fan fiction scrollI Don’t Love You, Part 2

 Atton RandExile (Female/Light Side)Star Wars

Listening to Within Temptation’s Ice Queen (such a short chapter) I also havn’t been feeling so well and I’ve been getting these major nose bleeds, so I might not write a story anytime soon

It’s Not Over

 

“Did you dump me for Mical?”

“No! Eww. No offence hon, but you really need to stop going to the cantina, who knows what will replace your brain next.”

Andria stopped by Atton’s apartment to pick up the rest of her stuff.

“The least you could do for me is leave the dancer’s outfit.”

“Lets look into the future of ‘Things-that-will-never-happen’, first, I would never give you that outfit. Secondly, what if I come back? Wouldn’t you want me wearing that?”

“But its never going to happen.”

“It might if I’m really drunk.”

“I pray that will happen.” Atton said to himself.

“Well, thats all of it.” Andria said packing her clothes and other accesories in a box.

“Want me to walk you down there.”

“Didn’t you say before that was too romantic.”

“What’s so wrong with with a friend walking a friend down to a hanger?”

“Nothing, I guess. You win flyboy.”

“Great, lets go.”

*******

Andria and Atton walked side by side silently.

“So, why can’t you leave the dancers outfit?”

“I don’t really know. But for sure, I’m not giving it to you.”

“Alright. I’m cool with that.”

“No your not.”

“Yes I am!”

“Its obvious your not, Atton.”

“So what if I’m not? All you’re going to do is rub it in my face.”

“Did you mean that physically or mentally?”

“Mentally!”

“Oh. No I’m not, even though I really want to.”

“Yeppers.”

“You can leave now…”

“But what if I don’t want to?”

“Fine! But when we get to the hanger, your gone!”

“Okay.”

*~

Atton left after they got the the hanger.

“Giving up another ring.” Atton dug the ring out of his pocket. “For sure, I don’t need this.”

Atton, once again tossed the ring. As Atton started walking away, he felt someone watching him. He turned around and saw a woman standing there.

“Drop this?” The woman asked.

Atton looked at the ring, then back at her. “No.”

“Woman troubles?”

“I don’t know you!”

“Hmm, I’m a dancer at the cantina, and you seem to really like watching all the dancers there.”

“Your mistaking me for someone.”

“No, no. I’m pretty sure it was you. Looking for the right girl, you seemed to have thrown the other ring too.”

“How do you know?”

“I found it sitting there. I didn’t know it was you untill now.”

“Oh good to know.”

“If there is a girl you want out there, why don’t you go after her?”

“Why would I tell you?”

“Smart boy.” She snarled.

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16 Responses to “I Don’t Love You, Part 2”

  1. Darth Shiin says:

    *Sigh* I thought I told you to not write another, ‘I don’t Love You’…

    But it’s good. Make sure that Atton and Andria get back together… or I’ll kill Zii… if that makes a difference.

  2. Nihilus says:

    Wow.
    You’re making this into a series?
    That’ll be interesting.

  3. Darth Shiin says:

    Hehehe, nose bleeds.

  4. MaggOnasi says:

    Hehehe, not funny

  5. Darth Shiin says:

    Sorry, but don’t tip your head back. Just put the tissue in your nose and wait until it goes away.

    This is advice from a PRO nose-bleeder.

    My friend Soran isn’t feeling good either.

    (Soran isn’t his real name).

  6. MaggOnasi says:

    No, like every morning I have a nose bleed
    Its been going on for about a week now, and I’ve been sick for 2 weeks

  7. Nihilus says:

    Hmmm…
    Maybe you should see a doctor about that.

  8. Darth Shiin says:

    Doctors solve all your problems.

  9. Darth Shiin says:

    Uh oh, are they a good doctor?

  10. Darth Shiin says:

    Hehehehehe, code for, NO

  11. whoo! another story about Atton and Andria!
    poor Atton…. bad Andria…
    they need to do something with their relationship
    Shiin, don’t kill Zii!

  12. Darth Shiin says:

    Oh, you like him???

    If I could show you a drawing of him I would, but I don’t know how.

  13. really?! that would be so cool! you can put it on the computer and provide a link to it
    XD

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