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Authors Notes: This part is long. You’ll find out why Deisa almost cries when he says Bastila Shan. You will have A LOT of questions after this (hopefully). I hope you like it!!!!! Rate from one to ten please! It’s my first [R] rating, but still read it!! It’s only for something that happens at the end.

Revan started training with Kreia at noon.

“You must feel the force.”

“I’m trying!!!!!!!”

“Don’t be impatient.”

“Don’t be impatient.” Revan mocked under her breath.

“Don’t think I can’t sense that.”

Revan had been meditating for an hour, trying to feel the force. She wished that Master Kavar was her Master, Revan found him attractive, even though she was ten and he was twenty-eight.

“You find Kavar attractive, eh?”

Revan got hot with embarrasment.

“Do you know that he’s the youngest Jedi Master in the history of our order?”

“No.”

“Well, he is. Also, your not allowed to fall in love if your a Jedi.”

“I heard you the first time back at my house.”

Revan thought back to the horror dreams she had the night before. One of the dreams had been a man in a orange jacket saying, “I don’t love you.” Well, why would that be a nightmare? Revan thought to herself. The man in the orange jacket was VERY hot in Revans opinion. If I only knew his name…

“Intresting thoughts.”

“WHAT!?!”

“I told you, I can sense your thoughts.”

“Well can you stop?”

“No.”

Revan sighed. She would have to keep her thoughts to herself untill she wasn’t training with Old-Lady-Kreia.

“Old-Lady-Kreia?”

Revan got hot with embarrasment.

“I apologize master.”

Kreia stared down at the bowing girl.

“I forgive you. Now start meditating!”

Revan meditated for another 30 minutes.

Suddenly, sparks appeared around the room.

“You’ve done it, you’ve caught the force. This move is called ‘Force Catch’”

Revan felt more happy than she ever had in her entire life. Except, now that she thought about it, the man in the orange jacket made her feel happy and… in love.

Suddenly the Force Catch stopped.

“You thought about love, which prevents you from doing Force Catch.”

“But, I think you’ve had enough training for today.”

“THANK YOU!!!”

As Revan was leaving the room, she turned back.

“Master Kreia?”

“Yes?”

“What is Force Catches purpose?”

“Well, to distract your enemy.”

“From…?”

“The battle.”

“So I can…?”

“Maybe, flash them with lightning.”

“I’ll be able to do lightning?”

“If you study and practice, yes. Now go!”

“Yes Master Kreia.”

Revan was walking throught the halls to get to her room when a white figure passed her. Revan looked back. The figure was staring at her. She suddenly relized it was a ghost, of the man in the orange jacket.

“Please don’t go Rev.”

“I promise I’ll be back.” Revan said in a voice that was ten years older.

The ghost faded.

“What was that? That wasn’t my voice….”

