fan fiction scrollRevans Shadow: Dreams of Horror.

 Carth OnasiKreiaRevan (Female/Light Side)

Authors Note: I’m brainstorming what to write next so I decided to give a flashback. Happy New Years (If I get it out today).

Revan is pacing around her new room in the Jedi Temple on Corascaunt. Thoughts kept racing through her mind.

“I’m going to become a Jedi!”

“Mom and Jessica…”

“You’ve got to let that go!”

“I think I’m going to cry…”

“About being a Jedi?”

The thoughts raced through Revans mind like Atton chasing after the Female Exile.
After a while her mind settled down and she got to go to sleep.

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Revan had terrible dreams that night. The first one showed a older version of Revan but her skin was all cracked. The second showed the 10 year old version holding a lightsaber but the lightsaber went out of control and sliced through her. The third showed a man in a orange jacket saying, “I don’t love you.” The fourth showed shadows and then a figure coming out, a man who’s skin was cracked everywhere, Revan had never seen him before. “Bad dream? Don’t worry, I can end that.” He then got a blood red lightsaber and sliced it through you.

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Revan wakes up in her room, her mind thinking,

“Who was that man in that orange jacket?”

“Who was that cracked skin person?”

Revan stays up the rest of the night thinking.

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“Are you feeling all right?” Master Kavar asks Revan. “I-I’m fine.” Revan responds nervously. “Well, do you want me to introduce you to your master? Oh, wait, you’ve already met her.” Master Kavar says. “Not old lady, not old lady!” Revan thinks to herself. “Hello.” an old, cracked voice says. It’s Jedi Master Kreia.

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31 Responses to “Revans Shadow: Dreams of Horror.”

  1. MaggOnasi says:

    “The thoughts raced through Revans mind like Atton chasing after the Female Exile.”
    That had me laughing!!
    Gooooooooooooood x 1mill!!

  2. MaggOnasi says:

    The guy in the orange jacket said he didn’t love her?! *cries*

    Not an old lady, and Revan still get’s an old lady XD

  3. Darth Shiin says:

    She has visions of the future. *Ominous Music*

  4. MaggOnasi says:

    of the future… so lemmi guess… the guy was Carth and he isn’t going to love someone anymore…

  5. Darth Shiin says:

    No, she did’t know him back then. But, I mean, It’s Revan! She can do A LOT OF STUFF!! The guy was Carth, but her mind was racing to when she fell in love with Carth, and then her mind made up Carth saying, “I don’t love you.”

  6. MaggOnasi says:

    Ohhh, okaies… I kinda get it now!

  7. MaggOnasi says:

    Oh yea. Darth Shiin… are you a girl or guy?

  8. Darth Shiin says:

    ananomus

  9. Darth Shiin says:

    Not telling.

  10. Darth Shiin says:

    Cracked Skin Guy is Darth Sion, even though Revan never meets him.

  11. MaggOnasi says:

    Sooo, your a guy?

  12. Darth Shiin says:

    I liked this chapter, not to toot my own horn but, toot toot!!!!!!!

  13. The thoughts raced through Revans mind like Atton chasing after the Female Exile. haha!
    OMG! visions and Kreia! *da da dum* i can hear Revan’s funeral, sorry
    about the visions, what about Darth Nihilus, Malak, the Exile, Bastila?
    surely they are important too, right?
    ooo, i love how this is turning out!

  14. Darth Soran says:

    nice, that was amazing! i read it ten times and it’s still not enough!!!!!

  15. Darth Shiin says:

    They’re important, but Revan just gets these people, nothing personal!

  16. Darth Shiin says:

    Oh, and Darth Soran, welcome to ‘Old-Republic.com’!!

  17. Darth Shiin says:

    Did I say I was a guy? No, I’m not telling.

  18. Darth Soran says:

    Thank you Darth shiin. (I joined today)

  19. Darth Shiin says:

    And how does Darth Nihilus effect the series? He or her or it or what ever nihilus is, doesn’t really do anything helpful or unhelpful to the series.
    Besides sending Visas to you. I mean she helps you. Too bad you never see Nihiluses face.

  20. MaggOnasi says:

    WELCOME Darth Soran, are you a guy or a girl sweetie because I call guys sweety and girls hun, so if u don’t tell me, your going to end up like Shiin! The hun/ sweety!

  21. Welcome Darth Soran to Oldrepublic.com

    and Nihilus is a he and now that i think about it, yeah he’s not that important! sorry i said that.

  22. MaggOnasi says:

    We are a very loving family here on OR… i think…

    AND I LOVE CARTH ONASI AND MICHAEL JACKSON!!!!

  23. Darth Soran says:

    “I’d rather end up like shiin if thats ok”. MaggOnasi

  24. MaggOnasi says:

    Fine with me… but I will be watching you closly o_O very closly
    Hope u enjoy OR and I recomend RevanBodyguard’s stories.

  25. Darth Soran says:

    Thanks for the recomendations MaggOnasi, ill be sure to check them out.

  26. Darth Shiin says:

    I’ll not ill. (Sorry, I’m OBSESSED with spelling errors).
    MaggOnasi, just call me Shiin or Darth Shiin.

  27. MaggOnasi says:

    Okay sweety!
    Yes sir Shiin

  28. Darth Shiin says:

    *sigh*

  29. Darth Shiin says:

    Wait, are you trying to make me mad?

  30. MaggOnasi says:

    It depends… are you getting made, hun

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