fan fiction scrollThe Second Coming of Evil – CHAPTER 1

 Bastila ShanCarth OnasiExile (Male/Dark Side)

CHAPTER 1

Darkness; it can consume the lightest of all Jedi. That is where a Jedi must learn to shield oneself from emotion; Love, Anger, Hatred, Hunger for knowledge; these things, as small as they may seem can lead to Obsession, Jealousy … things which are of the Dark Side.

But even the lightest of all Jedi can have their doubts.

As Revan sat in the port dormitory of the Ebon Hawk, meditating, his thoughts always trailing back to thinking of what he must do. Of what he has done.
Leaving the people he most cared and loved behind, to go on his own search of meaning. To where, he did not even know … but he did know, wherever his path would lead him … he could not risk having the people he cared about being with him, not when he himself knew what was ahead.

“No, I can’t think of them … I can’t think of her” he said, as his thoughts dwelled once more on Bastilla. He sunk once more into his meditation, fusing himself once more with the Force, letting it flow through him. He could hear the humming sound of the Hyperdrive as they sped their way through Hyperspace … the general creaks and tickings of the surrounding ship. Deeper he dove into the Force, listening more intently to what was happening in the outer Universe.

“What is that?’ Revan thought quietly as he heard a faint noise … a strain of a whisper, clinging on like as if, it was just waiting for the time for when Revan would hear it.
His thoughts were interrupted once more, stirring him back to reality, but this time it was the sound of an alarm.

“What now?” Revan said as he hurried into the cockpick.

With a slight “oh” of relief, he just noticed that they were running low on fuel.

“Dweep Deet Dee Dwoop!!!”

Revan quickly glanced over his shoulder to see his droid companion T3, the Astromech, come speeding in and slamming into the Co-Pilot’s seat.

Looking down, Laughing, Revan said “it’s ok little man, were just running a little low on fuel, that’s all”
“Dwoo Deet Deweep Deet Dwee Dee Dwoo?”

“No no, no bad guys flying around trying to shoot us out of the sky Revan said, laughing even harder.

“Dwoop Det Deet?”

“We’ll just plot a course to the Peragus Mining Facility. It’s near here, but we will have to lay low, with all this nonsense about the bounty on the Jedi”

With that, T3 left to go back to doing his routine maintenance of the ship, and Revan got to plotting the course for Peragus, unbeknownst as to what they would discover when they arrived.

It’s abit short, but it’s only the first chapter … the others are longer i assure you. This is just to see what youse think about it. If you all like it, i’ll post the other chapters :D

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2 Responses to “The Second Coming of Evil – CHAPTER 1”

  1. RevanN says:

    I like it :).

  2. dr.storyline says:

    pretty neet

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