fan fiction scrollThe Sound of Revenge Chapter 9

 Atton RandCarth OnasiExile (Female/Light Side)

Notes: Listening to When Your Gone, by Avril Lavigne

The Sound of Revenge
Chapter 9
Starless Night

“What did he say, Atton?”

“Umm. Let me refreash my mind with a candy bar.”

Andria grabbed the collar of Atton’s shirt and pulled him closer.

“You better tell me where Hunter wen’t and if he killed Revan or not!”

“Duh, Hunter killed Revan. But it wasn’t Hunter.”

“Then how did Hunter kill Revan.”

“It was Dustil.”

“But Dustil is at his apartment.”

“Mind-tricks, things your worst nightmare wouldn’t get near.”

“Oh nice to know.” Andria said letting go of Atton.

“Okay, which way did Hunter go?”

“Thata way.” Atton said pointing the way the clerk pointed.

“You did well, Atton.” Andria said clamping him on the shoulder. “Are you coming Carth.”

“No, I’m going to stay here and watch Atton eat a candy bar… no duh I’m coming.”

“Alright. All I needed to hear was ‘I’m coming. C’mon candy boy, we got show biz.” Andria said pulling Atton.

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“How many times have we walked around thing?”

“About a million!” Andria said sitting down on the side of the walkway (thingy).

“Why don’t we split up?” Atton suggested.

“Okay.” Carth agreed.

“Atton. That’s the smartest thing you have ever said.” Andria said patting Atton on the head like he was a well trained dog.

“Why, thank you Andria.”

“The sooner we start looking, the sooner we will find him.”

“Haha, maybe you should go with Atton.”

“Why?”

“Because we don’t want you to kill Hunter.”

“Why would I do that when I know its Dustil?”

“Just in case.” Andria said leaving.

“Soooo, partner.” Atton said nudging Carth.

“Haha, don’t call me that.” Carth said leaving Atton’s side.

“Alright, Sir!”

“Don’t call me that either.”

“What should I call you?”

“How about my name.”

“Oh… okay… I’ll call you that as soon as you tell me what your name is…..”

Atton looked around.

“Carth?” He asked not knowing Carth had left.

~

“Hunter?!” Andria yelled. “Hunter?”

Andria walked down a seem-to-be never ending walk way. She had been looking for Hunter for 5 hours strait. She ran into Carth and Atton who were going home. Andria saw the sky had no stars, which was hard to believe. Telos was a planet that had stars light up the night.

“Hunter! I won’t hurt you.”

“Andria?” Andria heard someone say.

“Who… who’s there?”

Hunter jumped out of the bushes.

“Oh my gosh Hunter, you scared me.”

“I swear its not my fault!” Hunter cried running into Andria’s arms.

“Everyone knows it was Dustil sweety, don’t worry.”

“What about daddy?”

“He’s out looking for you.”

“Is he mad?”

“He’s pissed at Dustil.”

“I don’t want to see him!”

“See Dustil?”

“See my daddy!”

“Why?”

“I don’t want to.”

“You have to confront him sooner or later.”

“Please don’t take me to him.”

“I won’t if you don’t want me to.”

Hunter buried his head onto Andria’s arm sobbing loudly.

“Dustil got Aiedail.”

“What?!”

Hunter looked up to Andria.

“Dustils’ got Aiedail.”

“Do you know where he took her?”

“No.”

“Lets go Hunter.”

“Noooo!”

“I’m not taking you to Carth, don’t worry.”

“Where are we going?”

“We’ll go to my place.”

“Promise you won’t take me to daddy?” Hunter said holding out his pinky.

“I promise.” Andria smiled comferming the promise.

Hunter looked up.

“Why arn’t there any stars tonight?”

“I guess its a starless night.” Andria said standing up and taking Hunter by the hand.

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4 Responses to “The Sound of Revenge Chapter 9”

  1. RevanBodyguard says:

    MaggOnsai springs into action as always!
    ha! this story made me smile!
    *doesn’t like the way you treat or I treat Atton*
    can’t wait to see more!

  2. MaggOnasi says:

    Don’t worry, I’ll make a chapter when you actually be nice to Atton *gasps*

  3. RevanBodyguard says:

    gasping because you couldn’t believe you said that?
    can’t believe it myself
    still that’s good to hear. it’s kinda funny the way i treat or you treat Atton
    *laughs*

  4. MaggOnasi says:

    Yes gasp because I can’t belive I said that Andria was going to be nice… *gasps*

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