admiral of the Fight for Peace Legion, Revan, sat at the command seat. Revan, the Savior of both the Galaxy and the Republic, the Redeemed One, and the Destroyer of both the Star Forge and the Sith Lord known as Malak, sat, contemplating the future for the Jedi, and the Republic. He wondered how things had gone for both his freinds, and the Jedi Order, since he had left the Known Regions, for this hell-hole, that was almost fully enveloped in the Dark Side.

To be continued...

Sorry that I'm late. I had school work to do. Yes this is an RPG. Here is the continued version of the story of my KotOR 3:

    And I thought that Malachor V was a Dark Side planet, Revan thought. He frowned. Malachor V, as he remembered it, had been a dark place in the galaxy, where few had ventured after the Destruction of the Star Forge, eight years ago. He had, after a few months since the celebration, gone to Malachor V, and delt with the Sith he had stationed on guard there eleven years ago. On the surface of Malachor V, he had found other things...answers.  Answers as to why he had fallen. At the center of Revan's former stronghold was the Trayus Academy, an ancient dark side Praxeum that contained the deepest and most intimate secrets of the Sith. From this mausoleum of ancient Sith knowledge he had probed these ancient secrets. He had not probed very deep into that power, but he had found out the truth. He had learned of the existence of a more powerful, more dangerous empire far beyond the known borders of Galactic Republic space, where the true Sith Empire was waiting. Waiting to attack!
    Quickly he had left for the Unknown Regions taking as much as an army he could find with him. He had found more troops, and Jedi, on other planets, that had long been oppressed by these True Sith, and were more than willing to help. Now Revan smiled, he had been a leader for a long time; ever since the Mandalorian Wars: 15 years ago.
    He sighed. He remebered things. How the Republic's army had been near the edge of complete and total destruction. In fact it would have fallen, if not for the bravery and cunning of the crew of the Ebon Hawk. The Hawk's crew had gone on a crazy mission. They had searched for the lost Star Maps, that would eventually lead them to the Star Forge (a weapon-factory spacestation).
    A tear-drop slipped out of his eye, and down his cheek. He remembered the love and friendship he had had with his team. How he missed them all.
    His team had consisted of four humans, three aliens, and two droids. Each had different personalities, feelings, and perspectives on life. How could I have left them? Revan asked himself.
    First there was Carth Onasi. He had been the first party member he had been introduced to. He was a little over cautious, and suspicious when they'd first met. Revan's memories had been erased, so he had been forced to rely upon a programed identity: Aiden Garadon. Carth had glanced at his service records, and had found them very disturbing. In time, though, their friendship would grow, until Carth literally felt like a brother to him. Carth had just been promoted to the rank of Admiral, when Revan had left him. Revan remembered the word he had told him: "I am going some place  danderous. It will be along and hard mission. I want you to keep the Republic safe until I return. And please watch out for  Bastila, keep her safe too."

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    Then there had been Mission Vao and Zaalbar. Mission was a female blue-skinned female twi'lek, of fourten years of age. She had grown as an orphan, and had never known her parents. The only family she had known was her elder brother Griff, but her memories of him were controversial, to say the least.
    Griff had always been borrowing credits for his crazy schemes of easy enrichment. They failed miserably, of course, and he was never able to repay his debts, which soon became enormous; he had to leave the planet, escaping from his creditors. His sister was only five years old that time, but she would forever remember their rather unpleasant 'trip' to Taris - not as passengers, but hiding inside a packing crate on a freighter, barely having enough supplies to make the trip.
    On Taris, their life was significantly harder. Griff and Mission had to survive in the hostile Lower City overrun by swoop gangs. Although Griff treated Mission well - and even taught her some security breaching, stealth and survival skills - he also gambled and drank, not to mention his continued habit of wasting credits on various "get rich quick" schemes - his previous fiascos apparently had taught him nothing.
    Griff also often visited the Lower City cantina to play Pazaak. There he met Lena, a Twi'lek dancing girl, and instantly fell for her. Lena, however, was used to dating Tarisian nobles, and Griff was not rich enough to provide her with the lifestyle she preferred. Eventually, he had to leave Taris, escaping his debts once again; but this time together with Lena, leaving his twelve-year-old sister behind - although he promised her he would return as soon as they earned enough credits to live like royalty. Since then, Mission had always thought it was Lena who made her brother forget about her. She had no doubt their relationship wouldn't last long.
