Topic: Revan - Sith Conqueror, Jedi Saviour

Tylana Blamaster, now knowing that she was Revan, stared at the beauty of the Manaan Oceans. Tylana and companions had already escaped the Leviathan, when they were captured, a mere week ago. They were in need of rest, after finding the star map on Manaan, they decided they would stay for a couple days.
    Soon, Bastila came to Tylana, asking if there was something on her mind. She had sensed a disturbance in the force – but that was something common, since the bombardment on the Jedi Enclave on Dantooine.

‘’Anything on you’re mind. Bastila asked.’’

‘’Well, I’ve been thinking about something. Every planet we go to, were a star map is, I have a strange feeling. I know Reva- I mean me, and Malak were there before once, but it’s just so strange.’’

‘’You see, the force has a connection with all living things, as all of us know. But since you, as Revan was there before- with great power back then.-Especially the dark side. Then the force acts upon you as – weakened. And that’s how you get that feeling. ‘’ Explained the famous jedi.

‘’I see said.’’ Said Tylana.

   Then, when Bastila was about to say something, Mission came from behind the corner.

‘’There you guys are! I’ve been looking for you everywhere. Carth Wants you to come to the docking bay- he got in some kind of argument.
‘’Great’’, said Tylana.

‘’Wonderful, Carth’’, added Batila.


So then they headed out to then docking bay,were the Ebon Hawk was landed. They got out of the Ahto West sector, and walked down the hallway that would lead them to the docking bays. They almost entered the he hallway were the docking bays were, until a Selkath exclaimed to them.

‘’Were do you thing you’re going?’’ Said the alien in his native language.

‘’Hanger Bay 05’’ said Tylana

‘’The Ebon Hawk’’, added Mission’’

‘’Ah, yes! You’re the rude girl that came out of the docking bays earlier.’’ The Selkath told Mission.

‘’Whatever’’, she exclaimed.

‘’ Whatever yourself , and you may GO’’

‘’Whatever my self!? That doesn’t even make sense!’’ Nodded Mission.

‘’Come along now mission’’, whispered Bastila.

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Oh, and sorry for mis - spelling and things that migt not make sense. I typed this up on my laptop - im not so good on it for some reason. wink

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I like it.  big_smile

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Chapter 2 : Trouble on Manaan




As Mission, Bastila, and Tylana walked towards the docking bay; a squad of Republic soldiers ran past them.

‘’I wonder what’s going on’’. Said Bastila.

‘’Maybe training?’’ Replied Mission.

‘’I don’t think so. The Selkath wouldn’t allow it.’’

Soon, out of no expectation that they would see or hear a fight, a republic soldier dropped dead and out of the docking bay. Bastila immediately ignited her lightsaber, and so did Tylana. Mission got her blaster out but Bastila quickly suggested that she would not get into the fight. The two jedi ran to the docking bay and soon were deflecting blaster fire.
Then, out of nowhere, to dark jedi ran down the hallway towards Mission.

‘’Bastila! Tylana! Help!’’  Yelled Mission to the two jedi.

‘’You finish off these Sith Troopers, I’ll go help Mission.’’ Bastila told Tylana while backing away from the fight.

‘’Jedi Scum!’’ One of the Dark Jedi said.

‘’Mission Run!’’ Yelled Bastila.

Mission ran down the other end of the hallway, also, avoiding fire, when running across the blaster fire. Meanwhile, Bastila reached the dark jedi.

‘’The force fights with me!’’ She exclaimed.

‘’Get her!’’ One of the dark jedi said.

The dark jedi ignited their lightsabers. One had two red ones, the other one red. Bastila, with her double – bladed yellow lightsaber, force jumped toward the dark jedi. When she landed she blocked the first dark jedi’s lightsaber. Then, she unleashed a flurry of attacks towards the dark jedi.

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The first chapter's name is Elements of Suprise

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It is getting good so keep up the good work.  big_smile

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Thanks big_smile

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When you hit 25 posts you will have a new rank and it will be Padawan.

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Chapter 3 : A Battle meant to be won


    After Bastila unleashed her flurry f attacks,  second dark jedi, deactivated his lightsaber, did a back flip and ignited it again.
    Meanwhile, Tylana finished off the remaining Sith. She ran up to a Sith Trooper, and nearly stabbed him in the heart with her lightsaber. Carth, That then came out from behind a locker blasted a remaining Sith Trooper, and Tylana force through her lightsaber at the other one.

‘’I have to go help Bastila.’’ She told Carth in a hurry.

And Bastila needed some help; The first dark jedi struck out massive force lighting at Bastila. She quickly blocked it with her lightsaber.

‘’Up for a fight jedi!?’’ The second dark jedi exclaimed. Then ,also like the first, unleashed a massive wave of force lightning at Bastila. But she blocked the lightning again, with the other side of her lightsaber. Barely standing their, Bastila maintained balance.
    Then, finally, Tylana came out of the docking bay. She struck out a force wave so powerful, that pushed one of the dark jedi so fast at a footlocker, which broke almost all his bones, causing a painfull death.
    Then, again,out of nowhere, a dark jedi female this time came out of the door that was down the hallway were Mission was. Mission, this time, with no telling, ran to the docking bay.
Tylana ignited her lightsaber once again, and tried to pull her closer to herself. But the dark jedi reversed Tylana’s force power, and pushed her far away.

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It is getting really good and I can't wait to read the rest of it.  big_smile

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Thanks... again lol

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Your welcome  big_smile

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not a big fan, but dont let that detur  your efforts

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He has not been on here in a couple of months.

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man i have to prepare two funerals

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Master, Don't forget about Darth Ray.

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god dammit i have three

( takes a gun and shoots him self in the head, but doesnt die)


God dammit

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Master, Their is a new member that has your old name of Darth Sion.

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Yes i have noticed,bring him to me, tell him i wish to speak to him, he may become your apprentice.

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Master, I have not seen him back on this site.

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