Author’s Notes: So, new series. This is Soran and my idea. It will get a littl– I MEAN A LOT, of blood. The story is about the Ancient Sith. (Freedon Nadd, Marka Rangos, Naga Sadow, Anjunta Paul, and all those other Sith Lords.) So, yeah!!! Soran might write a few chapters if they want to. Listening to Loose Lips by Kimya Dawnson and Piazza. The New York Catcher by Bellie and Sebastian. Did not draw picture, or know who did. It’s Naga Sadow by the way.
Tales of the Ancient Sith
Chapter One
Plans
Two Sith Lords silently walked across Koribans vast desert. Neither of them spoke. One of them was Naga Sadow. He was a human, once, a long time ago. He was about 2.5 meters tall. He had pitch black hair and gray cracking skin. His pupil had left his eye and turned into a bright dirty yellow. The whites of his eyes were replaced with red. The place were blue used to be was the same color as his “pupil”. Naga Sadow wore a flowing black robe. The robe looked like silk and flowed the way silk would. Except the, “Silk” was armor capable of defying any hits from ANY weapon except a lightsaber. There was some red trim across his hat; which was one his head. He also had a short black mustache. His crimson red lightsaber hung at his belt.
Marka Ragnos, on the other hand, was a half breed: a mixture of a Twi’lek and a Human. His skin was as white as you can get. It also had numerous cracks, some from battles, some from the darkside. Ragnos’s eyes, unlike Sadow’s, was completely red. Not a touch of white was there. He was about 1.9 meters tall. He must’ve been attractive once, once. He had a gray robe with black trim across the hood; which was up. His short duel red lightsabers in the palm of his hand. Marka Ragnos also had a unique thing about him. He had two extra lekku’s coming out of his neckand up on to his face. The lekku’s were long so they wrapped around his face twice so all you could see was his eyes. He could lower the lekku’s whenever he wanted to if he wanted to speak.
On Korriban it was nighttime. The stars casting very few light. Korriban had no moon; which didn’t help the light situation. There was nothing on Korriban except hills, hills, hills, and more hills.
The two Sith Lords had come to Korriban to start the Sith. Naga Sadow was born on Inderi, an iner – core world. No one, even Ragnos, knew how he got off Inderi: since the iner – core worlds are next door to a black hole.
“They’ll find us. You know they will.”
“If they do, it’ll be past our time.”
“Do you really want to put all this time and effort into something the Jedi will discover eventually? It will all be put into our apprentices apprentices apprenctices apprentices apprentices ect. hands! Do you want to weigh that burden into our Order?”
“You are worrying about something that is to not be worried about. When we are building it will all unfold to you.”
“Maybe someone else should do the thinking here!!” Marka Ragnos shouted, stopping in his tracks and igniting his sabers.
Sadow stayed calm.
“Lord Ragnos, I didn’t say that you are not going to do the thinking. I just merely have idea’s.”
Ragnos sighed and continued walking.
Sadow stopped walking and smiled.
“This is the perfect spot.”
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If you liked the beginning tell me and I will write more.
nice story!
like shiin said i am helping him/her with this series….(again)
Mostly i come up with ideas and illustrate.
and i might write (a little).
maybe later in the series i’ll post some illistrations.
a little
if you FINALLY get an account on DevianArt maybe you will post art!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
but nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.
what has happened???
everyone like dead or something?
Nope. I’m staying true to my word. No new stories until later this month.
oh, well, your NOT dead…
Soran he’s NOT dead…
oh since you stay to your word, will you go away till 2012?
pleeeeeeeease
Nope. Sorry. Can’t do that. I’m afraid you’re going to have to deal with that.
*whisper* Soran, maybe Nihilus is butter lady!!!
nihilus, since you have a youtube account, can you ask RevanBodygaurd and MaggOnasi why they aren’t on O R anymore?
PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I talked to RevanBodyguard last week. She’s fine. And Magg is grounded, I think.
yeah i am grounded for 2 more weeks for calling revanbodyguard on the phone. i will be back soon!!!!!!
he he, I take that back
I’m not grounded anymore
YOUR BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*fred type of scream*
Magg, you like the new story?????????
No, I don’t like it… I LOVE IT!!!!!!! Lol, write more plz!!!!
k
New story should be up tomoroow. Been itching to write a new one. Gotta get it done before I go to Avril’s concert on Friday.
Dammit. Fucking dammit. She got cancelled. Oh, well. July=DISTURBED, BABY!
uh… that was creepy…
This story sucks ass.
uh, was that a compliment or a “I HATE THIS STORY!!!!!!!”?
lol, someone is on their period
jk
uncomfortable…
i’m gonna start writing the next chapter – sorry for the hold up