fan fiction scrollThe Sound of Revenge Chapter 13&14

 Atton RandCarth OnasiExile (Female/Light Side)

Notes- Listening to Scott Simon’s Umbrella, Queensryche’s Silent Lucidity, Chris Daughtry’s Its Not Over, Trapt’s Stories, and Avril’s When Your Gone. I also used some quotes from a series called Supernatural

The Sound of Revenge

Chapter 13

Just the wind

“Carth, Revan. You two are married. A little advice?” Atton asked sitting next to Carth and Revan.

 ”What do you mean? Your not married… your not married, right?” Revan spoke up.

“No. But I like Andria…”

“Are you going to propose or something?”

“Yes! No! Be quiet. I just need a little advice.”

“I’ll give you advice if you tell me your proposing or not.”

“Okay, I am.”

“Well.” Carth started. “You havn’t known Andria as long and me and Revan known eachother and we JUST got married. Marriage is a comitment you have to keep all your life. You’re going to have to look at the same woman’s face day after day…”
Revan glared at him.

“Not that its a bad thing.” Carth said giving Revan a quick peck on the cheak.

“Well, you two are no help at all.” Atton said making his attempt in leaving.

“Take her out on a date somewhere, and if she refuses, your answer is ‘you have no chance.’” Revan said.

“Yeah. That helps alot.”

“Just take her out somewhere and ignore Revan.” Carth jumped in.

“You think your funny.” Revan said angrily at Carth.

“I think I’m adorable.”

“You think this is funny?” Atton said not wanting to hear anything else from Revan and Carth.

“It depends… what?”

“I can’t just walk up to her and ask do you want to go on a date.’”

“Sure you can.”

“I will. But if she…”

“Just go!”

*******

“Hey Atton, back from your date so soon?” Revan asked as Atton walked in.

“That was as fun as getting kicked in the jewls.”

“Sorry, I’m not a guy. So, does that mean your date went bad?”

“No, no. It actually went great.”

“Be ready when Andria dumps you. She probably will.” Carth said walking in.

“You know, your right. Come here. I’m going to lay my head gently on your shoulder. Maybe we can cry, hug… maybe even slow dance.” Atton said to Carth.

“Yeah, thats one of the many reason’s why she will dump you.”

“What are you talking about? I’m a joy to be around.”

“Really? At your place there’s socks in the sink. Food in the fridge…”

“What’s wrong with my food?”

“It’s not food anymore!”

“That aditude right there… that is why I always get the extra cookie.”

“Dude… we really need to talk privatly about you and Andria…”

“You are one handsome devil, but sorry, I don’t swing that way.”

“I don’t mean that idiot!” Carth snapped.

“I’ll just leave and let you two… talk…” Revan said leaving.

~*

“So… I’m going to die?” Atton asked walking in between Carth and Andria.

“No.” Andria said annoyed.

Carth sighed.

“But Hunter…”

“Yes, you are going to die.”

“But you just said I wasn’t.”

“Then your not.”

“But then you said I was… so am I or not?”

“Good question.”

“If you die, then you die. If you live, you live. Does that answer your question?” Carth asked.

“No. Not really.” Atton replied.

~*

“Sooo, Aiedail. Its been two day since we’ve been in here. Ever think someone is going to get us?”

“How should I know?”

“Well grrrr, just asking. Man, I’m starving.”

“Your not the only one!”

“Hey. Do you hear that?”

“Hear what?”

Zoey got up from where she sat and pressed her ear against the dull wall.

“Sound’s like someone is there.”

“I doubt it.”

~*

Atton was sitting in the cockpit shuffling his deck of pazaak cards.Andria walked in. “Whatcha doing, Flyboy?”

“Being bored. What are you doing?”

“Same.”

“Wanna play cards?”

“No thanks. I need to go shower! Nar’shada smells.”

“Can I join you?”

“Save it, Flyboy!”

~

The Sound of Revenge

Chapter 14

Run Away

 

“Hey Hunter.” Carth said as he, Atton, and Andria aproached Hunter.

“Hi daddy! Hi Andria! Oh, Atton is still alive.”

“Be thankful!” Atton snapped.

“So, what should we do?” Hunter asked.

“We should go to a cantina and party like theres no tomorrow!” Atton suggested.

“Or, we could go to a cantina and watch Atton get jumped like last time.” Andria said.

“How about we don’t go to a cantina. There. Problem solved.” Carth said leaning against the wall.

“No! The problem is your son took my daughter!”

“And? Are you going to hold this out on me or something?”

“I never said that!”

“You were sure as hell acting like you were.”

“But I wasn’t.”

“I like pazaak!” Atton said breaking them up.

“Nice Atton.” Carth said giving Atton a thumbs up.

“Thank you Carth… what exactly did I do?”

“You shut the grey monster up.”

“But Hunter wasn’t talking.”

“I was talking about Andria.”

“Hey. Did you hear that?” Atton asked.

“It was probably the wind.”

“Yeah, since when was the last time you heard the wind said ‘help me?’”

“Let’s take a look around. Maybe its Aiedail!” Andria suggested.

“The chick has a point! Andria is my partner.”

“Okay, Hunter is my partner.” Carth said.

“Let’s get a move on Atton!” Andria said walking off with Atton.

“I want to stay here.” Hunter whined.

“Come on Hunt! What’s so scary about this place?”

“Everything!”

“We could go back to the ship.”

“Do you even know where it is?”

“I will as soon as I find it.”

~*

“Why an I always stuck with you, Atton?”

“Would you rather be with Carth over me?”

“Carth.”

“Over me.”

“I know, and I said Carth.”

“So you like Carth better than me?”

“All I’m saying is… ATTON LOOK OUT!”

~

Notes: I wonder what happend to Atton o_O I put 13 and 14 together because 14 is SUPER short!  

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5 Responses to “The Sound of Revenge Chapter 13&14”

  1. MaggOnasi says:

    “You know, your right. Come here. I’m going to lay my head gently on your shoulder. Maybe we can cry, hug… maybe even slow dance.” Atton said to Carth.
    I like that one XD
    “Hi daddy! Hi Andria! Oh, Atton is still alive.”
    And that one!!
    “No thanks. I need to go shower! Nar’shada smells.”

    “Can I join you?”
    Oooo and that one

  2. Oh, FTW awesome and totally funny :) two thumbs up definity! :D
    “Hi daddy! Hi Andria! Oh, Atton is still alive.”
    “Be thankful!” *falls on the floor laughing*
    nope i would choose Atton over Carth. haha
    “Why an I always stuck with you, Atton?”

    “Would you rather be with Carth over me?”

    “Carth.”

    “Over me.”

    “I know, and I said Carth.”

    “So you like Carth better than me?”

    “All I’m saying is… ATTON LOOK OUT!”

    you’re really good at your writing. my stories lack comedy…

    yes, i wonder what happened to Atton, nothing bad i hope :(

  3. MaggOnasi says:

    Hehe, for some reason, your comment made me laugh
    Thank you sis =D

  4. you’re welcome! you deserve all the glory, don’t you think?

  5. MaggOnasi says:

    Yes i do! jk
    *hugs sister so tightly*
    felt like doing that!

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