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Leina hid her disappointment when she couldn't read what was going inside Riordan's mind. But her interest dispersed when the Pilot's found that distress signal. Mandalorians sending out a distress signal? Either that was a trap or something very bad must have happened here. She told that to Riordan but he thought the same so he just nodded. When the ship landed they went towards the ramp. Leina noticed that Slade was first to exit. Some soldiers were following him then Kain and Mat, and Leina and Riordan followed them.

She sensed a disturbance, and when she got out she notices a woman with two blue sabers fighting with. Slade defeated her almost to easy. She couldn't believe with her eyes how he fought. Finally he kicked her to her knees and holding her lightsabers against her neck. Suddenly someone shouted "Stop!" And Slade raised his head to see who dared to stop him...

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After Mat defeated him several times in a row, George gave up from playing. They shook hands and went together to the mess hall.

They sat and started eating. Mat wanted something to ask George but he couldn't got his courage up to do it.

"What is it Mat?" He probably noticed that he wanted to say so he just spited it out.

"Master George... What happened inside that stone. Where were you?" Mat now wished he didn't ask that question. He noticed something dangerous in George's eyes. Like he wished Mat didn't ask him that. But a speaker sounded up with the Pilot speaking through it: "All hands, prepare for landing."

George just stood up saying. "You go I must take something first." Mat didn't questioned that. He stood up and went to the ramp. He wondered what would have happened if this didn't interrupted them.

Kain, Slade and most of the soldiers were already there. Some of the soldiers nodded to him. He nodded back. He liked these guys.
Mat stoped by Kain and tapped him on the shoulder. "What's up, big guy?" When Kain gave him an annoyed look, Mat, again, wished he didn't do that.
Pff, at least there will be fighting. He sensed something strange waiting outside.

Slade didn't even wait for the ramp to fully open when he got out of the ship. Four soldiers followed him, two of them went left, other two right securing the perimeter. Out of nowhere a female Jedi appeared with two blue sabers attacking Slade. Why him? He wondered, she must have sensed he was too powerful. The fight ended up almost to quickly with Slade holding her two lightsabers against her neck. Just as Mat thought he was gonna kill her someone shouted: "Stop!" Mat turned to see who that was...

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George frowned when the pilot said they were landing. He said to Mat that he needed to find something, and Mat immediately went towards to ramp. George felt threatened when Mat asked him what happened after he touched the stone of memories. A sudden rage built up inside he. He was still surprised, why did he get angry at Mat. He was a good man.
Anyway, he stopped thinking about it and went to the medbay.
When he got inside, he dressed up in his Jedi Robes and took his silver lightsaber.

He wondered why has Slade helped him. Vampires never helped Jedi. It would be very hard even to force them. So what was it then?
He felt a disturbance in the force, and he could hear whispering in his head. Slade!

He ran as fast as he could to the ramp. Almost everyone has went down it. Only two soldiers remained to guard the pilots.
He went down the ramp and noticed Slade holding two blue sabers against ragged female Jedi. He immediately shouted: "STOP!" The command note in his voice surprised even him. It was something from his past life. He took his lightsaber. He didn't notice Mat who was staring at him. And Leina. Actually everybody was turning their heads from Slade to him.

He could feel the rage building up in Slade, and disbelief for he didn't expect someone would do that. Vampires don't like when you interrupt them in their feeding. But he wouldn't let him.
"Release her, Slade! Now!" George approached him to a lightsaber reach. He didn't sense fear from the woman. She was brave. But why did she attack Slade if she could sense that he was stronger than her.
The ruined Mandalorian outpost . He knew they must go there. Mat was standing a little behind George's left side, holding his saber in case Slade went crazy. Leina was still with Riordan, and most of the soldiers were staring at him. They thought everyone threatening the White Wolf must be crazy. But he wasn't.
Suddenly George opened his mouth and started speaking on that vampire language. "I will not grant you this kill, Slade! Release her!"

Everyone but Kain, Riordan and Slade understood what he said. Though George noticed the woman's mouth open in surprise. So she probably knew it too. Slade, still filled with rage started to cool, he deactivated the lightsabers and let them fall down by the woman. He took a step back.
George still holding a lightsaber in his right hand approached the woman who was still on her knees. He reached with his left hand for her hood and pulled it away from her face.
She blinked when he saw her face. He thought he knew her, but couldn't remember from where...
"Who are you?" He asked, his voice now becoming gentle...

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Wow... this was hard for writing. I didn't think of a another way to make Slade back away. Hope I didn't mess up

Anyway after the woman introduces herself, you can have George ask her why did she attack Slace or what is she doing here. Or something else. Youc choice.

