fan fiction scrollAdventures of Asta and Corick Onsai Part 1

 Atton RandCarth OnasiExile (Female/Light Side)

Author’s Notes: Sorry guys, I know that you want to see more of Asta and Corick Onsai (they are Revan and Carth’s children), Vulcan Skywalker and his pet strill Myrill in action more(if you don’t know what I’m talking about that’s fine, don’t worry about it). I haven’t thought of them for a while due to school work and other stories that kept popping out of my head. Well, here you have it folks – go on and read about my favorite Force-Sensitive smugglers (Atton Rand is my fav Force-Sensitive scoundrel) and a very loyal bounty hunter with his ugly strill. If you got questions to ask, I’ll answer them as best I could without giving anything out.

Chapter 1 Rescue

 

“Asta, I must admit something to you I cannot leave alone you alone in the galaxy. I feel the need to protect you, the woman I care about. So I’ll be staying with you for now,” Vulcan Skywalker blurted out, ”I pledge myself to you so I’ll take off this helmet.”

Asta Onsai was amazed at what she saw, Vulcan looked like a handsome, attractive man still in his early-twenties; he doesn’t appear the person who could’ve killed his hunting clan in the holo vids. He placed his helmet on the table, handed a plate a food on the floor for his pet, and began to eat.

“Think I’m handsome?” Vulcan asked without looking away from his plate when it looked like that Asta was staring blankly at him.

Asta realized how long she had been staring and looked away as she blushed. “No, what makes you think that? You have something on your face. Use a napkin.” She lied as she stood up from her chair. “Come on, finish up your meal and get back to work. We have a lot to work to do before heading to Nar Shaddaa.”

She picked up her unfinished plate and headed to the galley to wash it. Everyone soon finished their meals and got working on the hyperdrive and other needed repairs. Asta watched progress from the viewpoint of the cockpit, making sure everything runs smoothly. The strill Myrill sat back in awe as it watched its Master and Corick working, their hands dirty. Vulcan looked down when Myrill whined from being left out.

“You want to help, Myrill? Good boy! Here hold this for me.” Vulcan said to his pet as he handed it a hydrospanner.

The strill took the handle of the hydrospanner in its massive jaws and sat back on its haunches. Drool ran down the tool and pooled on the floor.

“Hey, hey, we can’t that here!” Corick Onsai shouted. “We just that floor cleaned!”

“Anyone who doesn’t like my friend Myrill can go shoot themselves.”

“Vulcan, it’s the ugliest thing in the galaxy,” Corick explained as he held his nose. “And we’ve seen plenty of ugly. Also it smells. Bad to add.”

“A little natural musk never hurt anyone. Only humanoids can truly really smell their stink. Ugliness is an illusion, Onsai. Like beauty. Like color. All depends on light.” Vulcan looked at the corner of his eye as Asta Onsai walked in the meeting room from the cockpit. “But your sister on the other hand, is truly beauty beyond words.”

“Do you even listen to yourself when you talk like that?”

“Do you look in a mirror in the morning?”

“Hey, speak for yourself! I look fine! I’m a carbon image of my old man!”

“Hey, cut out the chit chat there and get back to work,” Asta Onsai said. “We just receive a faint emergency signal from a abandoned ship. We should go and help them. We’re closing in on their location. The ship is called Restoration.”

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Republic Cruiser – Restoration

Young Jedi Knights Jaq and Isabet Rand sat down cross-legged on the floor meditating in their Starboard quarters. They are Jedi that came aboard Restoration to travel to Dantooine, Telos, Coruscant and many other worlds to help rebuild the Jedi Order as a whole. A male traveling companion, Yera Falls is a Jedi Master who them at a young age under their parents’ orders. A Republic soldier, Lieutenant Jack Roberts is placed under direct command to escort them safety and tend to their every need.

“Jedi Knights Jaq and Isabet Rand, do you require anything at all?” Roberts asked again for the fourth time today as he entered in their room.

“No, thank you, Lieutenant,” Jaq waved his hand. “We just need peace and quiet.”

“Are we closing in on Dantooine yet?” Isabet asked.

Roberts shook his head. “No, not yet ma’am. We will be soon.”

Yera Falls stood up from his chair. “Something is wrong.”

