No one can defeat a true Jedi 
1,181 2011-07-01 19:13:50
Re: I need help, (21 replies, posted in Suggestions and Comments)
1,182 2011-06-30 20:58:11
Re: A New Begining (4,277 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)
The trader was surprised and looked at George. "Why didn't you tell me that your associate is a member of Lord Malinov's personal guard. I had dealings him. I sell him small armored vehicles. Best in the sector. You could take one of those." George was stunned, he didn't expect that. He scratched his head again, and moved towards the owner. "Ehhh... Well it would be certainly welcoming to have such a vehicle on a trip, but we need something fast and deadly, with not much armor."
The trader started thinking... "Hmm something fast and deadly... I think I have something for you. Follow me." George and Riordan followed the Trader to the small hangar in the back. Inside, there were many small vehicles. Some were rusty and were not used in many years. Finally they got to a covered object. They stopped and the trader looked at them. "Now, witness the 'Dead Arrow'!" He pulled the cover revealing a a cool looking speeder with a turret. George just stared at the speeder. The trader continued: "It's very fast, it can reach the speed of 1500 kph. With its armor penetrating turret, it makes it a deadly scout vehicle. Are you buying?" The trader looked at them expecting the answer.
George said: "We're on a important mission for Lord Malinov, could you put that on the bill for his next shipment?" He looked at the Riordan for approval.
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The lady just looked at the terrifying man in front of her... He was draining her... She wouldn't allow it. She barely got something from her belt and just throwed it before Kain's legs... Kain looked angrily at the thing... It was a flashbang! It exploded and everything became so white...
Lady was still somewhat blinded but she was using the force to guide her out of the crowd that gathered to see, others were running away when they saw Kain and some were incapacitated by the flashbang. She was running like never before. She went around the corner, and stopped. she used the Force to camouflage herself and slowly went further into the city.
1,183 2011-06-30 19:58:01
Re: A New Begining (4,277 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)
Kain 
And the Lady is supposed to meet George later on. Well you did mess up a little... Though I'm thinking how could Kain help her... Let me see... The only thing he could do is to help her track George. Other things don't come to mind. No... You don't need to omit or change anything. She's a slippery girl, she could easily escape him. If you want you can write about it.
If Kain and the Lady got into the fight, it would reveal much of the further plot concerning her too soon... It's up to you... 
As for George:
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George was not surprised when Riordan just showed up beside him. "Ou, it's you. I need your help." George scratched his head because he was insecure... "Your family is rich, right? It has to be. Could you buy a landspeeder, so we could go searching?" he looked towards the door and shrugged his shoulders. "Or I could just rent it." He looked at Riordan.
1,184 2011-06-30 15:41:22
Re: A New Begining (4,277 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)
Tnx... And what's even more great is that I got a scholarship for it 
Well yes... I will be introducing her slowly. She's just a mystical figure for now.
As for the Riordan's brother Kain. Well, it adds some kind of moral drama. Riordan and George are planing to kill a force vampire, and a half-vampire joins them. Strange... George is gonna get the feeling that someone is following him, and when he gets to the speeder that's when Riordan and Cain should show up. But I guess it's up to you.
P.S. your open hallway link doesn't work. When i click on it opens a blank page O.o
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It was almost 7 AM when George finished his breakfast and left the villa with the gondola. The sound of water as the gondolier was rowing, the smell of the lake, the tweet of birds all seemed to calm George. He felt like a leaf floating on a still plash. They reached the shore and he payed the gondolier who returned this kindness with a bow and a smile.
He went to the landing pad and there was a taxi waiting. He entered it and told the driver to take him to the Royal Palace. It was a comfortable ride and he started thinking about Amina's beautiful face and her melodic voice. It was a long time since he has been with a girl. Perhaps she should approach her. But what if she knows that for the Jedi are forbidden such things. Nahh, he won't think about that.
The taxi landed near the Palace and George payed the driver. He looked around the palace was a great place, but he won't go there today, he turned around and went to the streets of Theed. It was a nice city and the people seemed happy. George enjoyed walking and he passed right by one house that he thought beautiful...
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A woman that those two man in black uniforms called Lady was watching the streets through the window of her house she was thinking about that Jedi that came to Naboo, he is the one that will... Suddenly she saw him through the window, watching this house. Yes it was him! She couldn't believe it. He was smiling like he was seeing something beside the house. What are the chances. Suddenly he blinked and just went away. The Lady quickly grabbed her cloak and runned out of her house. She was standing on the street but she couldn't find him. That slippery son of a...
There! she saw him talking with a trader. She started walking towards him but the Jedi said goodbye and got lost in the crowd again. She looked around, but couldn't find him. She continued down the street and saw him again, looks like he was going to the edge of the city. Looks like her source in the palace was correct. His walk was heavy, like he carried something that weighted him down... But that was in contrast to his face. He was looking around and smiling, like he was enjoying something. Perhaps the city? She didn't expect a man like him would find the nature interesting or beautiful... He stopped at the landspeeder shop. Looks like he was going somewhere. She better find her men. They are going for a ride...