    Without her brother to protect her, Mission had to seek other ways of survival. One day, she found a Wookiee, Zaalbar, being harassed by several members of a Lower City swoop gang, the Black Vulkars, who were trying to provoke him into fighting. She felt compassionate for him and told the Vulkars to leave him alone - but then the Vulkars turned on her and it was Zaalbar who had to rescue her. He didn't kill them, but frightened them to death and made them run away.
    Despite the such unusual circumstances of their meeting - or perhaps because of them - Mission and Zaalbar (whom she nicknamed "Big Z") quickly forged an alliance. For two years they got by in the Lower City, never hearing anything from or about Griff, sometimes even feeling brave enough to explore the sewers of the Undercity. And one day, one event drastically changed their lives.
    Near the end of the Jedi Civil War (the war which Revan had ended), Carth Onasi and memory-wiped Revan had found themselves stranded on Taris after the Sith destroyed their ship, the Endar Spire. During their search for Bastila Shan, they entered the Lower City cantina where they found an unusual pair - a Wookiee, and a fourteen-year-old Twi'lek girl who preferred speaking Galactic Basic rather than her people's native language.
    Seeing that Revan was a newcomer in the Lower City, Mission provided him with information about the city, the swoop gangs, and guided him to the base of another swoop gang, the Hidden Beks - she considered the Beks to be more honest and reliable than the Vulkars. Mission and Zaalbar then left the cantina to seek more adventures in the Undercity sewers.
    The leader of the Hidden Beks, Gadon Thek, provided Revan with authorization papers needed to get past the Sith guard at the elevator to the Undercity. However, immediately after Revan exited the gates of the Undercity village, heading to the wilderness, he ran into very distressed Mission. She explained that her friend Zaalbar was caught by Gamorrean slavers in the sewers and agreed to put her invaluable skills at Revan's disposal if Revan helped her free the poor Wookiee.
    From that moment, Mission and Zaalbar had assisted Revan during his journeys, and followed him aboard the Ebon Hawk, a smuggling ship Revan stole from the local crimelord Davik Kang, just in time to escape the Sith bombardment of Taris.
    Shortly after, during Revan's travels, Mission encountered Lena. Lena had told Mission that she left Griff on Tatooine, where he was working for Czerka Corporation. She also said she had actually wanted Mission to follow them and even offered to pay for her ticket, but it was Griff who wanted to leave his sister behind. It turned out that Griff had lied to them both, having told Mission that it was Lena's decision, and having told Lena that Mission didn't want to leave Taris.
    Mission felt betrayed, but nevertheless relieved to hear her brother was still alive. On Tatooine, Revan and Mission found Griff as a prisoner in the local Sand People enclave. Even after his liberation, Griff didn't give up his half-baked business projects - his latest one, in which he tried to use tach glands collected by Revan to brew Tarisian ale, also failed, and in addition he got himself into trouble with the Exchange.
    But Mission was prepared. She realized that nobody was perfect, and instead of fruitlessly trying to "improve" her brother, learned to accept him as he was. Despite their previous tensions, Griff and Mission parted as friends, being seemingly happy with their reunion.
    Mission had followed Revan to the end, even to the monstrous Star Forge, and was present at the celebration of the Star Forge's destruction and the Republic's victory over the Sith, where Revan's companions were proclaimed as saviors of the Republic and awarded the Cross of Glory.
    Son of the Wookiee Chieftain Freyyr, Zaalbar was born on the planet Kashyyyk. After being exiled from Kashyyyk for being a madclaw, Zaalbar travelled to Taris, where he met the young Twi'lek Mission Vao. The unlikely, yet inseparable friends lived in the lower slum area of the planet.
    Shortly after Revan's arrival on Taris, Zaalbar was captured by Gamorrean slavers. After being freed by Revan, he swore a life debt to the former Sith Lord causing Mission to follow him as well.
