Topic: Clondore 5

A squad of Jedi, sent by the counsol, are sent to a planet that the jedi counsol built an enclave on, called Clondore 5. But, transmission messed up and a distress call was launched on the surface.

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Name: Hawk Voltin

Age: 29

Look: Tan colored, Black hair

Backstory: Born on Dantooine, raised by Jedi.

Rank: Jedi Knight

Wake up. You were dreaming. What's your name?

Re: Clondore 5

can it be a dark jedi?

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Unless you want to get killed by the rest of the jedi on board the ship, no.

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A Republic transport hovers above the marsh trees of Clondore V, scouring the shadowed lands of a planet so large. Words of whisper on the COMM transittor echo about in a deep abyss of sound.

The Transport cross the air waves, in a  steady straight line, making a semi-quiet engine sound. The door opens, and reveals a man with black hair, that remarks the ever so far worm hole of Syst 7's sphere. This man is known as Hawk Voltin, a remarkable skilled Jedi knight, trained in the way of the force.

Hawk: "There, down there... there's an outpost perched upon a river bank." (Hawk reaches into his belt, and takes out a trans device, making a small clicking sound that repeats the click every 5 seconds.)

Jedi: "Jedi Hawk, why are we on this planet again? I sense a dark presence surrounding the atmosphere..."

Hawk: "The Jedi counsol commands it..." (Hawk looks out of the transport) "... So it shall be done. We must find this darkness, and despose of it."

Jedi: "I don't understand... why doesn't the jedi counsol send Jedi masters here to deal with it? We only have one jedi master-- and that's Master Kess."

Hawk: "You fear with her with us? She is a precious Ally, we should not overlook her special abilities."

Pilot: "Sir! We are headed over the extraction point!"

Hawk: "Alright, Jedis! This is our way! Follow me!"

Jedi Hawk and a few other jedi launch off of the transport, spearing through the heavy winds and cold frost of the jungle sky.

Hawk: (Grabs saber) "That dark presence is on the ground below!"

The other jedi, grab their light sabers too. All at once, the jedi land on a very large tree, towering over a river bank below.

Wake up. You were dreaming. What's your name?

Re: Clondore 5

You have some pretty good ideas for rpgs.  big_smile  B)

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Thanks.  B)

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The Jedi lurk along the tree bark, and clench upon the placed tree branches, that line the outline of the Tree.

Hawk: (Jumps on ground)

Dark Jedi: "I knew I sensed a Force pressence here!"

Hawk: (Takes out lightsaber) "Hmm... didn't see you here."

Dark Jedi: "Wha? Gah!" (The Jedi charges at Hawk)

Hawk: (Uses Force Stasis)

Dark Jedi: What??? (Can't move)

Hawk: Come down, everyone.

** The Jedi squad reveal themselves on the tree, and jump upon the ground. **

Hawk: Your here alone, I presume? I can't sense anyone else around.

Dark Jedi: "Gh--- Yur Gnna Pkay!"

Hawk: Hm.

Jedi: What do we do with him?

Hawk: Shh!... Listen.

** The sounds of a Confederacy Destroyer mumble in the background, and get closer ever 5 seconds. It reveals, and sinks through the air. **

Jedi: Master?

Hawk: Hold on...

** The ship explodes and hovers across Hawk's position, gving off varies of heat and steam from the bottom, then heads into the trees. **

Hawk: It's damaged...

Wake up. You were dreaming. What's your name?

Re: Clondore 5

Your are like a 1 man rpg machine.  big_smile  B)

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Ha Ha, thanks.  big_smile

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Hawk: Alright, let's move.

Jedi: Where's?

Hawk: Master Kess? She said she'll meet up with us north of here.

Jedi: Right.

** The squad moves in deeper into the abyss **

Wake up. You were dreaming. What's your name?

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Your welcome  big_smile  B)

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Jedi: I'm sighting a yellow light ahead, master!

Hawk: I see it. Watch my six...

** The Yellow light is revealed to be a lightsaber hilt. It's Master Kess, fighting a vicious Kath hound. The Kath takes a leap, sticking it's front paws wing span to the opposite sides. It's head rowls, and stretches it mouth. Master Kess swings her saber, and in an instant the Kath Hound drops. **

Hawk: I tell ya, your fighting amazes me...

