Topic: Ultimate Battle

the ending to a long long story....

The sitth lord struck mandalore once more with the double bladed lightsaber in the ribs again and again.
"You will die mandalorian and us sith will destroy your honor and crush your clan."
Mandalore was bleeding criticaly on his upper body. His helmet was cracked and ready to open.
Mandalore endured the pain.
"Die?" said Mandalore. "Don't you know mandalorians never die."
The sith grabbed Mandalore's neck and lifted him into the air.
The mandalorian gave one last breath, turned his gauntlet face up and pressed the detonator.

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It is okay but if you keep working on it then it will be pretty damn good.  big_smile  B)

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Darth Jester,Oct 24 2008, 08:48 PM wrote:

It is okay but if you keep working on it then it will be pretty damn good.  big_smile  B)
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Thanks.  smile

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Your welcome.  big_smile  B)

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The Sith soldiers, and the Dark Jedi Lord marched across the barren landscape, and came outside the ruins Mandalore is holed in.

Dark Lord: "Come out Mandalore! Your Clan will fall before the strength of the dark side's rule!"

Mandalore: (Looking at Strategy Table) "Hmph..."

Dark Lord: "Show yourself!"

Mandalore: (Pushes button) (Walks out) (Removes helmet)

Dark Lord: "Ha Ha! You lose..."

Mandalore: "Not quite" (Looks up)

A Plasma Nuke Ship awaits in space, visible in the sky. It shoots out 35 red and blue glowing Bombs dropping towards the planet at 500 MPH.

Mandalore: (Smiles)

The Planet sparks into millions of pieces, and sends a shockwave across the solar system, and the explosian is visible to planets far far away...

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That's how I would like Mandalore to die. This concept is actually from Tom Clancy's endwar demo. It was awesome.  big_smile

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Wow... that was agreat ending. smile

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Agreed but I would of liked alittle more twist at the end.

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I like parts where the good guy dies horribly at the end. Makes it more extreme. :angry:

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What's more horrible than being blown to chunks? tongue

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a butcher or someone cutting mandalore in pieces or peeling out your eye from your eye sockets. a knife that slices a brain. lol

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lol

Or an arrow right through the head, splattering your brain chunks through the end of somebodies head.

ARROWED&#33; <===<<<

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big_smile  B)

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Right....

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NIIIIIICE Spartan. That detonator would be the way for Mandalor to go&#33; haha, that freakin Sith didn&#39;t see that comin&#33;

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Wait...

Spartan, did u get that off of the Halo 3 &#39;believe&#39; commercial?

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heh..yup.
i thank the bungie company&#33;
halo rules&#33; smile

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Agreed

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Right on&#33; tongue

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lol

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B)

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