As soon as the minute he said that, Roberts took out his blaster. Jaq, Isabet, and Yera took out their lightsabers. Blue, green, and purple lightsabers glowing brightly in the quarters as the lights grew dim. Suddenly the glass from the lights exploded and crashed as they head for cover.

Surpise Attack! When unknown stealthed assassins appeared out of no where with Force-Sensitive Devoring Spiders. The assassins locked out all the escape pods and nearly disconnected calls for help. They have nearly killed everyone except for the Lieutenant and the Jedi. Unfortunately for the assassins, the spiders betrayed their masters and killed them. Without a master, they were uncontrolled with bloodlust that they captured the Jedi in their silky webbs, to feed on their Force powers for later. Not being Force-sensitive, Lieutenant Roberts was left all alone to request for help through tranmissions, hiding away from the spiders. He finds himself outnumbered and needed backup quick. He discovered he couldn’t go out far for help but he found a nearby ship.

“Whoever is out there, please we request assistance. Now.” He breathed hard, frightened that he would be next. He would protect the Jedi even if it costs his life.

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“Whoa,” Corick gasped as he took a look around the cruiser. “Where is everyone?”

“I don’t know,” Asta treaded with caution in the hallways, holding a flashlight. “It doesn’t feel right here. I… feel weak for some reason. Can you feel it?”

“Yeah, I feel cold and stiff,” He clutched a blaster tightly for comfort. “What’s going on here?”

“Why don’t we go and find out?” Vulcan said as he walked passed Asta and Corick with Myrill at his side. “Let’s take a look around then get out of here.”

Inside the Republic cruiser, was dark and empty like a ghost ship. Asta and Corick followed Vulcan and Myrill silently in the hallways. It was pitch-dark except for the flickering of the busted lights. They heard something dripping and saw red liquid on the floor. They stopped to a complete halt when Vulcan spotted three people, a young girl, a young boy, and a older man, unconcious and wrapped in a silkly spider web against a wall.

“Who are they?” Corick asked.

“Must be the survivors. But where was the distress signal coming from?” Asta looked at the people. “They look alive just knocked out.”

Vulcan took out a virboblade knife from his boot and began to cut away at the webbing but failed. “It couldn’t cut through! What’s this stuff made out of?”

Corick noticed a slender cylinder on the floor and picked it up. He pushed the button and a beam of pure green energy burst out. A lightsaber! He instinctly swept it at the web as though he had done it for years. The web burned and sizzled away like paper, weaking its hold. The people slided down slowly on to the floor.

Asta dashed to her knees to gather up the boy in her arms. “Can you hear me?” He awakened by her touch.

“Who… who are you?” He asked as he blinked at her.

“Does that matter now? We’re here to save you. Tell me what happened here.”

“Assassins came… Spiders captured us… Everything went black…”

“We got you now. Let’s get to the ship where it’s safe.” Asta stood up and the boy leaned his weight against her so he could walk. Corick and Vulcan lifted up the old man and girl and headed for the ship while Myrill followed to the safety of the ship.

They lied the survivors down on the cots in the med bay so they could rest. Corick searched them for any weapons while Asta pilots the Adept. He expected to find bombs or bloody virboblades but found more strange cylinders and took them away. Just in case, these people are murders or imposters. You can never be too careful… Rule Number One in the handbook.

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I was playing around with this story. The reason why the whole Female Revan, Carth Onsai, Female Exile, and Atton Rand are in here is because this is about their children. The kids are about 18 years old. Again, I was just playing around with this that’s why it kinda sucks. It’s not a very serious story. I guess I could write more about them.

Oh, I almost forgot. Happy New Year!

 

 

 

 

 

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3 Responses to “Adventures of Asta and Corick Onsai Part 1”

  1. MaggOnasi says:

    ..wasn’t there already a part 1?

  2. Darth Shiin says:

    Who is Vulcan Skywalker, Anikans great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great, well, you get the picture, grandfather?

  3. but i was just playing around a bit. do that all the time with stories
    well… um… yeah

    in a matter of speaking Revan is the ancestor and Vulcan got his surname from walking across the skies…yeah… so… um… man! i’m getting confused now! yes Vulcan Skywalker is the grandfather of Anakin Skywalker… i think

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