Star Wars: KOTOR Story 7-Action!
Bao-Dur looked out the window. He was in some kind of mercenary camp on Telos. He had no recollection of how he had gotten there. All he remembered was trying to tend to the cannok herds, and then he heard footsteps come up behind him, and then everything went black. “Ungh…where am I?” he asked himself. “Oi! Keep quiet, you git!” one of the mercenaries shouted at him from outside. He did as instructed, but that didn’t silence his thinking. I’ve been captured by mercenaries. Typical. They feel threatened by the Ithorians, so this is the best Czerka can tell them to do. Well, they’ve got another thing coming!
Standing up, Bao-Dur checked the power in his left arm. He had lost about everything below the shoulder during the Wars. He had had it replaced with a gravi-arm. Seeing that it was at full power, he prepared for action. He pulled his arm back. With full force, he did an uppercut on the force cage holding him. It fizzled out almost instantly. Just then, the mercenaries came in. “Hey, he escaped! Get him!” Bao-Dur just smiled calmly. The mercenaries rushed at him, blasters in hand. He hit the first one so hard it knocked the damned guy out and caused him spit up a little blood. The next guy was just plain knocked out.
Mercenary after mercenary, he attacked. He eventually was face to face with the merc leader of the site. “Well, well, well. The Zabrak managed to attack and knock out my men. Never mind that. It’s MY turn to fight you. You WON’T be surviving this attack.” Bao-Dur said nothing. Instead, he again braced himself. The leader rushed at him, ready for hand-to-hand combat. Their fists met each other with force. This was the same result for the two times that followed. Finally, Bao-Dur saw a weak spot. When the leader rushed at him, Bao-Dur punched his stomach, shattering his armor.
The leader gasped in pain. Bao-Dur continued to punch him. The leader begged. “Mercy. Mercy, please!” Bao-Dur looked at him. “Sorry, no can do!” He slammed his fist hard into the leader’s face and shattered his skull. Bao-Dur heard the sickening crunch of it. The leader’s lifeless body fell to the ground. Feeling remorse for only a few seconds, Bao-Dur left the area. He began to wander around the planet’s surface for a couple of days. Eventually, he saw a shuttle crash nearby. He ran quickly to the scene.
In another part of the Galaxy, the Ravager drifts through space. Aboard it is none other than Darth Nihilus. He has now managed to gain multiple slaves and even an apprentice. Visas Marr is his apprentice, and she is kept in line with the fear of pain. On Nar Shaddaa, Mira is out hunting…
Why isn’t Mira and Visas in the catagories?
Good story though
I agree… ACTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is awesome!!
Not trying to tell you how to run your stories, but I like more of a comedy story, ya know. If you did put comedy in this one, please explain where.
MaggOnasi, I think the comedy is the fact that Bau-Dor killed a bunch of people.
Kinda. He’s seen as the peaceful type. And the part where the mercenary tells him to shut up. Nobody says anything like that in the games.
I wish they would…