fan fiction scrollKotor 3, Part Five. “She’s taking Rev!!!”

 Star Wars

Authors note: In this chapter you find out who your sister is and you find out who her first master was. You are 7 years old and your sister is 10. This is a flash back part and you find out A LOT OF STUFF!!!!

“Wake up Rev!!!” you say, jumping on your sisters bed. “Ten more minutes.” Revan says tiredly. “Not ten minutes, now!!” you respond, pulling on your sisters arm. “Fine, I’m getting up.” Revan says, lazily getting up and rubbing her eyes. “Rev, guess what.” “What?” “Mom got us breakfast from Frilas Store!!!” “I’m going to get there first!” Revan says, while she gets dressed. “Come on, I’ll race you!” “Hold on! I still need to get dressed you bantha ball!!!” Revan responds. “On your mark,” you tell her. “HOLD ON!! I still need to get my shoes on!” Revan says angrily. “Get set,” “HOLD ON!!!” “GO!!” And in a flash you and Revan are side-by-side racing into the kitchen. “I was here first!!!” you say, smiling. “No, it was a tie!!!” “Fine, what ever you say, Rev-Rev.” “My name is REVAN!” “Okay, sheesh!” “Would you two stop fighting and eat! It cost 10 credits each for this food, you better eat it!” your mom says, annoyed. “Girls, I have some bad news.” You and Revan get silent. “What?” you ask. “Yeah, what?” Revan repeats. “Your father has been sent to Onderon.” “WHAT!” you and Revan scream. “I know, he’ll be back in 6 months.” your mother says with tears in her eyes. “I can’t beleive this.” Revan says, looking at the floor. “Me too.” you say, crying.
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Master Kreia is walking on the streets of Corascaunt, following the force beaming from someone on this street. Kreia plans to find the person, and take them to the Temple for training. The force hits Kreia on her right side. She turns right. And there is a small house right infront of her.
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“Done!” you say, giving your bowl to your mom. “Done!” Revan says, also handing her bowl to your mom. The door knocks. “I’ll get it!” you say, running to the door.
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Master Kreia knocks on the door. A second later it opens. She sees a little girl staring up at her. “Hello.” Kreia says, smiling.
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“Hello.” the old woman says, smiling down to you. “Um… MOM!!!” “What? Oh, hello… Um… Who are you?” your mom says, forcing a smile on her face. “I am Master Kreia, do you mind me speaking to your daughter?”
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“I am Master Kreia, do you mind me speaking to your daughter?” “Me?” you ask. “No, your other daughter.” “Me?!?” Revan says surprised. “Yes, you.” Kreia responds. “Um, okay.” Revan says uncertainly. “How would you like to become a Jedi?”
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“A Jedi!” Revan responds. You start getting jealous. “Yes, a Jedi.” the master responds. “Can I come too?” you ask hopefully. “Maybe, hold on.” The Master then put her old, wrinkled hand on your head.
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Kreia puts her hand on the little girls head. “Is there any sign of the force?” Kreia thinks to herself. “Yes, there’s a trace, but not lightside, or darkside. What is this?” “It’ll be dangerous to have her at the temple.”
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“I’m sorry, I don’t feel anything.” The old lady says, taking her hand of your head. “Oh, well, okay.” you say sadly. “Wait, does this mean I can become a Jedi?” Revan says excitedly. “Yes, it does.” the master answers. “Wow! I never thought this could happen!” Revan says, her breath taken away. “Well, if this is what you want, I guess you can do what you want.” your mom says quietly. “Don’t worry mom, I’ll still be able to see you, won’t I?” Revan says optimisticly. “Well, actually… No you won’t.” The master says.
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“WHAT!!!” Revan screams. “WHY NOT!!” “Emotional attatchments aren’t good for a Jedi, they give you anger in love.” “Huh?” you ask, confused. “Well, they aren’t good. You’d understand if you were a Jedi.” the Master explains. “So, this is goodbye?” “Yes this is goodbye.” your mom says, sobbing.
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“Bye mom, I love you.” “I love you too.” Revan turns away from your mom, walking towards you. “Bye.” “Huh?” “I’m leaving.” “No your not.” You don’t understand whats happening. “Okay, well give me hug, will ya?” “Um, okay.” you say with a confused look on your face. “Bye.” “Um, bye.”
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Revan turns away from her sister. “Are you ready?” Kreia asks. “Yes, I am.” Kreia motions her to the door. Revan walks out, not looking back. As Kreia closes the door, Revan hears, “She’s taking Rev!!!”

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4 Responses to “Kotor 3, Part Five. “She’s taking Rev!!!””

  1. RevanBodyguard says:

    Whoa! i love this story the best!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    wow!!!!!!!! i hope there’s more to this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    when a old lady smiles at you, you know something bad is gonna to happen!

  2. MaggOnasi says:

    *Kills RevanBodyguard*
    Sorry, dunkness goes to my head… but its not beer, its soda ‘sprit’
    I loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee this one! Make more!!

  3. Darth Shiin says:

    Okay, but flashback or Kryt Dragon pearl?? Also I’m happy about you drunk with sprite but don’t have too much.

  4. MaggOnasi says:

    sprite is gooooooooddddddddd…
    Flash back o_O sounds cool… I meant the word… jk

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