Kess: Thanks... I was wondering where you and the others were. I spotted an outpost, wrapped in vines just south of here. I wanted to wait until your clan emerges, before I investigate.

Hawk: Look Confederacy?

Kess: No... the style looked... different. I sensed something dark, very strongly inside the core of the outpost.

Hawk: Interesting...

Kess: Alright, let's move. The sooner we move, the sooner we can get things done.

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** The team steadily makes their way through the black marsh, to a large outpost located to the north. **

Kess: Here we are...

Hawk: I sense it too... interesting.

Kess: That's what I thought... now, I'll lead.

Hawk: *Moves hand in a forward motion*

** Each of them come through a long hall. **

Kess: Look along the walls... do you see them?

Hawk: Yeah...

** The wall is covered in thousands of scratches, and marks **

Kess: *Feels the wall* It's motioned scratches head through to the entrance we just came through... And they head back in too... strange.

Jedi: M-Maybe we should call for support!

Hawk: Don't fear, Padawan... Fear, and you will leave yourself open.

Jedi: *Shaking*

Kess: Shh!... listen...

** The team stops, and listens to the strange noise. It appears to be a running sound, of claws and feet tramping on the floor above. **

Hawk: *Whispers* I hear it...

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Kess: *Points* I see it.

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** The monster/grunt comes from the shadows, and stares at the Jedi **

Monster: RAAAAAAAAAH!!!! *Screeches*

Kess: *Runs after monster*

Hawk: *Readys saber*

** Kess swings at the Monster, and the monster is able to swiftly dodge the swings, and slashes that the lighsaber performs **

Kess: What is this thing?

Monster: *Kicks Kess into the wall*

Hawk: *Uses force push, and pushes the monster into the end of the Hall*

Kess: *Gets up, and looks over at Hawk*

Monster: *Stares at others, and screams. It then runs off into the vent, and bangs and clanks can be heard, leading up to the top of the Outpost*

Wake up. You were dreaming. What's your name?

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Hawk: We have to find it and kill it.

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Hawk: We have to find it and kill it.

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Kess: It seems troubled though... I could sense it's thoughts rambling around... scrambled really... like it's confused.

Hawk: Why not kill it? It could harm someone...

Kess: We can't go killing everything we see... that will make you hunger for power... don't become like Sith.

Hawk: Right... sorry. Let's move...

** Walks further down the hallway **

Hawk: Something wrong Jhad?

** Jhad, a padawan - looks over at Hawk **

Jhad: Umm... no - nothing.

Hawk: I sense fear...

Jhad: More like concern... why didn't the council send more jedi masters down here?

Hawk: They trust in Master Kess' leadership. We are more recon-ish. The council will send more jedi over here to aid us if...

Jhad: ... We die?

Hawk: - If something goes wrong.

Jhad: Right... um... let's keep going.

Wake up. You were dreaming. What's your name?

Re: Clondore 5

Hawk: What are you not telling me?

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Jhad: It's... it's nothing.

Hawk: ...

** The squad makes it to a terminal **

Terminal: *KSHT* ... DZZZT ... Question - Mel gam na?

Hawk: What's this?

Kess: I don't... know. Strange...

Terminal: *KSHT* ... MRRRT ... Question - Mel gam na?

Kess: It seems to be asking something...

Hawk: Yeah... but what language is that?

Kess: I don't know...

Jhad: Try placing your datapad in it, master Kess.

Hawk: That could work...

** Kess places her datapad into the terminal **

Terminal: *KSHT* (Ejects the Datapad) Question: Place your name?

Kess: Place your name?

Hawk: It's most likely looking for the correct ID from someone...

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Soldier: Sir, There are strange sounds and movement in the north. I have sent a scout but he has not came back yet and I fear that something has happened to him.

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Kess: Okay, Hawk - can you investigate this more? I'll head out with the trooper, and radio in to you when I find something.

Hawk: Yes, Master Kess.

Kess: Thanks - let's move!

** Kess and a few soldiers moves out into the marsh jungle **

Wake up. You were dreaming. What's your name?