fan fiction scrollDarth Nihilus’s new apprentice part 3 Visas Marrs defeat

 Exile (Male/Dark Side)Revan (Male/Dark Side)Star Wars

Wait hold it! the Exile shouted. Behind them a sith figure activated his lightsaber. You can’t defeat me Exile I am Darth Nihilus’s new apprentice! shouted the sith. Go Visas. You and Canderous go to where Nihilus is. I’ll hold this sith off. Hurry! shouted the Exile. Yes master said Visas. The door closed behind them. I hope my master dosen’t die. Visas thought out of fear.

The Exile effortessly defeated and killed the so-called new apprentice of Darth Nihilus. As he felt the siths death he absorbed the dark side energy and sent a ripple in the force leaveing only dark power that could be sensed with the force effectivelly fakeing his death. He smiled. If only I could see Visas Marrs face right now I’ll bet it’s priceless. He thought enjoying himself yet with a slight regret after all he did love her.

Visas Marr and Canderous Ordo walked to where Nihilus was. He was surrounded by several of his half-dead looking men but there where two other figures standing behind two Pillars that conceled them in shadows makeing both Visas and Canderous unable to make them out. Then Visas fell down barely able to stand in complete horror and saddness because she just felt (what she thought was) the Exiles death. No. She said softly. She got up as Canderous came over wondering what the heck was wrong. The Exile is dead she said in Tears. Come one lets finish this. She said in rage made more evident by her dark side disfigured face. Canderous followed her makeing a conceled thought, She doesn’t know whats coming. You will pay for destroying the Exile Nihilus! Visas shouted. Darth Nihilus was amused by this by decided not to reveal about the exile just yet. Oh I don’t think so. He said using the force to throw Visas against the right wall. And as she got up he said Allow to you two people whom you couldn’t stand a chance against. Then the two figures walked out of the shadows in to view. Visas was completly dumbstruck and horrified as she saw them both. One was unmistakeable whom she recognized as Darth Reven who had not only reclamed his title of dark lord but also reclamed the Star Forge which was now produceing literlly millions of sith war and interdictor ships. But what horrified her even more was the other figure whom she didn’t know at all. What was so horrifing was that he looked similar to a krath war droid but organic inards inside his chestplate as well as yellow reptialian eyes that looked of pure evil. You don’t stand a chance aganst us! Darth Revan said triumphatly. Show the blinded weakling what you can do Griveous. said Revan. With pleasure lord Revan. said Griveous. His voice was the most evil voice Visas had ever heard. Then he pulled out what was seeminly two light sabres. Visas stared in disbelief at the lightsabers. How was he able to wield lightsabers? He was a cyborg! A nonforce senceitve cyborg! But while that left her completly shocked, and what left her completly dumbstruck was him spliting his arms apart reveling not two but FOUR lightsabers, what happend next was something she could never have emagined. To say she was completly dumbstruck and completly horrifed was a major understatement. He spread out his arms and then his upper arms started spinning at an extremely fast rate and formed two whirring lightsaber sheilds and as he walked to where she was they begain sliceing the foor wherever he went which was getting close to where she was standing. Much to her horror he suddenly lept at her all four of his lightsabers whirrling. Needless to say she couldn’t defend herself from his attack. He sent her lightsaber flying, crashed into her, kicked her in the gut (which was very painful), put her lightsaber in range of his lightsabers, and scliced it in several pieces, stopping just short of sliceing all of her limbs off. She then fell on the ground hurt badly, horrifed just how close she was to having her arms and legs scliced off her body. She lay on the ground looking at the three in complete almost insain horror.

Darth Nihilus, Darth Revan, and General Griveious looked at the defeated blinded weakling with mockery and contempt. Darth Nihilus then spoke to her. Pathetic He said. AGGGH! You will pay for killing the Exile Nihilus! Visas Marr shouted. Darth Nihilus could only stare completly amused at her obliviousness and idoicy. You obviously do not know what happened to your Exile whom your completely in love with. He said mockingly I know enougth! I felt it! He was killed by your new apprentice! Shouted Visas. No Visas he said. HE IS MY NEW APPRENTICE! Nihilus shouted Triumpletly. Visas stared in horror and disbelife. No. She said quietly. That’s impossible! Look into your feelings you know it to be true! Said Nihilus. Realizing what he said was true she cried out Noooo! just before passing out.

Visas woke with a slight panic and then was in which could not explaine strangly calm. She was lying naked on some sort of operating table with both her arms and legs held secerly by for types of strong alloy cuffs. Right above her were droid arms holding pieces of some kind of armor possibly ready to graft to her flesh when some time came. Then the door opened reveling the Exile whom she loved. Don’t worry were not planning on grapthting that armor on you yet Visas he said with some slight hint of concern. Here I’ll release the cuffs. Thank you. Visas said happy that he came to release her and although she didn’t admit this to anyone else except him if there was anyone whom she liked appearing naked to or being naked with it was him. She certainly didn’t mind being naked as she went to hug him. They kissed. Let’s go he said as both of them headed to a door. He opened it. Inside were some lovely furneture and a wonderful bed. Shall we sleep in our bed now Visas? Visas was slightly confused but knew it was a great idea because she wanted be with him and much less importantly that she wasn’t wearing any clothes. Very well. She said. He then slipped into the bed always wearing his clothes whenever he slept which she didn’t mind. Being naked she didn’t even have to bother with undressing and got into the bed with him. They kissed each other and Visas hugged him as they went to sleep.

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