    When Revan and his companions arrived on Kashyyyk, where Chuundar, Zaalbar's brother, has seized power from his father over the Wookiees, the Wookiee was imprisoned by his brother for not honoring his exile. Revan learned that Chuundar sold several of his fellow Wookiees to the Czerka Corporation, but only a few Wookiees knew this, the rest saw him as a great hero. Chuundar asked Revan to kill an enraged Wookiee exile in the Shadowlands beneath the planet's mighty trees, which upon further investigation, turned out to be Freyyr, Zaalbar and Chuundar's father. Revan helped Freyyr retrieve Bacca's Ceremonial Blade, a mighty vibro-sword, and then led a revolt against Chuundar and Czerka, killing Chuundar. Freyyr resumed his position as chieftain, and Zaalbar rejoined Revan in his quest.

Then there was Jolee Bindo. Before Revan had left for this void, he had gathered information on Master Bindo. He had gathered, that during Jolee's days as a Jedi Padawan, Jolee was considered brash and reckless, often defying of the Jedi Council in order to do what he felt was right. A prime example were his actions during the blockade of the Ukatis system. Cut off from the rest of the Galaxy by its own King, the Ukatis system was unable to get food and supplies, and no help from the Senate was forthcoming. Jolee decided to help the people himself. He acquired a ship and was joined by a friend, presumably Andor Vex. Together they stole from the rich, considering it a "tax on the greedy", and ran the supplies through the blockade to the planet.
    Eventually, his craft was shot down to the planet by no less than his future wife, Nayama, and the two were married, although marriage was frowned upon by many Jedi of the time. He discovered her to be strong in the Force, and he took to training her personally, despite the advice of the Jedi Council. He was not even granted the rank of Jedi Knight by that time. During the war with Exar Kun, his wife, like many other Jedi, fell to the dark side. She attempted to turn on Jolee, who resisted, eventually bringing her to kneels. Jolee was unable to kill his own wife, and let her go, going on to kill many Jedi in the war.
    The Council did not punish Jolee for his actions, stating he had learned his lesson the hard way. When instead they wished to promote him to the status of Jedi Knight, Jolee lost faith in the wisdom of the Council and went into exile. Eventually he crash landed on Kashyyyk and remained exploring the Shadowlands for the next twenty years. At first, the Wookiees believed him to be a benevolent forest spirit, and so left gifts outside of his dwelling, until the old hermit explained the truth to them, albeit with some embarrassment. Still, Jolee remained a friend of the Wookiees, helping them to protect the Shadowlands and its wildlife. He often wandered through the forest, ready to defend himself from predators, sentient or not, with his lightsaber.
    During his wandering, he discovered an ancient computer guarding a Star Map, and ended up making 152 attempts to communicate with it - however, the computer had been secretly reprogrammed by Revan, during his first trip to Kashyyyk with Malak, to respond to nobody but himself.
    When Revan passed through the Shadowlands a second time, once more seeking the Star Maps, Jolee attached himself to the party, partly out of boredom and partly to face his own past. He was one of the few members of the party to know Revan's true identity all along, although he decided it was not his place to say. As he travelled with Revan, he was often reminded of an old friend, Nomi Sunrider, who he had known during his time as a Jedi.
    At one point Revan questioned Jolee as to why the old man had accompanied him. Jolee's response was to tell the story of a young man who one day finds a snake in his village. He follows the snake, helping it away from the village and into a great desert. Without food or water to be seen, the snake bites the young man. The snake then asked why the boy he had followed him, and the boy replies; "Did I follow you? I thought I was leading you away from everyone else...". Revan could only wonder whether he was supposed to be the snake.
    Jolee's professed neutrality, already belied by his joining Revan, was rendered further questionable when Revan landed on Rakata Prime, the home planet of the Rakata. When the Rakatan priests allowed Revan into the Temple of the Ancients to disable the Star Forge's disruptor field, they insisted on him going into the temple alone. Jolee, however, persuaded the priests to allow him and Juhani to accompany Revan, and it turned out to be a useful measure: Jolee and Juhani restrained Revan from being once again seduced to the dark side, this time by Bastila Shan.
    Jolee remained with Revan until the end and, along with Revan's other companions, was honored at the Republic's celebration of their victory over Darth Malak.
    There was also Juhani. During the Mandalorian Wars, Juhani's parents narrowly escaped from the destruction of their homeworld by the Mandalorians during the Battle of Cathar. They fled to Taris, among the very last remnants of their race, taking their child with them. There Juhani, only a few months old, was raised; throughout her life, she called Taris her homeworld.