Notice* There are 22 soldiers on the ship, 3 pilots and 6 of our characters. There are some things stored on the ship like rocket launcher, heavy repeating blaster, distruptors and other heavy weapon stuff. There is even a nuclear missile on it (don't ask xD ). The ship is equipped with blasters and missiles. It also has a blaster turret when the ship is grounded. Just thought it might be useful to you.

P.S. If you want you can rewrite sentence which George said in Vampire language to really be in Vampire language

Anyway, your turn Your Highness

I really liked that part with Mortis. It gives you much to think about. Nice job But I got bored of the ship so let's say they will arrive on Ordo in the next post. In this one I'll just say they jumped out of hyperspace.

Fancied up post of mine?
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George stared at Slade, he just knew they would fight one day. "As you wish, Slade." Why the Vampire has helped him was beyond him, but he'll deal with that problem later. He turned and went to sit with Mat.
Mat sensed that George was not in the mood, so they started playing pazzak in silence. For a moment there, George looked at Kain feeling sadness. One day, he will be forced to even him. He hated it...

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Leina entered the cockpit somewhat angry, but she tried not to show it. "Riordan, someone has healed George. He didn't want to tell me who. But I was thinking it was Slade. And so was he, I'm sure." She frowned when she mentioned Slade's name. She also didn't like him.

One of the Pilots suddenly turned towards. "Ma'am we've jumped out of hyperspace. We're in orbit above planet Ordo." Riordan and Leina looked through the window at the desert planet. It was a wasteland.

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Short post... Didn't know what to write really

I was thinking since you like Mandalorians, you would want to write about Ordo. I don't really know much about it and you always have better ideas.

Russia!

drink

aftershave

Cool... I just wonder why Mortis doesn't want to strike at George's small company...

Ou, and I really liked that guy Dmitri. His looks and name matched perfectly. And I hate those twin brothers -.- Lol joking
Anyway here's the post just scroll a little downwards
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George felt very tired, but he figured he could rest on the ship, so he agreed with others. They should hurry. They said goodbye to the Gatekeeper and this small group went to the campsite where Leina's soldiers were.

On the way there nothing interesting happened. Slade was leading the way with Mat, who was almost carrying George, behind him. Then Leina and Riordan who were having a casual conversation, and with Kain watching his younger brother.

When they arrived at the camp. Leina went to give orders to her Captain, while others bordered the ship. Soon after several soldiers brought in some heavy weapons even one of those TAC missiles. George felt uncomfortable having that on board, but Leina was relentless so he gave up arguing. Dozen more soldiers entered the ship with a Pilot and his co-pilot. Almost everything was ready for take-off when George approached Leina.

"Hey," They were on the entrance to the ship. Leina turned to him not revealing any feelings and George was to tired to try and figure her out. "I feel very weak. Is there some place on the ship where I can rest?" She placed her hand on his forehead. He was hot but it wasn't like a fever. "Come." She said taking his arm. "I'll place you in med bay." She led him to the med bay, and laid him to rest on the med-bed. "You can rest here." She tried Force Healing once more, but again she felt some strange wounds she couldn't heal. After She left George turned to the side and started thinking about everything that has happened since he fought the Second. At least Shai'tan removed the poison from him. Then his eyelashes started to close...

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When the door from the medbay closed, Leina's captain found her. "Ma'am." He saluted. "Everything is ready. As ordered. the company will move to the compound and await your message." "Very well captain." She said and left towards the cockpit. Inside she found the Pilots and Riordan.

"Pilot, everythings ready. Take off and set a course for Ordo." The pilot nodded with one "Yes ma'am" He powered up the engine and soon the ship went into the orbit. Leina turned to cold Riordan. "May we speak, Lord Koga?"

Riordan nodded and showe with his hand towards the door. They exited the cockpit and once outside Leina spoke out. "I'm worried about George, he's not feeling very well at all. I'm not sure if we he needs only rest or..." She made a pause because she didn't know what to say. "I felt some strange wounds in him, like someone stabbed his soul with a knife. I don't know how to describe it." Her face gave away sadness for a little, but she quickly returned control.

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Mat was in the gathering room playing pazzak with some soldiers. He was winning actually, and the soldiers weren't happy about it. Kain was in the back of the room, but Mat was wondering where that guy Slade was. He didn't like him.