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You wake up in the middle of the night with cold sweat drenching your covers. “That was the first time I dreamt about sis….” You hear Zii sleeping in the corner. The ship was on auto-pilot for Corascaunt. You decide to take a midnight walk around the ship.
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Zii wakes up 30 minutes after Jessica gets up. He had dreamt that he and Jessica had gotten married on the beach of *****. Zii decides to take a walk around the ship
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Deisa wakes up 10 minutes after Zii gets up. Deisa had dreamt that he hadn’t said to Bastila what he did. Deisa had said, “Come with me.” in real life, but in the dream, he said, “Just joking sweetie.” In real life, Bastila responded, “No, we already violated one rule, I won’t follow you.” In the dream, she had responded, “That’s not funny Deisa!!!!” Deisa decides to take a walk around the ship.
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T3-M4 wakes up 5 minutes after Deisa gets up. T3 had dreamt (if droids can dream) that he had gone with Revan to ***** and never met the exile. T3 decides to take a roll around the ship.
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HK-47 wakes up 15 minutes after T3 gets up. HK-47 had dreamt that he hadn’t killed almost all of his previous masters. While he was dreaming that his memory core was activated and he remembered pointing a rifle at Zii’s head. HK decides to take a walk around the ship.
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Everyone avoids everyone on coincidence… until now. Everyone walks into the center of the ship at the same time. Everyone looks at each other, with expressionless faces. Everyone starts laughing. “Why the hell are we laughing?” Zii says, rolling around on the floor with laughter. “I don’t know!” you say, also rolling on the floor. “I think this is just one of those moments were your laughing for no reason.” Deisa says, holding his sides with laughter. “Bee-boo!!!!!!” T3 beeps. “Amused Comment: I find this amusing master, for no reason!!!!!!!” “Should we go to bed now?” Deisa says, letting go of his sides. Immediately, you and Zii stand up and say, “Yes, of course.” In a serious way.
5 seconds later
“Oh my god! Why are we laughing?”
“I don’t know!!!!”
“You guys couldn’t even get through saying, ‘Yes of course’!!!!!”
“Bee-boo!!!!”
“Over-the-top Amused Comment: I believe I’m about to explode!!!”
Everyone stops laughing and stares at HK-47.
“Okay, HK… that was over-the-top.”
“Response: Master, that is why I said, ‘Over-the-top Comment’!!!”
“Now I seriously think we should go asleep.” Deisa says. “Yes, we should.” you respond. “I agree.” “Bee…” “Agreement: Yes, we should.” Everyone walks out of the room.
The next day.
You wake up in the morning. You stay in bed and think about the night before. Why the hell were we laughing? you think to yourself. You don’t hear Zii in the corner so you assume that he got up and went to the cockpit. “Things have been tense between us, maybe we should… talk.” you think to yourself
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When Zii wakes up he immediately goes to the cockpit. He could see Corascaunt shining in the distance. (The reason it shines is because Corascaunt is mostly made up of glass and metal). Zii gets the ship off auto-pilot and starts steering it to land on Corascaunt.
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Carth Onasi wakes up in his office, apparently he worked so hard he fell asleep in his office. The comm is ringing loudly. “Carth? Carth? Are you there?” came Bastila Shans voice. “Read you loud and clear.” Carth replies, yawning. The small projection of Bastila raised her eyebrows, “Not again.” she says, smiling. “Shut up!!!! Why don’t you try being an admiral of the Republic.” Carth replies. “Just tell me what you want.” Carth says, more calmly. “Well, two things. My mother is feeling better,” Carth got warm inside. “and the Ebown Hawk sent in a transmition to dock here in 20 minutes.” Carth started chocking on his breakfast. “WHAT!?!?!?!?!?!?! I GOT TO GET READY!!!!!!!!!!” Bastila smiles. “Well, I’ll leave you to your… freshening up.” Bastila says, her figure flashing away. Carth immediately started taking off his light-battle armor and put on his, to Revan, sexy, orange jacket. What the hell was I thinking!?!?! Carth thinks to himself. He stinked, he needed to take a shower. He ripped off his orange jacket and jumped into the shower.
Carth got out of the shower, smelling like flowers from Naboo. My fangirls would’ve died to see me in the shower. Carth thinks. Carth’s fan club (made up of all girls and one gay boy…) followed him like, everywhere. It got annoying after a while. It’s nice that people like me, but, it’s slightly creepy. At least Revan likes me for me and my good looks. 10 minutes has past since Bastila called him, 10 more minutes to get to the docking bay and greet Revan.
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The Ebown Hawk started it’s decent onto Corascaunt. You say to Zii, “What should we expect when we get down?” “Not a welcoming party.” Zii responds. You get excited and nervous about returning to your home planet.
