fan fiction scrollThe Sound of Revenge Chapter 12

 Atton RandCarth OnasiExile (Female/Light Side)

Notes: Listening to Listen to Your Heart by DHT(SLOW VERSION), Flyleaf’s All Around Me, Chris Daughtry’s Its Not Over, Alicia Keys’s No One amd If I Ain’t Got You, The Unborn Band’s cover to Mr. Brightside, Counting Crow’s Accidentally in Love, and The Killers Mr. Brightside, BTW, its getting near the end of the series and you’ll know why its called The Sound of Revenge o_O no guesses please!

The Sound of Revenge

Chapter 12

A strange dream

The Ebon Hawk pulled up close to Atton and Andria’s ship (that does not have a name).

“You came right on time, Carth.” Andria said as Carth boarded onto their ship.

“Where’s Atton?” Carth asked.

“I tied him up. He’s in the cock pit.”

“Oh, nice to know. Why don’t we just take the Ebon Hawk?”

“Good idea. Let’s go, we’re out of gas anyways.”

“What about Atton?”

“Oh ya. Forgot about him for a second there.”

Andria ran off to untie Atton… again.

~*

“No offence Andria, but tieing up your boyfriend isn’t very nice.” Atton said rubbing his sore wrist.

“Suck it up!” Andria snapped.

“Maybe we should just leave Atton.” Carth suggested.

“I will NOT silence my boyfriend.” Andria said.

“Hey, Andria…”

“Shut up! Are we there yet?”

“Almost.” Carth reported.

“Can I fly?” Atton asked.

“No!” Carth and Andria yelled.

“Hold on to something. We’re landing…”

“Can I…”

“No!” Andria and Atton yelled.

“Why is everyone yelling.” A small voice asked.

Everyone turned to the door. Hunter was standing there.

“Hunter, buckle up, we’re about to land.” Carth said.

“Okay.” Hunter said leaving.

~*

“Let’s spilt up.”

“Good idea Andria, but Hunter needs to go with someone.” Carth said.

“How about you? Your the dad.” Atton retorted.

“I’ll take Hunter.” Andria jumped in.

“Yeah, but so do I.” Carth said.

“Let’s do this thing.”

“Rock, paper, scissors.”

Carth had rock, Andria had scissors.

“Again with the scissors…” Carth complained.

“Best two out of three.”

“Okay. 1, 2, 3.”

Carth once again had rock and Andria had scissors.

“Since you get Hunter, I get Atton.”

“Fine. Have fun.”

“I will.”

“Me and Hunter will go this way, and you and Atton go that way.” Carth directed.

“Okay. The way your going looks spooky.”

~*

“Daddy, we’ve been walking for hours. Can I rest?”

“No!” Carth didn’t relize how mean he sounded untill he saw Hunter’s face. “Sorry Hunt, but we want to find Aiedail then get out of here as quickly as we can.”

“Okay. Daddy,” Hunter said tugging at Carth’s sleeve. “What’s that over there?” Hunter said pointing at a dark hole.

“I don’t really know. Let’s take a look at it.”

Carth and Hunter walked over to where the hole was and Carth peeked down into it.

“It looks like there’s a room down there. Maybe we should call up Atton and Andria.”

~*

“I think we’ve already been here, Andria.”

“Yeah. Your right. This entire place is like a maze, just like Dustil said.”

“Wait.” Atton said stopping.

“What?”

“Did you hear that?”

“Hear what?”

“Nevermind.”

Andria clicked on her comlink.

“Carth, did you find anything?”

“I didn’t find anything, but Hunter did.” Carth replied back.

“Um… I would ask where you are but, you probably couldn’t answer that.”

“No, I can’t.”

“Okay. Atton and I are lost so we’ll just turn back around and head the direction you guys went.”

“How are you lost?”

“We don’t know where we are.”

“Nor do we.”

“Good point. Okay, we’ll be right over.”

Andria switched it off.

“What did he say?” Atton asked.

“Hunter found something so we’re turning around.”

“Fine with me. This place is creeping me out.”

“This entire planet looks the same Atton.”

“So what? The planet creeps me out!”

“Whatever. I just want to find Aiedail and leave.”

“So do I.”

~*

“Are they coming?” Hunter asked Carth.

“Yeah. Just sit tight and wait.”

“This place creeps me out.”

“Same here.”

“What are we going to do after we find Aiedail?”

“What do you mean?”

“I don’t know. I had this weird dream that we’re not going to find Aiedail untill I’m nearing my 20′s.”

Carth looked shocked.

“Did you have any other weird dreams?”

“I did. I had one that Dustil killed mommy, but I thought is was just a nightmare.”

“Is that the only other one?”

“No. I had another one where Atton actually proposed to Andria, but that isn’t coming true for sure!”

“Why not?”

“Atton is going to die.”

“How do you know?”

“He told me.”

“Who? Atton?”

“No. I don’t really know who it was, he just came to me in my sleep and told me Atton is going to die.”

“When?”

“Soon.”

Carth’s heart beated faster. Not that he liked Atton, he didn’t want anyone else to be lost.

“We have to go Hunter.” Carth said pulling Hunter up.

“Why?”

“If Atton is really going to die, we have to help him!”

~*

“Ughhh, my feet are killing me.” Andria complained sitting down.

“How long have we’ve been at this?”

“I don’t know, but I don’t think we’re getting any closer to Carth and Hunter.”

“You think?”

“Yes I do, Atton.”

Atton sat down next to Andria.

“I’ve got an idea.”

“No you don’t.”

“…Your right, I don’t.”

“Andria! Atton!” Carth yelled running up to them.

“Where’s Hunter? Is he okay?” Andria asked.

“Yeah, he’s fine.” Carth panted.

“Did you find Aiedail?”

“No. But Hunter is having visions.”

“How do you know?”

“This was happening to Revan before she became a jedi.”

“So, what was his vision’s about?” Andria asked.

“Atton, your in danger, but he also had a vision that you proposed to Andria.”

“Which came first me in danger, or me proposing which I was not planning to do?” Atton said crossing his fingers.

“I don’t know. Why?”

“Just wanted to know.”

“C’mon, Hunter is waiting, and we still need to make sure Atton stays alive.”

“Why?” Andria asked standing up.

“Do you want Atton to be dead?”

“Not really.”

“Well thats why.”

“If it helps, I don’t want me dead either when theres a world full of girls.” Atton said.

Andria glared at him.

“Not that there is one that could replace you… I was joking…”

“Let’s go!” Carth said annoyed.

“Yeah Atton, lets go.” Andria said leaving.

“He was talking to both of us!” Atton said following Andria and Carth.

 

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7 Responses to “The Sound of Revenge Chapter 12”

  1. Darth Shiin says:

    OMG

  2. Happy New Year too! OMG exactly!
    one word: wow…
    you’re really good at writing, that took my breath away completely when the story said Hunter had bad visions or i was wearing a really tight bra at the time reading this… jk this story took my breath away
    can’t wait for more!

  3. MaggOnasi says:

    Hehe, thank you!!!
    Aggghh, don’t mention bra around guys… some might be pervs… Atton…

  4. hey that took my breath away
    and Atton is not a perv, well… um… not really hehe
    the bigger perv is my relative who’s crazy about you for some reason
    don’t tell anyone!

  5. no, not you.
    my brother who has a crush on you! i know gross…

  6. MaggOnasi says:

    so it is me who he has a crush on

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