fan fiction scrollThe Sound of Revenge Chapter 2

 Atton RandCarth OnasiExile (Female/Dark Side)

Notes:
Just saying, it will tell how Andria came back throughout the entire series.
Listen to I Don’t Love You while writing this

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The Sound of Revenge…
Chapter 2
Wonder What’s next….

Still on the Outer Rim….

“Jeez Atton, what happend with your flying? Atleast before you could put up a good landing.”

“Hey, hey, were inside a hanger, don’t say I have bad flying.”

“Okay. I’ll give you half credit for landing in the hanger.”

“Thank you.”

“Now, hurry up! I want to see Revan again.”

*******

“Dad, can we go get somthing to eat?” Dustil asked spinning his spoon on its top.

“No. We went last time, now we’re staying here.”

“Yeah, sweetie, can we please go get somthing?” Revan pleaded.

“I don’t know.”

“Please.” Hunter asked.

“Fine!”

“Thank goodness.” Dustil said standing up.

“No, you and Hunter are staying here.” Carth said picking up a few credits.

“Why?”

“Because I said so! Sit! Don’t talk to any strangers! Dustil, if you let someone in, don’t tell them your real names even if shes hot.”

Carth and Revan left and Dustil sat down.

“Great!”

“Great what?” Hunter asked.

“Im stuck in a room with you. If ‘my’ dad is the Admiral, wouldn’t we get a bigger house?”

“He’s our dad!”

“Whatever.”

A soft knock came at the door.

“I’ll get it.” Dustil said getting up.

He unlocked the door a pulled it open.

“Excuse me, is this where Revan and Carth live?”

“Um, yeah.”

Hunter couldn’t really see who was at the door, but for sure, it was a girl. Dustil moved out of the way and let a woman in who looked a bit older than Revan.

“Hello there.” The woman said with a smile.

“Hi!” Hunter said with a smile.

Hunter staired at her.

“What’s your name?” She asked.

Dustil looked at her belt that hung a lightsaber.

Hunter just sat there.

“I see. Im one of Revan’s friends.”

“Thats nice to know.” Dustil snorted.

“I don’t think this is a good time..”

“No, its not.”

“Tell Revan, Andria was here.”

“Ill be sure to give her the message.”

She left and Dustil shut the door.

“Shes a jedi!” He cried.

“You think?!”

“I don’t think shes anywhere near Revan’s friend.”

“Nither do I.!”

“Maybe shes a murderer! I hope I never become a murderer.”

*******

2 hours later….

“Where are they! Im so hungry!” Dustil complained.

Once again, someone knocked at the door.

Dustil got up and opened it.

“Sorry, their not here. Thanks for coming by!” Dustil said trying to shut the door.

She stopped it with her foot.

“Then i’ll wait.” She said walking in.

“Hi, again.” Hunter said with his fake smile.

“Hello. I didn’t get your name last time.”

Oh no. Shes using a mind trick on Hunter!

“My name is Hunter, Dustil here, this is my step brother.”

“Hunter, shut up!”

“I’m trying. See, he thinks your a murderer, and hes affraid he might become one himself .”

Dustil gave her a false smile then looked back to Hunter.

“Because your apart of somthing all terible and I hope the hell that hes wrong and im starting to get a little scared hes right.”

“Hunter!” Dustil groaned.

“Oh, don’t worry, I knew your mother a long time back.”

“I hope.” Dustil said leaning his head back.

“Um, how long have they been gone, Dustil?”

“About 2 hours.”

“Alrighty then.”

“How did you and my mom meet?” Hunter asked.

“Well, I was here on Telos, then I asked if I could come along.”

“Thats all?”

“No. We heard there were still sith out there so we went to find them. Revan, Jessica, and I got trapped inside the temple and we got split up. Jessica fought Sion and lost.”

“Is that how she died?”

“Anyways…” She continued trying to avoid Hunters question. “Revan came and called Atton in. We left Jessica in the temple and went back to the Ebon Hawk…”

“Our mom doesn’t like us in there.”

Dustil snorted.

“So we flew to Dantooine to meet Skythe. I left and met Crystal who was another jedi. She was about 14 and wasn’t fully a jedi so she asked me to train her. I did then left her.”

“Left her where?”

“I didn’t really leave her. I just let her go on adventures by herself.”

“What happend to her?” Dustil asked.

“She died.”

“How?”

“I don’t know the entire story.”

“Then how do you know she died?”

“I just do!” She said protectivly. “So, I came back to Telos and met Carth. He introduced me to Revan and she obviously knew it was me.”

“So what happend?”

“We went to defeat Sion. After that I left with Atton and started a new life.”

“Thats all?”

“Yeah, thats all.”

“Did you come here alone?”

“No, I came here with Atton and my daughter.”

“Atton?!” Hunter asked jumping up.

“Yeah. You remember our daughter, Aiedail.”

“Yes I do ma’am!”

“Oh good! Shes been talking about you the entire time we flew here.”

“Can I see her?”

“Shes asleep and I do think you should wait for Revan to get home.”

“Okay!” Hunter didn’t mind not seeing her right that second because he knew he would see her.

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One Response to “The Sound of Revenge Chapter 2”

  1. RevanBodyguard says:

    i liked this one also!
    but it seems to me that everyone i meet ends up dying
    it’s just a werid feeling…

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