"Yo, Mat!" One of the soldiers addressed him. "You know where we goin'?" Mat raised his look carefully hiding his cards. Suddenly the room was very quiet, everyone was interested in what he will say. "Ordo..." Mat said quietly and he could heard that same word repeated on almost every mouth in the room, some even sweared. They knew that it was a Mandalorian planet. They will not get a warm welcome. "You know why we're going there?" The same soldier that asked him the first question asked him this. Mat looked at Kain before answering. He didn't know if it was wise to say everything to simple soldiers, but hey, even he didn't know everything. "I'm not really sure. Something about some artifact. You'll have to ask Lady Naberrie for details." That seemed to quench the soldiers curiosity, and also their appetite for gambling. So he was left alone at the table...

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A took more liberty than granted perhaps and had some soldiers come with the group. I thought some of your characters would object. But I think they might come in handy on a Mandalorian controlled planet.

Anyway, George will feel better after he had some rest, but Leina is not sure about that. I'll speak of those wounds in some later posts.

As for Mat, I think of him as a hear and soul of the company. He's like the guy who always get's in trouble and stupid things happen to him, and he always somehow finds a way out by luck (or skill)... Think of him like a Scoundrel with Force Powers

I wonder that too
And finally. I have been waiting to post this for days!

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        REVELATIONS

    What more could you ask from the world than to bring back your memories of past lives... Nothing... Everyhing else you must take  for yourself. But this... This comes at such a high price that most of men wonder... Is it worth it?

    A Jedi's life is sacrifice. Most people don't understand what that means. Only few of them did. One of them was George Kwei. Long ago, in a time of the first Jedi Knights. In a time when Force Vampires were unleashed onto the galaxy. They hunted these Vampires. Killed them as many as they could, bringing them to the verge of extinction. But they did not know the power of their king. The King struck back, spreding disease amongst the Elders and through the Force to the Jedi. The Elders were dying, and so were the Jedi. A handfull of them remained. And they went to the planet Naboo, to the ancient Elder Temple. There they performed a ritual that would make sure that one day they will be all brought back... To finish the fight.

    But something went wrong. George Kwei and the rest of the Jedi remained sealed and could not get out. The place started falling apart, until nothing but ruins and darkness remained.

    One day... Thousands of years later, George's soul was freed by a force unknown and he was brought back into life as a baby. But with no memories.

    There were Jedi who survived the Purge and they continued tha tradition of hunting these Force Vampires in secrecy. They were the Jedi who had families hidden from the order and they were passing that tradtion through it. One of those families was the Kwei family. James and Eleanor Kwei hunted down Razvan's soul partner and killed her. They didn't know that Razvan would come for them. They had a 18 year old daughter Serena and 5 year old son George. Razvan went to their home on Coruscant and killed them all but small George.

    It is uncertain if Razvan let him live on purpose, or did small kid somehow managed to escape. Either way, George found his way to the Jedi Temple and there he started his training as a Jedi. During those years George felt like there was something missing in his life. Often he would wander off alone to think about. Other kids started calling him Lonewolf, because he did everything by himself. He knew that there was something that he should know, like he need only to turn around and he would knew it. So he started searching for the truth.

    When he was 21, he learned about Force Vampires and thought of them to be Sith. He learned about one Force Vampire ,one called the Second, who was hunting through the streets of Coruscant. It took him a year to fing him. Or more accurately fot the Second to find George. They dueled and the Second proved to powerfull for George. During the duel George remembered something from his past that helped him balance the fight. Still... It wasn't enough. Thanks to the Seconds reclesness he managed to defeat him only to Razvan appear beetwen them, and saves Second. He spared George (again) but poisoned him. And George left to find the cure. He ended up on Naboo and something drove him to find the Ancient Temple of the Elders. Along the way he picked up few friends. Two Force Vampires Kain and Slade, And one that was deceased like him, Riordan. A lady from Naboo, Leina and one of her mercenaires, Mat, who will later become his apprentice.

    They wentured into the Temple. George had a few flashbacks from his past and at the final chamber where he performed that ritual thousands of years ago, he ended up sucked in the stone of Memories...

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    He woke up on the floor, everything smelled of death and suffering around him. He opened his eyes and saw that he was in a some kind of a hallway. Stains of blood were everywhere. He stood up, and noticed that along the hallway there were stools with skulls on them. Creepy place. He couldn't see the either end of it, so he chose to go left. That was his unwritten rule. If you don't know where to go, go left.

    He was walking down the hall trying to avoid pools of blood, when he noticed prison bars on the right wall.  He approached it carefully and noticed a spacy room with a wooden table in the middle. A man was sitting on a chair writing something on a paper! With a quill! Strange... He was in a bloody red robes, had a long loose black hair. George found that odd and thought that this was somehow familiar to him. Just as he wanted to address the man, the man spoke out before he could open his mouth.

    "I was expecting you, George." He turned around and George took a step back. Fire was coming from his eyes and mouth. Terrifying.

