Topic: Revan - Sith Conqueror, Jedi Saviour

[SIZE=7]   Chapter 1 : Elements of Suprise


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    Tylana Blamaster, now knowing that she was Revan, stared at the beauty of the Manaan Oceans. Tylana and companions had already escaped the Leviathan, when they were captured, a mere week ago. They were in need of rest, after finding the star map on Manaan, they decided they would stay for a couple days.
    Soon, Bastila came to Tylana, asking if there was something on her mind. She had sensed a disturbance in the force – but that was something common, since the bombardment on the Jedi Enclave on Dantooine.

‘’Anything on you’re mind. Bastila asked.’’

‘’Well, I’ve been thinking about something. Every planet we go to, were a star map is, I have a strange feeling. I know Reva- I mean me, and Malak were there before once, but it’s just so strange.’’

‘’You see, the force has a connection with all living things, as all of us know. But since you, as Revan was there before- with great power back then.-Especially the dark side. Then the force acts upon you as – weakened. And that’s how you get that feeling. ‘’ Explained the famous jedi.

‘’I see said.’’ Said Tylana.

   Then, when Bastila was about to say something, Mission came from behind the corner.

‘’There you guys are! I’ve been looking for you everywhere. Carth Wants you to come to the docking bay- he got in some kind of argument.
‘’Great’’, said Tylana.

‘’Wonderful, Carth’’, added Batila.


So then they headed out to then docking bay,were the Ebon Hawk was landed. They got out of the Ahto West sector, and walked down the hallway that would lead them to the docking bays. They almost entered the he hallway were the docking bays were, until a Selkath exclaimed to them.

‘’Were do you thing you’re going?’’ Said the alien in his native language.

‘’Hanger Bay 05’’ said Tylana

‘’The Ebon Hawk’’, added Mission’’

‘’Ah, yes! You’re the rude girl that came out of the docking bays earlier.’’ The Selkath told Mission.

‘’Whatever’’, she exclaimed.

‘’ Whatever yourself , and you may GO’’

‘’Whatever my self!? That doesn’t even make sense!’’ Nodded Mission.

‘’Come along now mission’’, whispered Bastila.


... To be Continiued...

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This isnt the correct post. The correct one is the one that say chapters 1-4. smile

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It dose not matter because he has not been back since.

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dammit :angry:  sad

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what kinda name is that anyway?

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I have no idea.

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for some reason, it remind me of the name philippines

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