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Deisa is meditating in his room while the Ebown Hawk is starting it’s decent onto Corascaunt. “I’m sorry…” Deisa says through the force to Bastila. He starts crying.
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“I’m sorry.” Deisa’s voice says to Bastila while she waits at the docking bay. Bastila almost falls over. Nothing can replace for what you did to me. Bastila responds, holding back tears.
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“Nothing can replace what you did to me.” came Bastila’s response. Deisa starts sobbing. I really am sorry, you know I am. Deisa urges.
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“I really am sorry, you know I am.” Deisa says again to Bastila. Bastila starts crying. No I can’t, I don’t want to go back to the way things were, I’m fine the way I am.
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“No I can’t, I don’t want to go back to the way things were, I’m fine the way I am.” Bastila says through the force. You might be, but I’m not. Deisa responds.
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“You might be, but I’m not.” Deisa says. Bastila gets on her knees and starts sobbing. Bye Deisa. Bastila whispers.
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“Bye Deisa.” Bastila whispers. Deisa starts force chocking himself. He stops, falling unconcious. I’m in the Eb- Deisa says, right before falling unconcious from chocking himself.
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“Kl-kl-k-k-k-k-k-k-k. I’m in the Eb-” Deisa says. Bastila faints, knowing he meant the Ebown Hawk.
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The Ebown Hawk starts flying into the docking bay. “You were wrong Zii, there is a welcoming commitee.” you say.
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Carth runs out on the docking bay, seeing Bastilas body there. He drags her body out of the way so the Ebown Hawk doesn’t squash her. “Bastila, Basssssstilaaaaa.” Carth whispers. “BASTILA!!!!!” Carth slaps her in the face. “Huh?” Bastila grunts. “The Ebown Hawk is coming.” Carth whispers. “Oh, right.” Bastila says, getting up. “Revans coming, Revans coming, Revans coming!!!!!” an 18 year-old Mission shouts, skipping into the docking bay. She’s followed by Zallabar, Juhani, Canderous Ordo, and Jolee Bindo. “So, the kids coming huh?” Jolee says. “Yeah, we would appriciate NO sarcasm, you old geezer.” Carth says. “Thats my line!!!” Mission shouts, running at Carth, pushing him down. “Nice push Mission.” Bastila says, using the force to push Mission down. Everyone starts laughing, including Mission. At that moment Trask Ulgo walks in, followed by a fleet of Republic soldiers. The Ebown Hawk flies in.
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You and Zii look at all the people in the docking by from the cockpit. “Who the hell are they?” Zii says. “No idea.” you respond. You and Zii get HK-47 and T3-M4. You all walk out of the ship. Immediately a man runs towards you and starts kissing you.
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Zii watches as a man runs at Jessica, kissing her. What the hell is he doing? Zii thinks.
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The man un-embraces you. “Revan!!!! I can’t believe it!!! It’s you!!!!” the man says, smiling. “My name is Jessica, I’m Revan’s younger sister. You’re Carth Onasi, aren’t you?”
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Carth runs at Revan, kissing her. She lost her kssing skills. Carth thinks to himself. “Revan!!!!! I can’t believe it’s you!!!!!” Carth says, smiling. Damn it!!! I forgot to brush my teeth!! Carth thinks to himself when Revan looks at him weirdly. “My name is Jessica, I’m Revan’s younger sister. You’re Carth Onasi, aren’t you?”
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Carth Onasi looks at you with his jaw open. The woman behind Carth closes her eyes. “How do we know she didn’t steal, the Ebown Hawk?” a Cathar in the back says. “She didn’t steal it.” a voice says behind you. You look back. Deisa is walking out of the ship.
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“Why the hell is he here?” Master Kavar says, walking into the bay. Master Kavar activated his dual lightsabers, force jumping at Deisa. Deisia activated his green lightsaber (he didn’t get his red out) and started fighting Kavar. You notice that he only did defence, not ever attacking. “STOP!!!!!!! WE SHOULD GIVE HIM A CHANCE!!!!!!!!!!!!!” an old man shouts. Kavar de-activates his lightsaber. “Fine.” Kavar says. “Okay, what the hell is going on?” you say, confused. “He-he was a Jedi, he fell to the darkside and he came back, saying he was good. We didn’t believe him, so he left. And here we are now.” A man says, walking in. “Master Vrook! What are you doing here? I thought I was the only Master who survived Kreia’s attack!!!!!!!” Kavar says, hugging Vrook. “Okay, so Jessica, why did you come here?” the woman behind Carth says. “I need to talk to the council in private.”