    "I see you don't remeber me. I'm Shai'tan!" George felt something shaking in his head, but it soon stopped. He smiled and fire poured out of his mouth.

    "The Dark One..." George just said. He remebered. "There are two evils in this world. You and Mortis. You were sealed. But he wasn't. And we are now in the..." George couldn't bring himself to speak out the name...

    "Bore." The Dark One said evily. "Time flows differently here. If there is such a thing. Human perceptions are so limited. But you knew all this. Let me remind you." The Dark One stared at him as George begun to feel great pain. He was groining and soon screaming as he felt thousand of needles stabbing into his body. It only lasted for a second. But George thought that an eternity has passed.

    He slowly started to remeber things he did. His past lives... "You!" George stood up, and looked at Shai'tan with hate. "You imprisoned us!"

    The man in bloody robes smiled... "Did I? You asked for power to defeat Vampires. You must have known what would have happened." The Dark One made a significant pause to study George. " You knew that it was evil what you seek. And once I gave it to you, you refused, so you were cursed with an eternal life. And know you serve ME!"

    George couldn't listen anymore, so he went to the nearest stool, used the force to throw away skulls and sat on it. He had disbelief in his eyes. He was shocked. Still procesing all those memories, things that he had done.

    Drihten, beyond the 8th gate were hell resides, in this prison for the Dark One. Long ago the Creator, God of the Force or whatever you want to call it, imprisoned him here. But from time to time Shai'tan could reach out into the world and toucht the very evil that lies in it. There was another one, called Mortis, George didn't know how he came to be, but some were suspecting that he was a Jedi once.

     Finally George admited his past. "I was poisened by this Razvan. I must kill him... I must kill all Force Vampires. Every single one of them. I lost everything to them." George said with hate.

    The Dark One had a evil grin. He was the very embodiment of evil and yet George somehow works for him, he couldn't remeber how. Shai'tan approached the bars and looked directly at his eyes. "You know your tasks..."

    George lowered his gaze and said: "I know. Exterminate the Force Vampires, kill Mortis, create a secret order that will supposedly serve the Creator, and stay out of Jedi conflicts."

    "Very good." The Dark One nodded, content that he needn't bother restoring his pawn's memories. "But there is one more task that I'm giving you."

    George raised his head to look at the fiery eyes. He hated everything in this place. He remebered know. His life was connected to the Dark Ones. If Dark One dies, he dies. How did that came to be?

    "Your friends have succeded in finding the first key to Drihten. Sooner or later they will find a way to it. You will go with them, enter the Drihten, and find a way to release me. If you don't..." Shai'tan didn't finish the threat, and he didn't have to. George already knew what will happen.

    "I will..." George said and stood up to bow before him.

    "One more thing." The Dark One said. "Approach me." George was wondering what was he up to, but he obeyed and went towards the prison bars. The Dark One reached out with his hand and placed it on the Jedi's head. Suddenly the Jedi started feeling pain, but he couldn't move, like he was paralyzed. Then he saw, a black smoky thing coming out of his skin. Razvan's poison! Shai'tan got it out of him. The pain stopped, he was released and he slundered back to the stool.

    George just looked at the Dark one not knowing what to say and he faded out into the real world. Leaving the Dark One alone. He was staring for a moment at the stool where the Jedi was sitting and then turned around. Suddenly a scared woman appeared in the cell. He was going to have some fun...

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    A shockwave erupts from the pillar-like altar.  A bright flash, then a loud thunder coming out of nowhere. Riordan, Slade, Kai, Mat, Leina and the Gatekeeper stared as George's body fell to the ground from the point where the flash appeared. He groaned a little so Leina went towards him.
   
    She crouched by him and placed her hands on his head. He still didn't turn around and his eyes were closed. Healing energy entered into George, and Leina could "sense" him. There was something different about him, like he was older... much older, and some wounds... she couldn't heal them. When she broke the physical contact, George gasped and opened his eyes, he turned on his back. Leina's face was right in the path of sun, the sun's glare made her look even more beautiful.
   
    "You knew my family..." he just said. Leina backed away shocked...
   
    "You know what happened in our visions?" she said still in shock. George nodded, and tried to get up but failed, he was still a little weak so Mat and Riordan approached to help help him.
   
    Mat smiled and said: "I would appreciate if you would keep my vision to yourself." George smiled back, and shook his head a little, then looked at Riordan... His vision was the worst... "I guess everything is true but the end, Riordan?"

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This is maybe too much for the story. There few points in this text that you may consider that are ruining it (especially that part where Shai'tan removes the poison from George). If that's the case I can remove it...

Covenant xD