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(425 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)

Darth Atrian,Jul 16 2009, 12:00 AM wrote:

Lureik: No Sev, I don't think this will be a "milk-run." Revan is lost or i'm afraid *sighs* well he may have died. I don't know, i can still sense life through him and the force but it seems like it is fading. Whatever it is, we need to find out, and find out quickly before something monstrous happens to the Galaxy and the Republic.

*looks at Sev in a worried emotion*
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Sev: I understand. I don't know anything about the force, but even I know somethings not right. People are scared. Something is moving in the Outer Rim, something dark. I've heard some pretty wild stories lately about ships disappearing from safe trade routes, strange lights and anomolies, you name it. But where do I even start looking? It could take thousands of years to search the entire Outer Rim for one man. I need to know where to start? What do you know about Revan's intentions when he left?

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(4,277 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)

Sorry, thought he had expired already. haha.

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*Daan turns and faces Zorvon, standing over his broken body*

Daan: It's over Kovasn. Goodbye.

*Daan's lightsaber hilts fly off of his belt, ignite, and stab through Zorvon's body. Daan walks over, pulls the blades out of the Kovasn's body, and with a swift stroke severes Zorvon's head from his body.*

*He turns back to Atrian*

Daan: We've wasted enough time here. I wanted to stop Revan, but she's made it back to her ship already. They will active the Shadow Generators soon, and the planet will be completely consumed. We have to leave now!

((Meanwhile))

Col. Norad: The Mandalorians are in position now.

Yi'shar: Move the fleet back. Give them the illusion that you are retreating, and draw them after you. When the Shadow Generators are activated, it will create a vacuum that will draw the Mandalorian ships back to the planet, but your fleet will be at a safe enough distance to remain unaffected.

Col. Norad: *turns to the pilot* Make it so.

Pilot: Aye Colonel.

*a communications technician enters the bridge.*

Tech: Sir, we're receiving massive communications from the rest of the fleet wanting to know what is happening. And Republic command has also contacted us, demanding to know what is going on.

Yi'shar: I'll handle it. *Yi'shar walks towards the communications console.*

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(101 replies, posted in The Old Republic Cantina)

The Silver Zepher,Jul 14 2009, 06:13 PM wrote:

yeah i think ur rite. but for some reason that tower just strikes at me for some reason. im unconditionally committed to this and i cant help it. i think its trying to evovle to obsession status with me.
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Yeah. I'm not against the tower per se, I just think it should be put somewhere else.

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(93 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)

you been posting up a storm bud.

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(4,277 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)

Daan: No time. We've got to go, now. Revan is gone, I can feel it. There's no way that we can stop her now. We have to find Marx and head back to the fleet.

*picks up his lightsabers, and hides the crystals*

Daan: Let's go.

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(93 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)

Darth Atrian,Jul 12 2009, 05:52 PM wrote:

These are the members that i respect and are my buddies:

LSM
Starr
Jester
Atrox
Hovoth
Ferret
Rhyykol

you guys and gal are amazing. big_smile
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Thanks dude.

Zeph, why you feel like you gotta make those comments, huh? you coulda gone without saying anything like that.

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(4,277 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)

Yi'shar: Don't worry, Colonel. The Mandalorian fleet is also moving. They picked up your fleet when you broke from formation and now they are positioning to split the Republic fleet. By the time Revan's ships power their shields and weapons, the Mandalorian ships will be positioned between us and your men will be in no danger. The Shadow emittor will also be activated within moments, and by the time that happens, we will be able to fall back out of range and contact the Republic command."

Srgt: Sir, movement of the Mandalorian fleet confirmed. They are trying to break our center and divide our fleet.

Col. Norad: *looks at Yi'shar* You'd better be right about this Jedi.

((Meanwhile))

Daan: Die Kovasn. Fade into oblivion along with the rest of the servants of the darkside.

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(120 replies, posted in The Old Republic Cantina)

well, things are a little slow now Zeph. Hi there.

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(425 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)

Sev follows the Jedi Master out of the room. His eyes shift from side to side, warily taking in everything. With a glance he takes in all of the surroundings, and turns his attention to the Jedi.

