fan fiction scrollMissing, Part 5

 Atton RandCarth OnasiExile (Female/Dark Side)

Notes:

Ok, done with Part 5, so that makes 2 more parts… that I might not write. Hope you enjoy it!!

Missing, Part 5
Falling of the Republic

After Alore brought Andria back to the Ebon Hawk crew, it was obvious Atton wanted Andria there. Atton would always talk to her and try to charm her with his ‘card tricks’. Jessica was forlorn, which was lurid. It was obvious Jessica didn’t want her there. Atton would alway reasure Alora that they were just fighting over him, but that just worried her more.

Andria was’nt lying when she said she could look after herself. Alora felt pretty bad for Mical. He was used for Andria’s dummy both ways.

“Alora, get up!!”

Alora shot up from her bed almost hitting the headlight hanging over her bed.

“Alora! Wake up!” Jessica yelled banging and possibly kicking the door.

Alora collapsed back into her pillow and threw the covers over her head.

“Alora!!”

That was the finnal yell, and kick.

The doors opend.

“For the love of the force!” Alora snarled.

Out of no where a light, but heavy weight landed on Alora stomach which sent Alora shooting up again.

“WAKE UP!!!!”

Alora frowned at Jessica.

“Thank the force your light, cause if you were heavy, I’d be crushed like a bug!”

Jessica just smiled.

“Thank the force ‘your’ light, because if you were heavy, I’d bounce off the Nar’ Shaddaa!”

“Jeez Jessie, I didnt mean that as an insult.”

“Oh, I know.”

“So, whats that big, important news you were gonna tell me?”

“It’s about Telos.”

“What about it? We were just there like, an hour ago.”

“We we’re an hour lucky before Telos was attacked by fracking sith! Telos, the entire planet went BOOM! I thought the sith wern’t around anymore since you took e’m down.”

“WHAT?!”

“Yeah, the entire planet went ka’ BOOM!! Did I make my point in that sentance? Everyone on the planet died!” Jessica said jumping off Alora.

Alora heard her, but pretended she didnt hear. She sat there with her head buried in her hands sobbing loudly.

“All those inoccent people died.” Jessica went on not hearing Alora. “Every last one of them, even the kids, dead. ‘Daddy, look, fireworks…..’ BOOM!! Its, for some reason fun saying boom.”

Alora sobbed louder.

“Yep, every last person, dead.” Jessica said still not hearing Alora.

That just made Alora cry oceans with more waves coming.

“You okay, Lora?”

“No.” Alora sniffed.

“Is it about Telos? Or is it about what I said. I was just trying to make a point that everyone died.”

“Both.”

“But its true! People died! Telos was a worthless planet anyways.”

That just made Alora cry harder.

“Look on the bright side Lora, we could go on another adventure, like old times! Ill be the Exile and you’ll be Revan, then we could go on adventures together!”

“Im too old!”

“Only a couple years older than me.”

“Yeah, but what about Malacore?”

“What about it? We can go back to our hunting days! Be those jedi we were before.”

Jessica nudged Alora. Alora ignored her.

“Ok. Ill go back to bed. When you lighten up a bit, we’ll talk again.”

Jessica left and Alora pulled the covers back ober her.

*******

Alora awoke the next afternoon. She walked out to the common room.

“Morn’in Alora.” Andria greeted her.

Atton and Andria were sitting at the table plaing pazaak. Atton was loosing badly.

“Look at that Atton!” Andria snickerd. “I won again!”

“Give it up Atton.” Alora said pulling up a chair next to Andria.

“No!” Atton snapped.

“Whoa, cool your engine! Just trying to help.”

“I win again!” Andria laughed.

Atton bunched up his cards.

“Im gonna go play with th trash compactor.”

“Good luck!” Andria called to Atton as he left.

“Hey Andria, did you hear about Telos?”

“Yeah, Atton told me.”

“Jessica doesnt want to go to Malacore anymore.”

“Oh? And where does she want to go?”

“I dont really know. Maybe she wants to finish off the sith, or whats left of them.”

“Interesting. Wanna play?” Andrian asked pointing to where Atton sat.

“No thanks. I think I would have better luck with T3.”

“Could’nt agree less.”

“Okay, that was either a complament to you, or an insult to me.”

“Both. I’ll go find Mira. She’ll fall for any jedi mind tricks.”

“Mind tricks? Only ones who learned in the ways of the force can do that.”

“Yeah…”

“That ‘jedis’ use.”

“Oh, hey, Mira!”

Andria ran off.

“Andria! What the heck?!”

Andria peeked around the corner.

“What?!”

“Mira is asleep, so is Mandalora, Mical, and Jessica.”

“What about Hk?”

“He cheats.”

“I’ll go fight Atton then.”

“He is so much taller than you.”

“So what? Hes plainly tall. Besides, he’s taller than you, but that didnt stop you.”

“That’s because im a jedi.”

“Here we go again.”

“What’s that sopose to mean?”

“‘Im a jedi, I can use the force and swing around a blade that lights up when I hit a button, blah, blah, blah’! Well ‘Mrs, High-and-Mighty’, doesn’t mean you ‘can’ beat Atton means I ‘cant’.”

“Don’t be so jelos Andria!”

“Don’t be so jelos?! Your the one being a stuborn, pigheaded, ignorant, gerk!”

Alora laughed.

“You probably didn’t know half the words you said.”

“So what?”

“Just go spar Atton already, gosh!”

“You used that sentance wrong!” Andria said trying to annoying Alora.

“No I didn’t!”

“Gerk!”

“Freak!”

*******

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2 Responses to “Missing, Part 5”

  1. RevanBodyguard says:

    I loved it so much, MaggOnsai! You’re the best! The whole I was reading this I couldn’t stop giggling and blushing! I felled the floor, holding my sides. I hope you write more like this one.There’s no way I write anything this… funny. Ha Ha Ha! oops! *falls down again laughing*

  2. MaggOnasi says:

    Nooo, but then we got in a fight…. even though the actuall virsion had us cursing eachother off….. OH WELL!!!!

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