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I have worked for 3 years on a plan for SWKotOR III and I have sent it as a suggestion to LucasArts. If my idea is accepted tons of features would be added and it would be bigger. Star Wars Knights of the Old Republic III: The Secrets of the Star Forge. You would start out as a new recruit on a ship and the first level, tutorial would be you getting used to your job as bridge guard. Then you will talk with a person of opposite gender about Revan and the Exile mainly boy or girl. Then you get an annocment of a drill to ready you for real battle. Little do you know it's not a drill you and your bunkmate fight to the hanger and take the last surviving snub fighter to Nar Shaddaa the first world. You then learn about this strange world Revan visited has been destroyed. You have to get a pilot Atton from Kotor 2 to take you there. When you get there you must go into the temple like Revan did to get a rumored Star Map to a second Star Forge. As you leave the temple you encounter an huge wave of Sith the species not dark jedi. Then Revan and a band of Rakata save you and Revan Joins you.

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Well that certainly sounds ridiculous...

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Well i don't know. It seems, well... hmm... hmm... HMMM... HHHMMMM..............
not enough interesting. I think it should be you who joins Revan.

Attack on ground where your enemy believes you will not, from an unexpected direction at an unexpected time. Defend where your enemy believes you are not, and when he believes you will run. Surprise is the key to victory, and speed is the key to surprise. For the soldier, speed is life.

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Do you know that I once been to Rakatan Prime. I was flying on my ship "Roxton" when I was caught in some kind of distruptor field. So I crashed on the planet. I was unconscious. When I finaly woke up I saw dozens of Rakata. carrying Vibroswords. They were bubling something but I could not understand them so I drew my lightsaber and runed to them shouting: "For Lord Revan!!!" They were quickly dying so on the end there was only one Rakata left so I said "BU!" and he runed away. Then I finaly realized what I have done. I killed them withaout a reason or a provocation. I felt the anger inside me. I tosed away my lightsaber in fear. Fear from myself. But that was a mistake somebody shot me with a blaster and I fall down. After several minutes I felt somebody was trying to heal me. But I also heard a voice in my head. "Use the dark side to heal yourself. Use it the only way you could survive. Use the dark side. Use it." I recocnaized that voice. It was Revan. I stoped listening to his voce and shouted "I'll never fall to the dark side, NEVER!!!" And let the unknown person to heal me. When I opened my eyes... It was Bastila. "You" I said "I thought you were dead". "As you can see I am not". She needed my. She said that Revan Has turned to the dark side and that we must try to get him back on the path of the light side. "Its a wonder that you remained on the right path, it couldn't be easy to reject his voice." She said. I saw a desperation on her face. So I decided to help her. "Where is he?" "He is in the Rakatan Temple." When we arrived in front of the temple I saw five Rakata around a fire. He said something to Bastila. And she answered him on his language. Bastila smiled. All Of loked at me for the moment. Then Rakatan sat around a fire. And started chanting. After few hours. They destroyed a force field and I and Bastila entered the temple. The temple was empty. We went up. I saw Revan standing over a body. It was Exiles body. "You killed him. WHY?" said Bastila "You have become a monster. I don't know you any more" Revan gets furious and used force lightining on Bastila and she hits one of the walls. I said "You a relly a monster. I shall do what I must." I drew my lightsaber. "Do you really think you can kill me here. HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!" He jumps towards me but i kicked him... After few hours of battle the rakatan temple was lying in ruins. Finnaly I pierced him through stomach. But he touched my hand with his and he has done something he passed me his memories about... about THE TRUE SITH. I turned around and dropped my lightsaber on the floor. Then Bastila comed "Nooooo!!!" she screamed. She stood by his body and cried for a long time. "I must stop them. I must stop the true Sith." And Then
Knights Of The Old Rebuplic: The Fate Of Silver Knight

Attack on ground where your enemy believes you will not, from an unexpected direction at an unexpected time. Defend where your enemy believes you are not, and when he believes you will run. Surprise is the key to victory, and speed is the key to surprise. For the soldier, speed is life.

Qui suis-je?

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Goerge Kwei thanks for the suggestion maybe ill post my complete story and you edit it if you want. Dark Lord of The Sith i hope you ment ridiculos in a good way.

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Glad to se somebody liked my story. B)

Attack on ground where your enemy believes you will not, from an unexpected direction at an unexpected time. Defend where your enemy believes you are not, and when he believes you will run. Surprise is the key to victory, and speed is the key to surprise. For the soldier, speed is life.

Qui suis-je?