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George got the feeling that someone was following him, so he assumed it was Riordan. he went to that shop and the owner greeted him.
"Good morning, mister. What can I do for you." the owner was a fat man in his early forties, he smiled widely and had a calming appearance like he was a good soul.
George made a slight bow. "Yes, I need to rent a landspeeder equipped with guns. Someone told me that you would do that for a Jedi."
The owner seemed happy. "Ahhh, you spoke with my good friend Fazzil it seems." George nodded, "Well sure, I can help you. Just how much can you pay? To rent a speeder for one day costs 500 credits."
"And to buy one?" "Depends on the model, but it's from 5000 to 25 000 credits. So what's it gonna be, my friend?"
George thought for a second. He didn't have much money but Riordan was a noble. Perhaps he had. "Well, I must first talk to my friend. He's late so I'll come back later with him."
The owner just accepted. "Aye, come back if you're still interested. My doors are always open for a Jedi."
George went outside to wait for Riordan. Where is that guy?
1,185 2011-06-30 01:07:09
Re: A New Begining (4,277 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)
Ok...
I'm very happy, I had an entry exam to university and I passed
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1,186 2011-06-29 10:27:43
Re: The history for those unaware. (235 replies, posted in The Old Republic Cantina)
Hmmm... Pizza <3
1,187 2011-06-28 15:56:55
Re: A New Begining (4,277 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)
I'm gonna introduce a new character soon.
Hold on, this is going to be a long one xD
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George just shrugged off his shoulders when Riordan jumped off. Crazy guy indeed. He went to the study room. It was in classic style, and it even had some old books, the ones made of paper... He took one of those, it was named "Knights of the Red Hand". Strange title... He read the first few pages, it was interesting so he put it on the table for later reading.
He took a datapad and continued reading from were he stopped. The history of the Elders. According to this, they were a galactic Empire that ruled all other civilizations. And then something happened and they lost their power. There was a plague, though there's no mention of where it came from. It is possible that Mortis created the plague. Perhaps it is the same thing that infected George. But this is all theoretical.
He sensed someone approaching, and he put the datapad on the table. It was that handmaid Amina. He brought him food.
"Master Jedi, I brought you some food, you haven't eaten since you arrived." She had a beautiful smile, and George enjoyed listening to her melodic voice.
"Ou, yes please. I'm starving." He smiled back, and made some room on his table. She placed the food on it and made a slight bow... "Enjoy your meal, Master Jedi." Just as she started to walk away George stopped her with words: "I'd like some company, could you stay a little?" She was surprised and he thought he saw her blush but she said yes and George took one of the chairs and dragged it to the table. She sat, and he started enjoying his meal. "Please eat with me if you wish" She refused stating that she already had meal. "Ou, okay then. Is there anything happening in the Palace?"
"There is always something happening in the Palace, Master Jedi. But I must say that you caused quite a stir"
"Really?" George raised his eyebrow at that, "What did I do so important to cause something like that, I mean I'm nobody special. Just a Jedi Knight."
She laughed at that. "Ou but you are someone special, You're the first Jedi to come here since the Mandalorian Wars. Everyone is talking about you. All nobles are wondering if you have some secret task to complete." Her eyes were wondering to, so George laughed and said: "Well I assure you. I have no secret mission here. I'm just studying."
"Of course." She smiled. "Jedi don't lie, don't they?"
"No, of course" He smiled back...
"Ou, and if you don't mind, Master Jedi, I'll be your handmaid during your stay on Naboo."
George had to think about that. If she's here, she'll know everything he's doing, and she's probably spying for the nobles. Or worse, for those man in black uniforms. Or perhaps he could use that to his advantage.
"No, I don't mind. I'll be going tomorrow morning to explore the countryside. Would it be a problem for you if you'd wake me up at 6.00 AM?"
"No I't won't be a problem, Master Jedi."
George finished with his meal and Amina took the dish away. He continued reading the datapad. He found some interesting facts about Naboo in it, and he thought he knew where to search for the tomb. He so caught up in reading that he didn't notice that it was dark until Amina came to turn on the lights. "Reading in dark is bad for sight. Even for the Jedi's." she said smiling like always. George thanked her and continued reading for little longer. Then he noticed that he was tired, so he took a shower, and went to bed. When he got into the bedroom, he noticed that it was all ready for him to jump in it. He lied down and for the first time black smoke didn't trouble him. Look like Naboo has to do something with it...
. . .
(That night in the city of Theed)
A beautiful woman with light brown long hair, in something that looked like Jedi robes but it wasn't, was in a house. She was writing something onto the datapad when someone rang at the door. "Come in!" she said.
The door opened and two man in black uniforms entered. "Milady, the Jedi is here. He visited the Palace and was greeted by Queen herself. The Jedi asked for permission the use the Palace's archives to search for information about the Elders. Later Queen offered him to stay at one of her villas, and the Jedi is know there. Our source indicates that he's going tomorrow to the countryside, though the source does not know where exactly." He bowed at after these words.
