Revans Shadow: Part 11, Romance.
Authors Notes: You’re probably wondering why I chose this title. It’s what I came up with. I hope you like it! Rate from 1 to 10 please. It’s also kinda short.
You decide to leave two days (so you can practice lightsaber and force powers.) after given the mission from the council. Zii is punching the controls in for Dattoine when Deisa walks in. You notice that his hair is ruffled. “Deisa? Why is your hair ruffled?” you ask. He doesn’t respond. “Deisa, is that lipstick on your lips?” He doesn’t respond. “Deisa? Is that perfume?” you ask. “I SLEPT WITH BASTILA SHAN!!!!!!” Deisa shouts. Your jaw drops open and your eyes widen. Zii stops punching the contorls in and does a 180 degrees turn in the pilots seat, his face iddentical to your’s. Deisa blushes. “And, how long have you known her?” Zii asks. “My entire life. We were padwans together, and then we got married, in our twenties.” Deisa explains. “Okay, there’re some things we have to clear up.” you say, getting Deisa and Zii to come with you to a room.
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“Okay, so you and Bastila were, friends, until your twenties. And then you and Bastila got married.” you say, half to yourself. “It’s more than that, I was in love with her ever since I saw her.” Deisa explains. “Oh, okay.” you respond. “Wait, I thought Jedi weren’t allowed to be in love.” Zii asks. “They postponed the rule, they said they needed to think about it. But Jedi are still not allowed to be like, married, or have a kid.” Deisa explains. “And you think you didn’t have a kid?” Zii asks.
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Deisa thought about what Zii said, Deisa certainly thought that Bastila and himself didn’t make a kid. “No.” Deisa responded.
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Deisa said no, but you’re still not convinced. Deisa didn’t look too convinced either. Zii says, “I’m gonna go punch in the controls for Dattoine.” “I’ll come with.” you respond.
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What Zii asked troubled Deisa, he wasn’t scared of having a kid, but he still didn’t want one. “Hey, Desia, if you do have a kid, can I be the godmother???” Jessica asks playfully. But Deisa wasn’t in a playfull mood.
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You walk into the cockpit asking Zii, “Can you come with me for a minute??” “Hold on.” Zii punches in some more controls. “Okay, ready.”
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You and Zii walk into the room, sitting down on the bed. “Zii??? Were you awake the other night when I- when I- when I kissed you???” you ask Zii, Zii’s eyes widen. “Y-yes.” he responds. “Oh, well, um… do you want to go out sometime, maybe, PLEASE.” you ask him. Well that was lame. you think to yourself. “Sure!!!!” Zii says, his eyes lighting up. “So, now what???” you ask, the after-asking-date nervousness coming onto you. Zii bends forward and starts kissing you. You don’t hold back. Some might say that you and Zii never got past second base, this time….
Meanwhile, in the unknown reigons, Darth Talion gets a transmition from Darth Shiin saying, “I found her, she’s a Jedi now.” “Damn it!!” Talion says, her once-blue eyes (now red) flashing with anger. “Do not worry master, I will destroy them, but there’s one more thing, she has a Jedi with her, Deisa, is his name.” Darth Shiin explains. “SHIT!” Darth Talion shouts. “I trust that you will destroy them, Lord Shiin?” Talion asks. “Of course master, I would do anything for you.” Shiin says, not trying to sound cheesy. “Just kill them.” Talion says. “Master? Have you found it???” Shiin asks nervously. “Not yet.” Talion says through gritted teeth.
I’m sorry for the bold italic, I ment for Talion and Shiin’s scene to be in italic.
LOL Deisa. Just come right out and say it.
Nice work. Good story.
Yeah, he’s a “Say it loud and proud” type a guy.
I can only regret what I’m gonna do to him…
Just give him the LARGEST PIECE OF PUMKIN PIE!!!! and kill him. WHO WANTS WHIP TOPPING?!!!!!!
I might kill him, I MIGHT kill him.
Might. That’s a word I use often. “I MIGHT end the Atton/Exile relationship” (I would NEVER do that!). I have something planned for Ravenstrike… hehehe…
Yeah, I MIGHT kill him, I know what the answer is, but I’m not going to say, so don’t try guessing.
Oh, all right. My new story in the Ravenstrike series is up. The next story will be the final one in that series.
Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet
RevanBodygaurd, MaggOnasi???
Why aren’t you commenting??????
And Pheeramae, comment.
Hey i was gone for a while so don’t blame me, school’s murder!!!!!!! i couldn’t find any time to write which sucks (my parents are kinda against it) but i’ll make time… somehow
Deisa is so funny!
you ask him ““Deisa? Why is your hair ruffled?†you ask. He doesn’t respond. “Deisa, is that lipstick on your lips?†He doesn’t respond. “Deisa? Is that perfume?†you ask. “I SLEPT WITH BASTILA SHAN!!!!!!â€
i think he deserves pie, pie always solves everything
i liked the history you covered between Deisa and Bastila
Thanks, this is my theroy of how Bastila got so paraniod with the darkside because Deisa turned.
Deisa prefers two sabers, but he did his green to show that he was good.
Yeah, I agree, school is murder, but some parts are fun.
Pretty good! What’s this thing with pie? Some sort of inside joke? (I know, I’m dumb.)
comfort food, always solves everything
for example: sweets, chocolate, you know…
not that i do that, i’m not fat! i’m thin! i excercise all the time, thank you very much =P
and no Pheeramae, you’re not dumb
I’m sooooo sorry for not commenting
I’ve been gone for so long!!
AGGGHH
I hate school!!
Anyways, a good 9/10 should cover it
I had a good laugh… ow, and now my sides hurt
No, I am dumb. A dumb blonde . . . I hate school too. But when you’re home-schooled, it’s not so bad.
I like going to school because you meet more people
Home-schooled, you get more work
Now, i’m only in 6th grade and its not so bad.
Haha, I keep forgetting I’m 12 XD XD XD XD XD
wow, I missed alot