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IN KOTOR 3 by mine opinion you should play with the exile in the search of REVAN and gone to the unknown regions alone ...... The game should start asking u : DARK PATH , LIGHT PATH ... and you choose , lets say LIGHT : The jedi order has been rebuild and the jedi code still lives the jedi council lies on TELOS , members : ATTON , VISAS who has revisited her homeworld , Brianna who is now the mistress on telos polar region , Bastilla , Mical Clash .
In many adventures of the exile he finally finds Revan more older ...... !! I AM TALKING ABOUT MALE EXILE AND MALE REVAN
Then they 2 , try to find a way out of the unknown regions , THE SITH HAS BEEN REBUILD IN THE UNKNOWN REGIONS HEADING FOR THE REPUBLIC  , Revan felt them , the exile belived him after 10 years , the council had to accept  that revan and the exile wore dead and gived up hope . THE SITH LORD WHO WAS LEADING THE ARMY was responsible for the mandalorian war. When finallly the exile and revan arrived back from the unknown regions they wore very very veryy OLD , nobody listened to them everybody thought that revan and the exile wore dead BAO-DUR reconised the exile and brought the exile and revan to the jedi council it was a very GLORIOS MOMENT !!!!
STILL THE HAVE TO BE PREPEARED FOR THE BIGGEST BATTLE THAT HAVE EXISTED . Canderous was leading the mandalorian army , HK-47 the HK-50 army , Carth was admiral leading the republic troops , BASTILA WAS PREGNANT and cast out of the order having revans daughter who had to be trained by the exile in the future  , Brianna took her handmaidens to battle ..... STILL REVAN HAD TO GIVE HIS LIFE for the republic , and died for the exile to live and to go and face the sith lord !!!!!!!!

AND NOW THE DARK PATH : The republic was not safe , the jedi order has been destroyed , the exile has left MALACHOR in the search of REVAN , to kill him !!
WHILE TO THE UNKNOWN REGIONS IN THE SEARCH OF REVAN HE FINALLY MEET HIM revan told him everything he knew that the SITH LORD who caused the mandalorian wars ! The exile was very powerful and revan was week and old , the exile was victorious and Bastila had a heart atack and died / If revan wasnt a sith lord and was revan light vs dark exile .... THE EXILE would have made him angry made him suffer and put fear in revan for things that exile will going to do to his friends and to the republic and killed him !!! bastilla told carth what happend and what she felt , carth was sad indeed and prepeard for the SITH !!! The mandaloriens wore gone .... vanished from the galaxy , jolee bindo was old and he couldnt fight the sith anymore and died because of his age  , juhani was killed by atton (before atton had met the exile) THE WOOKIES JOINED CARTH also mission !!! The exile met the SITH LORD and fought with him , the exile was victorious and he continued the SITH's plan .... ! IT WAS A GREAT BATTLE mission was killed , and for that zaalbar gived his life !!! THE WOOKIES have retreat , and the exile made carth suffer , and told him what he will do and told him about revan !! THEN WHEN CARTH WAS OUT OF CONTROL he killed onasi by force lightning !!! THE EXILE WAS READY TO CONTROL THE GALAXY ,but he saw revan in his away , revan wasn;t dead and it was revan dark  .... AND YOU CHOOSE WICH PLAYER TO PLAY WITH at the final battle revan or the exile if revan dark wins he will take the exiles place and control the sith !!!! OR EXILE DARK KILLS REVAN DARK the exile will control the sith forever ........ if choose REVAN LIGHT to be killed by the exile nothing changes , BUT IF CHOOSE REVAN LIGHT to defeat the exile , revan will defeat the exile and put an end to the sith , before the greatest war of this age revan will saw his friends dead , and kill himself !!!!

THE SITH LORD was a jedi knight when revan was apprentice and wanted very much power , he killed in cold blood his master , and wanted to rule the galaxy , the sith lord was intelligent and had a plan , he thought to weak the republic by making a war between the mandaloriens and the republic !!!
He has gone to the mandalorien's camp and killed a mandalorian and got some clothes of a mandalorian , he hired some sith slaves to kill a mandalorien while he was getting for mandalore to saw this .... MANDALORE DECLARED WAR ...... and then the sith hired some other sith slaves to dress as mandaloriens to kill the republic soldiers , AND THAT IS HOW HE STARTED !!!!
He left to the unknown regions the build the sith to destroy the republic !!!!! he knew that the mandaloriens would have conquer the rep. and also knew that the republic would beg the jedi for help !!! and the republic had won but it wasnt stronger enough as it was before. MANY HAD HAPPEND and the sith lord had created an army of sith the biggest army that had been saw in star wars !! THE ARMY AND THE SITH LORD WORE INVINCIBLE !!!!! AND REVAN GONE TO THE UNKNOWN REGIONS TO FIND OUT WHAT WAS THE REASON OF THIS WAR , as the exile went to find revan to get him back !!!

I THINK IT SHOULD BE NAMED : STAR WARS KNIGHTS OF THE OLD REPUBLIC : Revan"s secret or the mandalorien"s fate !!!

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The first story was pretty bad but the other ones showed promise but the titles sucked. My title is KOTOR 3: The Hunt for Revan

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first story was shitty, but the others were decent, and the titles did s**k like jester said

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all the titles were garbage.

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It is good to see that other people agree with me.  big_smile

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lol

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tongue

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:unsure:

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lol  lol  lol  lol  lol  lol  lol  lol  lol  lol

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:huh:

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:ph34r:

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okay enough.

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Okay

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jeez

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