Re: A New Begining
Sorry about that guys. Are we still goin with this?
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3,681 2009-09-11 21:12:02
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3,682 2009-09-11 22:19:39
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I am waiting for starr to return.
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3,683 2009-09-15 16:37:14
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Sorry, I haven't been on at all. I'm having loads of issues right now and just couldn't find the time to get on and tell everyone what's going on. Sorry. 
Ready to continue when you guys are. Your post LSM.
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3,684 2009-09-15 19:37:39
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I am just glad that you are back Starr. 
B)
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3,685 2009-09-15 21:50:42
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Hey everybody... sorry lots of stuff has been happening, plus the site was not letting me log on... strange...
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Wake up. You were dreaming. What's your name?
3,686 2009-09-15 23:38:18
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( 2 soldiers bring Lori to the Bridge and hold her in frount of Revan)
Thor: Revan, Lori has been tranked before she was brought to the Bridge.
Thor: (Walks and stands next to Revan)
3,687 2009-09-17 21:31:31
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Daan takes the controls and pilots the ship through the Mandalorian formation.
Daan: "Blast! The ships are too close, we can't avoid them. We'll have to fly right by them! I hope they can't pick up this cloak at that close range!"
The fighter passes dangerously close to the Mandalorian ships, at times barely missing the tracers of their blaster cannons.
((Meanwhile))
The Republic fleet presses the Mandalorian's right flank, delivering a crushing assault.
Yi'shar opens the communications control panel and scans the configuration.
"There has to be some way around that jammer. The Council has to be informed of what happened"
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3,688 2009-09-18 15:36:14
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Jest... no contact with Revan please. She has other things to worry about now. Besides, Lori hasn't been brought to the bridge just yet.
LSM need you to bring in Kavar (giving him over to you for now) and two other Jedi Masters (make them up since the Sith has to kill two more anyway ((total of seven Jedi Masters survived to be on the Jedi Council in KotOR II)). Vandar senses the Sith through the Force thus sends Kavar and two of his other most promising Jedi Masters to deal with the Sith infiltrator. So... step out somewhere in front of the Sith as he makes his way down the hall and give some awesome little speechy thing. 
K?
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...Destiny's Pawn, lower decks; Project [classified] Control Room...
Control Officer: 100% firing cpacity. Ready to fire on command...
...Destiny's Pawn, bridge...
*A Captian walks onto the bridge, his footsteps echoing in the awkwardly silent room. He stops a few yards behind Revan and bows respectfully.*
Trooper Captain: Mi'lady?
*Revan does not turn but instead merely waves her hand, telling the soldier to continue. He does so.*
Trooper Cpatain: Mi'lady... it seems we've captured on old friend of yours. A Commander Lori.
*Revan growls at the name. It was a threat. Her only true threat. She turns to face the Trooper Captain, her hands clenching into fists at her side.*
Revan: Brind her to the bridge... immediately.
*The Trooper Captain bows again, respectfully.*
Trooper Captain: It will be done at once, mi'lady.
*He turns and leaves. Orak moves to stand in his stead.*
Orak: Mi'lady...
*Revan turns back to the bridge's massive glass windows, watching as the Republic and Mandalorian Fleets collide in an epic battle. Her hands slowly relax.*
Revan: This war, Orak... -this battle they fight now- will be remembered for thousands of generations. It will be recorded in the history of the Republic, the Jedi, the Mandalorians...
*She trails off... a sigh...*
Revan: What will they call us, I wonder? Traitors? Murderers? Heroes... or Villians?
*Orak senses a weak point. Revan was... unsure of her decision.*
Orak: They will call us... the Saviors of the Republic, mi'lday.
*Revan gives a faint chuckle.*
Revan: Will they now?
*Revan watches the battle rage on. She smiles evilly, looking back over her shoulder at Orak, her orange-red eyes flarring in the empty white face.*
Revan: Well we'll just have to change that won't we?
*She looks back at the window, stepping forward.*
Revan: Get the rest of the leet out of range, Commander. Let's end this war.
...Kyra, bridge...
Pilot: Sir, we're tracking the ship now. We just picked up a good signal off one of our Barricade Assault ships, sir!
Maks: (growls) I want that ship...
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Meanwhile
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*Depsite the heavy onslaught from the Republican fleet the Mandalorian fleet manages to stay in order and as far as everyone can see, mostly intact. It would appear that they upgraded just more than their shielding and armament.*
*The Republic Main Fleet, however, is in tatters without Revan to lead the assault.*
...Republic Main Fleet...
...Punisher-class Heavy Assault Cruiser For the Glory; bridge...
Ship AI: Warning: Unidentified ground contact. Mass energy readings. Request recall of all ground units.
...Rogue IV...
Xvan: I'm confused by all of this...
Akson: You and me both, buddy.
Xvana: It's quite simple really.
...Coruscant, Jedi Temple...
*Movement... Jedi Masters. He smiles to himself as he turns down another hall, towards his main target. They would not stop him.*
3,689 2009-09-18 20:03:38
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Okay, I understand.
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Thor: (Walks down to the bay where Lori has been brought)
Thor: It has been a long time Commander Lori, How have you been doing?
Thor: (Starts laughing)
3,690 2009-09-29 13:49:22
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That's a loooong post Starr. 
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3,691 2009-09-29 14:49:40
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I know but good right?
Revan was holding onto some small hope in the back of her mind somewhere. Hope, that after all she was doing the end would justify the means. But in that moment of uncertainty... in that brief moment of weakness... Revan's fall to the darkside was completed:
"Revan: What will they call us, I wonder? Traitors? Murderers? Heroes... or Villians?
