fan fiction scrollThe Sound of Revenge Chapter 11

 Atton RandCarth OnasiExile (Female/Light Side)

Notes: Listening to Red Jumpsuit Apparatus’s Your Guardian Angel

The Sound of Revenge

Chapter 11

Just in the middle of my midnight nap

Carth lied in his bed tossing, turning, and mumbling things. He wasn’t having a bad dream, nor unpleasant, just a bit of the past. Back when he and Revan first met. She wasn’t a nice person when Carth first met her. She was snotting, ignorant, and annoying. But after Carth opened up to her, she acted more pleasent and nice. Right before the Leviathan collide with them, Carth wanted to tell her, he loved her. But then, he fiqured out she was Revan. He ignored her untill when they were on the beach of Lehon. Carth never knew it, but she loved him too. After they defeated the sith, Carth proposed to Revan, but she turned him down. She said she wasn’t ready to be his wife and there were things out there she needed to do…“Please don’t go, Rev.”

“I promise I’ll come back Carth, right after all this is over.”

“I was already over when we defeated the sith.”

“There’s something I need to fix. I hope you will understand.”

“I’ll understand when you tell me.”

Revan smiled and gave him a peck on the lips then left without Carth stopping her.

~*

“I’m here Carth.”

Carth stood up.

Revan ran into his arms.

“I missed you so much, flyboy!” She cried.

“I missed you too, Rev.”

Revan broke the embrace.

“I sorry about what happend to Telos.”

“Thanks, Rev.”

“Anytime.”

“This is Cassandra.” Carth said pointing to the little girl he was talking to.

Revan kneeled down next to the girl.

“Cassandra is a lovely name.”

“Thank you, miss.” The little girl said. “Your pretty.”

Revan laughed a bit.

“Yes she is.” Carth said making Revan blush. “We should leave.”

Revan stood up.

“You need to get some sleep, Cassandra.”

“It was nice meeting you, miss.”

~*

Revan stood on the balcony looking up at the stars.

“Beautiful isn’t it.” Carth said giving Revan a backwards embrace.

“It is.” Revan breathed.

Revan turned around.

“Is something bothering you?”

“Rev, I wanted to ask you this before you left, but then you turned it down and I’m willing to propose a million times untill you say yes.”

“Why don’t you propose and see what I say?”

Carth got down on one knee and pulled out a ring.

“Will you marry me.”

“I would love to!”

Carth stood up and Revan jumped into his arms.

“Weeeeell, now that you two are engaged, can I be the godmother of your children?”

“Mission!” Carth and Revan yelled pulling apart.

~*

Carth shot up out of bed. The transmitter was ringing loudly and was probably ringing for awhile. Carth got up and switched it on.

“Hey Carth, you busy?” Andria asked.

“No. I was just in the middle of my midnight nap.”

“Well, can you fly the Ebon Hawk out here and help Atton and I?”

“Why?”

“Because we’re almost outta gas.”

“Fine! I’d expect so type of payment.”

“Keep dreaming.”

“Then I’m not going out there.”

“Okay. I don’t care.”

“Okay, I’ll be right over.”

Carth switched off the transmitter and grabbd his orange jacket.

“Daddy, where are you going?” Hunter asked stopping him infront of his room.

“Do you want to come?”

“Yes.”

“Okay, lets go.”

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12 Responses to “The Sound of Revenge Chapter 11”

  1. RevanBodyguard says:

    that’s so cute and romantic!
    i’m so jealous… reminds me of me and my ex-boyfriend… but that’s over
    now having trust issues with boys
    there’s so more to this, i hope?
    what about how the exile & atton’s marriage?

  2. Darth Shiin says:

    Did you copy the Rev idea from me? If not, say so. But ya, it’s VVVVEEERRRRRRYYYYY romantic, I like it!!!

  3. MaggOnasi says:

    No, I didn’t…

    (Atton and the Exile arn’t married)

  4. RevanBodyguard says:

    you know, the idea of Atton being tied up is very funny and amusing

  5. MaggOnasi says:

    that was from the last freaking chapter!!
    But thank you, sis

  6. Darth Shiin says:

    How does the Exile and Atton not being married have to do with anything?

  7. MaggOnasi says:

    Umm… I don’t really know… my paranoid sister wants to know more about the Exile… and Atton

  8. Darth Shiin says:

    Hmmm…. RevanBodygaurd, what do you want to know?

  9. i noticed in MaggOnsai’s earlier stories say Andria Rand and i thought the Exile and Atton must be married then. guess not, oh well!
    i’m not that paranoid, MaggOnsai!

  10. Darth Shiin says:

    I agree

  11. MaggOnasi says:

    You agree RevanBodyguard isn’t paranoid… or the Exile and Atton must be married

  12. TheCoqui says:

    Mission always seems to pop up at the most convinent times

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