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Likely, he'll convince Kayl, and Konah. Kayl's apprentice will join him willingly, and then later in the story Revan will give them a mission which is where most of the combat will happen.
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I believe that will be a really good story and I can't wait to read it.
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Also if you need any help with plot ideas I will be happy to help in anyway. 
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Awesome! Thank you, Noonian Sector was made up as I went, and I wrote it in two days. So yeah maybe a tad more planning for this next one
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Sounds good.
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I know how it will begin, figuring out the middle part still, and I know how it's going to end.
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So you know the beginning and the end but you are having trouble filling in the meat of the story, I find that if you write mini stories for each of your main characters that it will lead all the mini stories together before you get to the end. This may work in your case and it may not work but you never know until you try.
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I think I have a a full plan now xD It's gonna be sweet. I'm sure you'll love it.
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Sounds good and I bet I will like it.
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Konah wrote:
There was a plot twist that when I wrote it, even I didn't expect it.
Happens to me all the time. Especially in New Beginning. I keep trying to throw George off. 
Konah wrote:
Angered at being the victim of first blood, the apprentice reached out to the Dark Side. Allowing anger to overwhelm the pain he pushed outward with the Force...
My thoughts as I read this: "Ooh... he's using blood magic! Bad mage. No blood magics."
Seriously though. Reminded me of DA... and that just makes it a hundred times better.
Konah wrote:
“My Lord Kaz’Dar. I hope we aren’t...interrupting your group therapy?”
Group therapy may help resolve their anger issues...
...
As for the story as a whole: It is absolutely amazing. I love it. It's been a while since I've read some Star Wars fan fiction and this was so beautifully written. You really do have a talent.
I always get stuck on fight scenes. I never know how to word them or describe them properly but you do a fantastic job. And you don't describe too much. Some people do that and it draws away from the story. I catch myself doing it and have done my best to make amends.
All in all, marvelous job. I applaud you.
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Wow! Thank you Starr that was a lot to me. I think your writing is fantastic, and was kind of worried going into writing this story for sure. I'm glad you all like it, and I hope the other two will live up to this one
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Did I hear Trilogy in your post.
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Konah wrote:
I think your writing is fantastic
Oh, shush. You'll make me blush.
Konah wrote:
... was kind of worried going into writing this story for sure.
Well, you pulled through marvelously. Well done.
Konah wrote:
I'm glad you all like it
What can I say? A well written story is likable.
Konah wrote:
I hope the other two will live up to this one.
So we can expect more from you in the future? Smashing.
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I say they will be really good like the first is.
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I actually got a reply from Drew Karpyshyn. It helped me out a bit with how the second one is going to go, I just need to read the comic books about Revan and Malak, and stick as close to canon as possible.
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Screw canon. Fanon is where it's at. ^_^
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Starr would know.
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George, Clicky clicky.
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What are you talking about?
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She wants me to "click" on her Just kidding, only now I'm reading her story. So far it's good 