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Your in a room with the Jedi Council, talking. The Jedi Council is made up of these people, Kavar, Vrook, Bastila, Revan (when she comes back), the Exile, and Jolee. “So, these visions are just like Revan and I’s visions, of the Star Maps.” Bastila says. “We should train her.” Vrook says. “I agree.” Kavar puts in.

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“I would like to award you with the title of Padwan.” Master Kavar says to you. You’ve already mastered the Jedi Code, made a lightsaber (double-green), chose to be a Jedi Consular, and fought someone with a lightsaber (Bastila).

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“She should go find the thing no other Jedi has.”

“No, that would for sure lead her down the path of darkside.”

“I agree with Kavar, she would become worse than Revan when she was on the darkside. And, how do we know that it even exsists?”

“Where do we get the force? Ask yourself that Jolee.”

“We could get someone to go with her, like how we got Bastila to go with Revan.”

“Deisa?”

“No, we still can’t trust him.”

“We all have issues with Deisa, but you seem to have a bigger problem Bastila.”

Bastila blushed, and got angry at the same time.

“I just despise the darkside, and Deisa went down the darkside.”

“So that’s why you’re so paranoid. And, of course, you never turned to the darkside.

“JOLEE!!!!!!”

“Sorry sweetheart, it’s just you were VERY paranoid when we were searching for the Star Forge.”

Bastila grunted and crossed her arms.

“So, we are going to send her with Deisa to find it?”

“Yes.”

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“Jessica?” Master Shan asks you. “Yes?” you respond, not stopping you’re lightsaber training. “I need you to come with me.” Bastila says, urging you away.

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“So, you want me to find the ‘Heart of the Force’?” you ask the council. “Yes.” Master Bindo says, smiling. “And we want you to go with Deisa.” Master Vrook says. “Um… how do you expect me to do that?” you ask. “By finding the Heart of the Force on some other planets.” Jolee says simply. “Oh, I get it, I’ll just find the invisble thing on each planet and then go to an invisble thing in space.” you say sarcastically. “One more thing, you must use the lightside to make the heart on the lightside.” Master Shan puts in. “Okay, I’ll do my best.” you say.

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Deisa is walking along the halls of the Jedi Temple. It’s good to be back, free. Deisa thinks to himself. “Deisa!” a voice from the right says. Bastila is poking her head out of a room. “I need to talk to you.” Deisa walks into the room. “First of all, I’m sorry.” Deisa says while Bastila closes the door. “I forgive you.” Bastila says, walking at Deisa. “So, now what?” Deisa asks. Bastila starts kissing Deisa. Deisa grabs her arms and pushes her away, his hand still on her arms. “Wait, I thought Jedi were forbidden to love.” Deisa says. Bastila whispers, “They postponded it, ever since Revan and the Exile got in love, the council needed to think about it.” “Oh, okay.” Deisa says, smiling. They get closer and closer to each other, until finally, they start vigorously kissing, Bastila taking off Deisa’s shirt, Deisa putting his arms under her robe. They flopped into the bed, embracing in their love.
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Authors Other Notes: I didn’t want to get into much detail with Deisa and Bastila kissing, but then again I want it to be romantic. To explain the confusion you might have with Deisa and Bastila, here’s the explanation. Deisa and Bastila got married at the age of 22:Bastila, 24:Deisa. Deisa turned to the darkside, asking Bastila to come with him. Bastila said no, so Deisa left. 4 years later Deisa came back, saying he was good. The Jedi attacked and Bastila told him that she hated him and never wanted to see him again. Deisa left again, then met you on Tattoine, and then came back with you to Corascaunt. Hope you liked it!!!! =D

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