Comments on: War

By: JediMasterTahl

JediMasterTahl — Mon, 11 Feb 2008 23:58:42 +0000

I like the black lightsabers . . . I actually wrote a story once where my character had had black ones . . . but I deleted it. It was stupid, I think.

By: RevanBodyguard

RevanBodyguard — Mon, 11 Feb 2008 01:13:06 +0000

That’s totally understandable, Nihilus. We all get that quite often.

Darth Shiin, you could write whatever you want on here. Yes, you have my permission. It’s not you have to pay me or e-mail on our progress on our stories. I got tired writing about Asta and Corick anyway. I need more excitement in them.

By: Nihilus

Nihilus — Mon, 11 Feb 2008 00:18:18 +0000

*sigh*
Whatever.
They’re my stories. I appreciate constructive criticism, but don’t tell me how to write my stories. If you want, I can have nonstop violence and people dying. Carth can never come back, if that’s what you want. Sorry for being so harsh. I’m just REALLY defensive of my writing cause I put a lot of time into it. I think real hard, and it usually drains my brain power.

By: Darth Shiin

Darth Shiin — Mon, 11 Feb 2008 00:14:24 +0000

Umm… Bastila stastised Arden to kiss him…

Mira and Mical staring at eachother…

Mission and Ravenstrike… DEFINATELY on and off between them.

Sexual content doesn’t mean Sexual tension, THEY ARE WAY DIFFERENT!!!

By: Nihilus

Nihilus — Sun, 10 Feb 2008 23:09:04 +0000

RevanBodyguard: Ravenstrike will NOT appear in the next series. Atton and Norris…that situation kinda had to deal with someone had to watch the ship. :\

DarthShiin: Remember that this is a FANFICTION. Anything is possible. Arden=Revan. There was NO sexual tension in ANY of my stories. Otherwise, I’d rate them M.

To everyone: Ravenstrike is not currently scheduled in the next series. Mandalore, HK, Carth, and Arden are, in fact, dead. You’re not dreaming. Suggestions for the next series are appreciated. I have little idea for what may happen, but Ravenstrike will be absent, and at least one character will be revived. Something will happen with Azreth. That’s all the details I have for now.

By: Darth Shiin

Darth Shiin — Sun, 10 Feb 2008 23:05:12 +0000

I don’t think there are black sabers in StarWars.

Just Saying

By: Darth Shiin

Darth Shiin — Sun, 10 Feb 2008 23:04:23 +0000

RevanBodygaurd…

Can I write a little series called, “The Adventures of Kaster and —-”?

I decided to change the name of the daughter.

I’m asking for your permission.

By: Darth Shiin

Darth Shiin — Sun, 10 Feb 2008 23:00:40 +0000

Oh, and I’m crying since Carth died.

By: Darth Shiin

Darth Shiin — Sun, 10 Feb 2008 23:00:22 +0000

Okay, Carth and Mira married, impossible. =|

Arden dead, YES!!!!

I knida got sick of his on and off lightside darkside sexual tension with Bastila.

But yes, sad.

By: RevanBodyguard

RevanBodyguard — Sun, 10 Feb 2008 21:44:49 +0000

ouch! that was sooo sad!! and really good at the same time!!
but i think i’m getting a little tired of Ravenstrike, no offense. falling to the dark side and back again to the light side – that kinda gets boring after a while
poor Carth, Mandalore, and HK. Mandalore and HK didn’t have to die!
i wonder why Atton and Norris are always safe from the battle when their friends are fighting some horrible battle