"That was quite an introduction to an assignment back there," Sev says. "Just a guess but this isn't going to just be a milk-run, is it? The last time you sent me after Revan, it took me four standard months just to locate his flagship. And then getting Bastila and her team on the ship nearly cost me my prize ship."

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(484 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)

Vector runs out the door behind Sara. Yi'shar shakes his head. "Great, that's all we need," and follows the two down the hall and out of the building.

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(28 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)

haha, it's all good. that was like 2 years ago remember. hehe

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(4,277 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)

Col. Norad: *looks at Yi'shar again, then walks to the main control station* Step aside Captain.

*He begins workin on the computer*

Col. Norad: Master Jedi, all of my ships are outfitted with master override command consoles. It is only to be used in extreme emergencies, and can only be activated by one person, the fleet commander. This ship alone has the controls to my fleet. Each fleet is set to a specific frequency, and none can cross control the other fleets. I'm initiating an override retreat command.

*the command goes through, and the fleet pilots lose control of their craft. Norad's ship alone controls his ships now*

Col. Norad: *turning back to Yi'shar* I hope you  realize that by doing that, my career as a Colonel in the Republic Space fleet is over now. As soon as the Republic command hears of this, I'll be facing a court martial.

Yi'shar: The Jedi council will be on your side, Norad. Revan has fallen to the darkside, and her orders are now meaningless. She has been stripped of her authority, though not of her power. You have done the best thing for your men. We will need them again very soon, I'm afraid, and that's why Revan wanted them dead.

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Darth Atrian,Jul 12 2009, 02:55 PM wrote:

i'm pretty sure he is love tied with his girlfriend. so don't be surprised yeah i'll ask him if he is coming back. haha what ya think of it Starr?
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Haha, funny, Atrian, but you're about right. hehe lol  B)

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(425 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)

hey, sounds good man.

Name: Sev Calmen

Race: Human

Age: 33

Homeworld: Unknown.

Background: Calmen is a successful smuggler and bounty hunter, basing his operations out of a small station on the icy planet of Rhen Var. He was hired by the Republic as a transport pilot at the outset of the Mandalorian wars, and was then recruited by the Jedi to gather intelligence and report on Revan's activities. Revan disappeared soon after the battle of Malachor V and Sev's mission became finding out what happened to Revan and Malak, and investigate the strange disappearences or abductions of Jedi knights.

Affiliation: Republic/Jedi; but no force capabilities.

Weapons: Modified blaster rifle/rocket launcher; dual vibroswords; wristblade gauntlets; sometimes a modified sniper rifle

Ship: A small cruiser used for smuggling. Sev incorperated stolen technology from Mandalorian Battledroid ships, making it faster and more manuverable than other cruisers in its class. Sev also upgraded the shielding and weapon systems to make it a deadly gun ship. He also added a new exo-skin technology that keeps IR output to a minimum and absorbs scanner frequencies, making it very difficult to detect.

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(484 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)

Vector looks at Sara for a moment. "Alright. We should probably go find Rane. Yi'shar?!"

Yi'shar emerges from his room. "I'm right here, you needn't yell"

Vector, "Let's head to the ship. I'm sure Rane is getting tired of waiting for us by now."

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(4,277 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)

Col. Norad: *looks at Yi'shar, then turns to the pilot* Take the ship out of range of the planet. Have the fleet fall back to a safe position.

Pilot: But sir our orders...

Col. Norad: You have your orders, pilot. Make it so!

*the fleet begins to move back from Malachor V.*

((Meanwhile))

*Daan holds his blade to Zorvon's throat.*

Daan: Give it up, Kovasn. It's not worth it!

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(28 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)

you're very welcome man. glad to help out. that was a lot of fun.  B)

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(31 replies, posted in Knights of the Old Republic II)

hahahaha, nice. Interesting Starr............interesting. haha lol

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(33 replies, posted in Star Wars Universe)

haha, probably true tho. lol lol

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(410 replies, posted in Star Wars Universe)

we have two Sith Lords, actually. speaking of which, where is Atrox? has he been around?