    Like many non-humans, Juhani's family had a rough life on Taris at that point in its history. The native humans disliked them merely for being "aliens," looked at them in disgust, persecuted them, and charged them more for food than their own species. Juhani had mixed feelings for the planet she had to live on; she hated it, called it a "rat-hole" and a "warren," but still realized that it was her home. Her life could have been far, far worse.
    However, when her father was killed by Xor, something began to slowly die within her mother, as well. She worked as hard as possible, but still didn't earn enough money to support both herself and her daughter. So she started borrowing money from the Exchange, doing everything possible to save funds, giving her daughter Juhani most of their food. And one day, she collapsed in the cantina she worked in...and never recovered, as they simply did not have enough money to pay for a doctor.
    The Exchange then charged Juhani with her mother's debts, and, as she had no way to repay them, enslaved her. This was the worst period in her life. She was bound like a beast and treated like livestock, with a Mandalorian slaver, Xor, planning to purchase her at auction. One day, however, an unexpected force intervened.
    It should be noted that Juhani never gave up hope for a better life. She remembered legends about the Jedi, of whom she had a somewhat idealized image of fearless peacekeepers and protectors of the innocent. And in the end, she was freed from the slavers by a Jedi who, in her opinion, perfectly matched her image—Revan, who arrived on Taris during the Mandalorian Wars, driving the occupiers offworld.
    After that, Juhani, who was in fact Force-sensitive, vowed to become a Jedi. Immediately after collecting enough money, she boarded the first freighter to Dantooine, where she was taken for training by Jedi Master Quatra. At first their relationship was peaceful, but as her training progressed, Juhani, due to her hot-tempered Cathar nature, began to lose control over her emotions and slip towards the dark side.
    Quatra, aware of the changes in her Padawan, decided to test her in an unusual way. By that time, Juhani's training was almost complete, and Quatra had nothing more to teach her. She allowed Juhani to give in to her rage and strike her Master, making her believe that she had done so willingly. Juhani left her for dead, but in fact she was only injured, and later recovered in the Jedi Enclave.
    Believing that she harnessed the power of the dark side, Juhani left the Enclave and hid in a Jedi meditation grove. The grove soon became tainted, and the local kath hounds were driven mad, and started attacking the local settlers.
    Her salvation, ironically enough, once again came from Revan. At that time, the former Jedi Knight and Dark Lord of the Sith was unaware of his true identity; he believed he was a former Republic soldier taken for Jedi training, and the task of removing the taint from the grove, given by the Jedi Council, was his final test. Revan, like Juhani, was once again waiting to become a Padawan.
    As Revan approached the grove, Juhani engaged him in battle, but was unexpectedly defeated—and she believed that no one could match her power. Finally, she realized what Quatra wanted her to realize: that the dark side itself was no stronger than the light side, and that being seduced by it did not make one any stronger.
    Revan spared her life and persuaded her to ask the Jedi Council for mercy. She was forgiven, promoted to Jedi Knight, and remained in the Enclave for some time, until Revan and Bastila Shan uncovered a Star Map on Dantooine and the Council assigned Juhani to their expedition on the Ebon Hawk, which aimed to find other Star Maps that could reveal location to the Star Forge.
    During Revan's adventures, Juhani was sometimes on the verge of falling to the dark side once again—especially when she met Xor and prepared for revenge. Revan, however, managed to prevent the bloodshed by reciting the Jedi Code, which also worked surprisingly well in other situations. Generally, Juhani showed the most zeal as advocate the light side and the ways of the Jedi... perhaps to restrain herself from falling anew.
    Juhani repayed Revan in turn when they were stranded on Rakata Prime, and Revan had to enter the Temple of the Ancients to disable the disruptor field which damaged any ships travelling within the Star Forge's system. Jolee Bindo persuaded the Rakatan priests to allow him and Juhani to follow Revan into the temple, and it turned to be a valid effort. Revan was confronted by Bastila Shan, converted to the dark side by Darth Malak, and it is conjecturable that, without Juhani and Jolee having restrained Revan's underlying emotions—the Dark Lord would have ultimately embraced his former identity and followed Bastila over to the dark side.
    After the death of Darth Malak and the destruction of the Star Forge, Juhani, among Revan's other followers, was honored at the celebration of the Republic's victory on Rakata Prime.

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