The Lady, didn't seem to have been listening to the man, but then she said. "Good work, both of you." She turned to them looking each of them in the eyes. "Now I have another assignment for you. Listen carefully..."
Two man in black uniforms looked like they were absorbing her every word. When she finished. Two man left, and the lady returned to her writing.
. . .
(Tomorrow morning, George's Villa)
George woke up after he felt someone shaking him. He opened his eyes and saw Amina's beautiful face. "Wake up, Master Jedi. It's 6 AM." "Ouh... I hate getting up early, but I must. She smiled at those words, and left the room. George got up, and he noticed that his Jedi Robes were cleaned and placed on the chair. George didn't want to know when did Amina got up to have this ready. He took a towel and went to the bathroom. After that he got back and dressed up. He looked himself in the mirror and noticed that these robes suited him.
He went to the kitchen and saw that breakfast was ready for him. He could get used to this. He started eating and wondered when Riordan is going to show up. Probably in Theed, where he's going to find a small speeder. He didn't want to fly today...
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I'll continue this tomorrow. I'm off to bed now. Writing this took me longer than expected. If you want, Riordan could come now. But it would be cooler if he just finds George while he's walking through Theed.
1,188 2011-06-28 10:23:16
Re: A New Begining (4,277 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)
George nodded. He never thought about that. "Not to worry My Lord. I almost defeated The Second yesterday, I'm not as weak as you think." He finished his glass of bourbon and placed it back on the table. "Now, I must return to my studies. I'm leaving tomorrow morning to search for the tomb. You can come with me if you want...." He questionably looked at Riordan. He's a good guy he thought, I sense he won't betray me...
1,189 2011-06-28 09:59:54
Re: My job (200 replies, posted in The Old Republic Cantina)
Nahh... I'm in a bad mood. Tomorrow I'm taking an entry exam for college and I'm very nervous xD
1,190 2011-06-28 09:58:04
Re: The history for those unaware. (235 replies, posted in The Old Republic Cantina)
No, I'm not
1,191 2011-06-28 08:41:44
Re: A New Begining (4,277 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)
Yeah, Nickelbacks <3
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George nodded. "Then we have work to do. Tomorrow I'll go to explore the countryside for this tomb. I'll read the rest of the archives maybe I'll find some references to it to help me. Other than that, I'm not sure what else to do." He waved his head and took a bottle of bourbon and filled his glass. He pushed the bottle to the Riordan's side of the table, so he could drink. "And I wonder who's the woman from my vision..." He took a sip from the glass and cleared his throat. "Never mind..."
1,192 2011-06-28 05:58:09
Re: Bye...for now (179 replies, posted in The Old Republic Cantina)
You're right. I don't want to know -.-
1,193 2011-06-28 05:56:35
Re: My job (200 replies, posted in The Old Republic Cantina)
Omg 
No comments xD
1,194 2011-06-28 05:55:19
Re: The history for those unaware. (235 replies, posted in The Old Republic Cantina)
Well, you have encouragement from a friend, not from a fan... xD
1,195 2011-06-27 19:21:14
Re: A New Begining (4,277 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)
Until you post, let's play some music xD
Igor Garnier vs Duck Sauce - Milka Canic (Official HD video)
Anyway, so Razvan is more powerful than Mortis?
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1,196 2011-06-27 19:18:36
Re: Bye...for now (179 replies, posted in The Old Republic Cantina)
Hahahaha... That's a good one xD
1,198 2011-06-27 19:17:04
Re: AWESOME LIGHTSABERS!!!!!!! (117 replies, posted in The Old Republic Cantina)
now that would be scary xD
1,199 2011-06-27 17:36:38
Re: A New Begining (4,277 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)
George couldn't resist but to look at Rioardan's sword when he mentioned it's name. Is it alive. Looks like this guy is crazy. But so will he, if they don't kill Razvan. Fifty years ago?! How is he so young still? But it didn't matter, all he now thinks off is killing Razvan.
"They are mortals like we are..." He whispered that when the noble said that they were just mortals."Yes more power will surely do. But I thought that the Elders had somekind of knowledge about these vampires. And plus, there was something mentioned in their archives about regaining memories..." He made a pause to see if that ment something to Riordan, but he still continued. "I thought about it and I remebered the vision that I had before I was tainted. I saw planet Naboo, a tomb and a young woman. And that was the prime reason I came here... And I thought that I should look for the tomb in the Elders archives." He clunched his fist and whispered... "Memories..."
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Yeah yeah... Can use the force to move a planet? xD
1,200 2011-06-27 13:22:23
Re: A New Begining (4,277 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)
George was suspicios, he sensed some kind of struggle inside Riordan. But why's that? How does he know all this? He wondered if he... No... His eyes suddenly widen. It can't be. "You're tainted too... That's the only way you could know all this. Through the visions that black smoke gives you. We can defeat him. You and I..." He made a pause... "We could kill even his master..." he smiled evilly on that thought. "Ou, they won't kill anyone else."
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I wonder how should George kill Razvan if he's thousand times stronger. xD
