Topic: the idea

this is my idea for koter 3the dark alince (first peson)
one day i wake up and i see my moter dead i see a man who has two men who look like they sleep with lightsabers i yaell at the top of my lugs"you moster!" i grab my vibroblade and i slice one head off then i stabed my vibroblade trew his heart igrabed the last mans own lightsaber and chop off his arms and  rasie his light saber and i killed him ad before he died he looked in my eyes and iha avishin of a woman and aman fighting and then maney sith lords with men hwo look like they had been killed before then the siths hood slid off it was darth traya

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Re: the idea

Sounds like a good start hon. Keep working on it.  smile

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Re: the idea

thaks and if your wonering kreia got resrected by sith stuff

Last edited by zack1 (2010-12-20 12:23:01)

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