*Orak senses a weak point. Revan was... unsure of her decision.*
Orak: They will call us... the Saviors of the Republic, mi'lday.
*Revan gives a faint chuckle.*
Revan: Will they now?
*Revan watches the battle rage on. She smiles evilly, looking back over her shoulder at Orak, her orange-red eyes flarring in the empty white face.*
Revan: Well we'll just have to change that won't we?"
We're nearing the end of the Battle at Malachor V; the end of the Mandalorian Wars and the fall... of the Old Republic.
Just need LSM to come on and post. Wherever he is...
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3,692 2009-09-29 19:26:46
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Thor: (Points at a group of Soldiers)
Thor: Men, escort Lori here to the Force Cells on Deck 3.
Soldiers: (Salute and takes Lori to the Cells and locked her into Cell 3 on Deck 3)
Thor: (Com to Revan) Revan, Lori is in Cell 3 on Deck 3 with a 5 soldiers guarding the cell door and I have another 5 guarding that cell block. Do you need me back on the Bridge or do you want me to go to the Lori's cell to find out any info that she may have?
3,693 2009-11-19 18:15:41
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I'm going to go ahead and post here so you guys can continue whenever Starr returns.
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**Daan manages to break through the Mandalorian fleet and flies towards Norad's ships. The heat signature from the engine increases and the Mandalorian scopes pick up Daan's ship. But by now he is out of range of their tractor beams and would soon escape their guns. As laser bolts flash around him, Daan manuevers the fighter through the crossfire towards the capitol ship.**
Bridge officer: Col. Norad, we're receiving an emergency transmition from a fighter that is approaching the fleet. it's requesting immediate docking priority.
Col. Norad: That must be the last remnant of the strike team that was sent in. Give them clearance to land.
((Meanwhile))
**Four Jedi Masters sit meditating in the council chambers of the Jedi Temple. Among them are Jedi Master Korin and Jedi Master Lurto. Suddenly they sense a dark presence in the temple, and feel the life drain from one of their Jedi companions.**
Korin: The war has reached us. Revan has brought its evil to our very doorstep.
Lurto: Quickly, we must alert the Jedi in the temple and gather the guardians. Who knows what we may be facing!
I Am Jedi
3,694 2009-11-19 22:11:20
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i have read this from the beginning and i got lost a lot it has a million places it is just confusing
I'm black....wait thats not right
3,695 2009-11-20 16:26:53
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yeah me to it is just hard to understand you know hat i mean
3,696 2009-11-20 16:50:35
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yes, but the story we're in doesn't start on page one. that one died and a new story was started later.
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3,697 2009-11-20 19:50:58
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oh now i get it
3,698 2009-11-26 00:19:47
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Yeah and now we are waiting on Starr.
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oh
3,700 2009-12-09 19:09:06
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I'm back!!!!
Hey, LSM, have them meet Kavar in the hallway and them be on their way to Master Vandar's room. I'll have them run into my Sith assassin. 
Quick question... who's got control of Carth and Atton?
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The Trooper Captain walks into the room. "No, Commander Revan wishes to see the Jedi on the bridge. You are to come as well," he adds looking at Thor.
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Meanwhile
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Revan's main fleet has all but retreated from the main battle, her fleet completelty out of range from any incoming fire. But the fleet moves further still...
For a brief moment the Mandalorians think they've won... for a moment the Jedi sense something beyond the darkness. A hope. Perhaps Revan is not as powerful as they had thought.
But suddenly, everything comes crashing down around them. A large electronic blast errupts from Malachor V and sweeps past the entire remaining Mandalorian fleet as well as that of the Republic's fractured fleet. It begins to fade as it reaches Norad's fleet but grazes the few ships on his outer defenses.
Thousands of screams are heard in an instant as systems begin to fail and as all that were caught in the horrible blast begin to be sucked into what remains of Malachor V.
...Republic Main Fleet...
...Punisher-class Heavy Assault Cruiser For the Glory...
The ship's AI speaks up again. "Warning: All systems failing. Immed-"
...Kyra, bridge...
Maks quickly gets back to his feet, knocked to the ground by the violent blast that errupt just seconds ago from Malachor V. "What was that?!" he yells.
The pilot fumbles with his speech, trying to fix the ship. "Sir, scans show our systems are failing and rapidly..."
Maks takes a step towards the pilot, fuming. "Well, you better fix them, damn it!"
The pilot tampers with the main compiter. "I'm trying, sir..."
Maks looks at the large view screen. "Fason! Report!"
Fason's image appears on the screen, distorted by static. "Systems- rapidly- sir- power- to- much- longer-"
Maks growls as the view screen suddenly goes fully static. "Damn, those Republic bastards! They tricked us!"
A voice behind Maks startles everyone on the bridge. "No... they didn't trick you..."
Maks turns to face the large Mandalorian behind him, dressed in bulky armor.
"They used your own hate... your own lust for battle against you. You let your own thirst for blood blind you. You... did this to yourself," he finishes as a lightsaber barrel slides indiscretly into his bulky hand.
...Col. Norad's ship...
The pilot fumbles with the ship's computers. "Sir, we just lost contact with four of our ships! Preliminary scans show all systems have failed..."
...Rogue IV...
Xvan and Akson suddenly fall to their knees, trying to cover their ears as if some loud noise is causing them extreme pain.
...Coruscant, Jedi Temple...
Another movement in the force. Two more Jedi Masters. He smiles. He would not fall here. He couldn't. His future had been fortold, and he had all but grasped it. No, it would not end here...
